HTML Abandoned Sissy Adventures [v2.5] [OdetoComplex]

[SicFran]

Just stop. Really. Just stop, select all the UI work so far and delete it. Seriously.
I have tried this "game" few months ago and somehow, you have maneged to make it worse...

A background image with single line "hyperlinks" as a navigation? Synopsis in 2 paragraphs on the beggining? Comeon. Back to drawing boards.

 

[Deleted member 1149784]

I really like this game and often come back once it's updated. Nontheless there are still many bugs. I try to summarize some of them here (I won't say anything about the UI because the problem with it was already mentioned before):

- Miscellanious:
- Some of the GIFs stop playing
- It seems like you linked some images to tumblr but due to their new "porn is evil" attitude these images are showing the error messages of tumblr.
- Some other images seem to be no longer available online, too. Especially at the laundromat. I'd recommend downloading the files and putting them into your source folder. First of all because of security (as said before in this thread) second for backup reasons.
- I can't buy books on the computer
- New clothing system (nice idea but):

- With every clothing I buy I get one nighty for free. Although it's a nice service I don't think it's intentional. Also since I put on the nighty the first time, my fitness outfit is gone and there is no way to purchase another one.
- The graphics are overlapping each other and the navigation lines (see attached screenshot)

- At the bar in Downtown Karis:
- there is nearly no contrast between the font and the background img so it's really hard to read
- everytime I go there it says: "You've exhausted your flirting options for today." In version 2.0 there were no problems

- The VR Expansion-Pack:
- hitting the right arrow key ended up in an error (see attached image)
- The game doesn't really work. I can't control the character and there is no button to go back. So I'm stuck there and have to restart

- The Strip Club:
- At the start there are to errors:
1. Error: cannot find a closing tag for macro <<if>><<if $hour gt 1 && $hour lt 15>>…
2. Error: child tag <<elseif>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>><<elseif $clothesWorn[0].name == "Stripper Outfit" && $stripFee == 1 && $player.bimbo gte 300
- There are more inside the club but it seems I cannot enter it any longer (don't know why)

These are the bugs I can recall from my last playthrough but there are still some more. I'd recommend getting rid of these first before putting out new content updates. It's a bit sad to come back to a game after several updates and to see the same bugs in all of them.

I hope this is helpful. Keep up the good work.

 

[sfasdfsdafsda]

I really like this game and often come back once it's updated. Nontheless there are still many bugs. I try to summarize some of them here (I won't say anything about the UI because the problem with it was already mentioned before):

- Miscellanious:
- Some of the GIFs stop playing
- It seems like you linked some images to tumblr but due to their new "porn is evil" attitude these images are showing the error messages of tumblr.
- Some other images seem to be no longer available online, too. Especially at the laundromat. I'd recommend downloading the files and putting them into your source folder. First of all because of security (as said before in this thread) second for backup reasons.
- I can't buy books on the computer
- New clothing system (nice idea but):

- With every clothing I buy I get one nighty for free. Although it's a nice service I don't think it's intentional. Also since I put on the nighty the first time, my fitness outfit is gone and there is no way to purchase another one.
- The graphics are overlapping each other and the navigation lines (see attached screenshot)

- At the bar in Downtown Karis:
- there is nearly no contrast between the font and the background img so it's really hard to read
- everytime I go there it says: "You've exhausted your flirting options for today." In version 2.0 there were no problems

- The VR Expansion-Pack:
- hitting the right arrow key ended up in an error (see attached image)
- The game doesn't really work. I can't control the character and there is no button to go back. So I'm stuck there and have to restart

- The Strip Club:
- At the start there are to errors:
1. Error: cannot find a closing tag for macro <<if>><<if $hour gt 1 && $hour lt 15>>…
2. Error: child tag <<elseif>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>><<elseif $clothesWorn[0].name == "Stripper Outfit" && $stripFee == 1 && $player.bimbo gte 300
- There are more inside the club but it seems I cannot enter it any longer (don't know why)

These are the bugs I can recall from my last playthrough but there are still some more. I'd recommend getting rid of these first before putting out new content updates. It's a bit sad to come back to a game after several updates and to see the same bugs in all of them.

I hope this is helpful. Keep up the good work.

Thank you for taking the time to compile this list. Try downloading the latest version (strip club is fixed and a new mini game has been added) (as well as one or two more bugs).

I think in this latest version you won't have the extra nightie issue as thats already been addressed further up this thread.

The VR expansion pack games do let me move left right up and down in both expansions, but perhaps this has more to do with safari. Can you emulate chrome and run it on your mac? I bug test the game and design it around the chrome browser (but I hear it works okay in firefox as well).
As for the not working tumblr images I'll have to find these and replace them individually,but I will get around to doing that sometime soon.

Could you elaborate on the being unable to buy books bug?

I've updated the font in the bar.

Updated html file (latest version 2.2) here:

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[sfasdfsdafsda]

how can you change cloths?, all he can wear is shorts and a white shirt

If you're on chrome (or firefox) its drag and drop. Otherwise it may not work but theres a randomly put on clothes option depending on what you own.

