What's that potential may I ask?What a waste of time with this game, the male character looks like a sissy crying because he saw his sister's tits. Lol the sister seems more manly than the brother WTF and she wants to fuck him, for God's sake it will happen now. I don't want to play soap operas with melodrama and crying. It's wasting the potential that the game has.
Thats just, like... your opinion, man. ByeJust leave my opinion, whether the developer or you like it or not. I don't care, everyone has their own taste.
Don't take this the wrong way, the game does have potential. But if you give too much thought to the intimate relationship XD, it's a waste of time. Also in your synopsis you stated that they already had a certain attraction between them, not even if they succumb or resist the forbidden relationship. This is not the case, therefore you should have the player choose whether they succumb or not, or when the mother arrives, Erik succumbs to the mother. Another thing, if you are on vacation, the duration has not been specified, if at least it is two weeks, you have already burned almost a week or it is a month. Or they are end of year vacations that generally last two months in some countries XDWhat's that potential may I ask?
The potential to become a fuck fest in 2 updates with the family relationships being worthless labels that don't add anything but a tag, and a million random harem characters that have less personality than a rock? Nah my man, there's plenty of that in this forum. And don't get me wrong, I appreciate that for when you just want some mindless porn.
I want to do something new though, or at least, different, because in my opinion most incest stories are awfully written.
Thats good man and you should stay true to what story you want to tell. The point I wanted to get out is that it feels like the MC doesnt have any character development especially emotionally. And I think its time to decide what he wants after going back and forth countless times already. Other than that I love the focus on their special bond and discovering what it truly means.What's that potential may I ask?
The potential to become a fuck fest in 2 updates with the family relationships being worthless labels that don't add anything but a tag, and a million random harem characters that have less personality than a rock? Nah my man, there's plenty of that in this forum. And don't get me wrong, I appreciate that for when you just want some mindless porn.
I want to do something new though, or at least, different, because in my opinion most incest stories are awfully written.
But that IS the case. It's the entire premise of Chapter 1 and clearly mentioned in the game multiple times.Also in your synopsis you stated that they already had a certain attraction between them, not even if they succumb or resist the forbidden relationship. This is not the case, therefore you should have the player choose whether they succumb or not
It's the start of June, it's said at the beginning. Also if you look at the 1st phone conversation you can see the date and also see each day on the replay gallery. I'm adding more mentions next update though.Another thing, if you are on vacation, the duration has not been specified, if at least it is two weeks, you have already burned almost a week or it is a month. Or they are end of year vacations that generally last two months in some countries XD
My man, give me a chance It's not even been two months since I released the game and I'm almost done with CH1.the brother acting like a pussy is getting old really fast
Continue as best you can. Yes, and slow progress is rare in the game, but this is the hottest thing in the game. in a couple of months, you've done a great jobMy man, give me a chance It's not even been two months since I released the game and I'm almost done with CH1.
Plus, I don't want him to be a mindless perv and I'm clearly establishing their personalities through the conversations and actions. If they slowly get corrupted and change through the game that just makes the payoff much more interesting, don't you think?
Thank you so much, I love these comments! That's precisely what I'm trying to do and I also pay a lot of attention to the sound/music...I'm right now on the first morning, and, I have to say, if the writing keeps being this good, we have a winner.
The graphics, bah, could be better, but, that's not here nor there, because there's a story to read and the reading is way above what we find around here.
So far, mate, Cheers.
I'm gonna be brutally honest. Forgive me.Thank you so much, I love these comments! Tat's precisely what I'm trying to do and I also pay a lot of attention to the sound/music...
Tell me your final thoughts when you finish 1.4 and maybe write a review too
And btw if you wanna check the progress in graphics since I did my first render for the game like 2-3 months ago, yeah... (not the same scene but you get the point)
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Dont mind the haters It's okay to have dynamic characters the guy being shy and the sister being forward is a very good dynamic. Also I like that they feel guilt since they are siblings. Do what you envision about the story. Saying the guy/MC is a pussy is not a valid criticism it just their preference which doesnt matter. A confident/chad guy only works in harem as he is very confident romance a lot of girls. The shy type works really well with single romance cause a shy guy could build confidence and courage later on the story.My man, give me a chance It's not even been two months since I released the game and I'm almost done with CH1.
Plus, I don't want him to be a mindless perv and I'm clearly establishing their personalities through the conversations and actions. If they slowly get corrupted and change through the game that just makes the payoff much more interesting, don't you think?
that is his TWIN SISTER, and he is the more responcible/adult of the siblings. ofc he is holding back and tries to be reasonable. thatßs what makes this story great, they actually have to confront the taboo of what they are about to do insteat if just glossingover it. the auther makes a damn good job of delivering this storyI love a slow burn but this dood seriously needs to grow a pair and go for what he desires. Its starting to get annoying watching him throw a tandrum everytime like a 5 year old.