The game has so much blah blah that you will get bored....as i did....But i on other hand i am not into VN with some exceptions. Also it needs better artist imo.... The priestess vagina is like balls hanging from her body when u first meet her... Nevertheless nice game but not for my taste..
Dialogue in a story driven game?! Crazy concept! That's like saying you don't like books, then you still for some reason read a book, and after reading the book you complain that you had to read a book. Like what?
As for the art, I guess the priestess simply has a very prominent labia. Totally fine if you don't like that, but how can you say the game needs a "better" artist because of that? You'll hardly find any 2DCG based games on F95 with better art. It's on a very much professional level and lightyears ahead if compared to most games of it's kind.
O....k.
A game that has to start sentences with "I mean".
Seriously, take "I mean" from the beginning of every single ONE of them, and see how that changes the narrative...at ALL, well aside from making the dialog flow MUCH better...call it a pet peeve even.
How does everyone have an over-fascination with the word "Dude" even the elderly, almost like the separate personalities and dialog were written...from the same mind lol.
I could see why the word "dude" might not be very fitting considering the game takes place in a medieval/fantasy setting, but what's wrong with starting off a sentence on "I mean"? Doesn't affect the flow or narrative at all and is very common. Nothing wrong with that imo.
I feel like you're being super nitpicky when the game's writing is so much better compared to most other porn games. I just finished my first playthrough and the writing was, atleast to me, among the strongest selling points. Great sense of humor, way above average terminology and grammar and very creative.
Also, no offense, but kind of ironic seeing your criticism considering I had to read your post 3 times over to make some sense out of it. lol