 

[Deleted member 1149784]

Sorry for the late answer. Thanks for the updated file, it works much better now.

Could you elaborate on the being unable to buy books bug?

Still I have no option to buy books on the computer. There's only the option to buy bigger and bigger buttplugs. I have tried it with high bimbo-level and low. For both it's the same. Also I tried it on chrome and firefox (I have a Windows PC, so no Safari) but there's still no option.

If I recalled it correctly, there's a hint when clicking on school, saying you can buy the books via your computer or get them by flirting with someone.

Edit: Forget what I've just said. I realized that I had to click on the picture to start the flirting for the books

 

[dens007]

Hi Guys! version 2.22:

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[vimmers]

2,5

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[AHD]

Sadly the UI makes this unplayable.

 

[xt2021]

after download the new version 2.5 ,there is a images.zip and a folder named images. Do I need to unzip the zip folder?
it seems the files in zip and in the folder is different. I don't know which one newer

 

[jamiewwer1]

Sadly the UI makes this unplayable.

have there been any changes since 1.7?

 

[Higurashika]

It could be a good game but dev doesnt know what is userfriendly interface, so i just can't play this game. My eyes bleeding.

 

[sfasdfsdafsda]

have there been any changes since 1.7?

I've added more UI settings since then, let me know what you think and where the UI is most egregious and I will try to make it more eye-appeasing.

after download the new version 2.5 ,there is a images.zip and a folder named images. Do I need to unzip the zip folder?
it seems the files in zip and in the folder is different. I don't know which one newer

The .zip folder isn't updated but the difference is very negligible. almost all photos now are stored in the cloud. As long as you have either the zipped images or the "loose-folder" images and the html, you're playing the game as intended.

 

[VoxAeterna]

It could do with a revamping of the UI. It's kinda hard knowing what you're clicking on sometimes.

 

[richarddlopatin]

I've added more UI settings since then, let me know what you think and where the UI is most egregious and I will try to make it more eye-appeasing.

Can't you just like... read something about UX? Youtube tutorials, the Google stuff on Material Design, anything like that, even if not completely applicable in Twine, can bring some very needed insight into the way you work out your UI.

I really think that if you can finally sort out your UI this game could take off. It is NECESSARY. It should be your top priority right now.

 

[radical686]

Can't you just like... read something about UX? Youtube tutorials, the Google stuff on Material Design, anything like that, even if not completely applicable in Twine, can bring some very needed insight into the way you work out your UI.

I really think that if you can finally sort out your UI this game could take off. It is NECESSARY. It should be your top priority right now.

This is still a very buggy and frustrating game to play. The unwieldy UI has always been the major problem with this game. Every time I've played this game there's been some problem with the UI. Some game-breaking bug that surfaces. He just keeps adding content and adding haphazard bug fixes, rather than actually fixing or redoing the UI.

Bugs I found this time:

1) Unable to wash cum stained clothes at the laundromat.

You start with two outfits, and if one of them gets stained it affects some interactions with people like bus drivers. Tried to go to the laundry to clean them. Can't clean the clothes your wearing. Bought new clothes and wore them, but no clear explanation or understanding of how to actually bring dirty clothes to the laundromat.

2) Furthermore, clothes randomly are tagged as cum stained. Even if you change out of cum-stained clothes, your new clothes may be tagged as cum-stained. <Facepalm> That was when I decided to quit.
3) At least 20 images are missing, many at one of the first places you go: the convenience store.
4) One other declared error that happened at the mom's house. With all the other problems I just didn't bother to document it.

Other problems:
1) Hard to figure out what to do when or where to go.
2) Studied 10/10 at school, but not clear if that's enough. So, studied some more.
3) Hard to see links on toggled images. Continues to be overlapping of descriptive content on the screen so, for instance, it's hard to tell the cost of trips.
4) You shouldn't use the same image for different things, like different kinds of pills. They should look distinct.

The UI is better than it was, but it seems that tons of bugs are added every time he adds something or changes something. It's very frustrating.

This Dev really needs to rethink his UI or spend a lot of time actually playing his changes. The problems with the laundromat and the missing images at the convenience store come pretty damn early in gameplay. I have no understanding why errors or missing images like that exist in any released version of a game. If it were randomized images, I'd understand it better, but static images at places you visit early?

 

[ILCjr]

The UI is wonky. I have several images that will not load, or are broken. Good luck with this game, I may try it again at some point.

 

[zed4o777]

why there is male protagonist when u r girl ;d

 

[radical686]

why there is male protagonist when u r girl ;d

Technically, you're a feminine man with small breasts and a penis. He frequently uses females from real porn, however. According to the game intro, you can choose to become a woman or become more manly. It's your choice. Or at least that's the way the Dev intended it.

 

[BIG MAC 666]

can someone create a cheat menu for this?

 

[BertMcGert]

Is there (or can you add) an option to access the images offline? None of the Dropbox-hosted images will load.