- the word 'Russian' has been removed from the game.
very effective update :||||
very effective update :||||
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I assume you'll spot what is wrong, though if you need a save let me know.
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Error processing node "d5_date_slut_change_4": invalid syntax (unmatched ')')
Thanks, got it fixed in the dev branch. The error isn't game breaking (I hope) - there should be an extra step if you're wearing underwear Lenard tells you to take that off as well. It leads to the same outcome, no images are skipped, just a bit of extra flavour text.
Bug report in data\plot.txt, although it doesn't seem to affect anything yet
Minor typo
Not sure if this is a typo:
save.sea_swimming never gets reset to 0, meaning it is a one time only event (intentionally so?)
I also recommend displaying max slut anyway, even when not enforced. I found my character often changing clothes at home, then trying to head out before realizing I was above the cap.
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save.sea_swimming never gets reset to 0, meaning it is a one time only event (intentionally so?)
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I also recommend displaying max slut anyway, even when not enforced. I found my character often changing clothes at home, then trying to head out before realizing I was above the cap.
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I also encountered this issue, but with an added softlock: I attended school with 10/10 lewdness and then lost my panties to Ben for the morning exam. Now after stripping naked, the dressing dialogue is a) missing the paperdoll and b) stuck at 12/10 lewdness. I attached the save at the point of the softlock.
Another bug, happened when I tried to wear the "leaves_top" and "leaves_bottom" during the park date. Looks like in node "d5_date_park_go_nude_6" it has
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The game is amazing, I wish you good luck in further development, I especially liked the moment with the strip game in quiz, are there any plans to add more such situations, games? like poker, or a quiz at school?
Wow, then don't even think of looking at the game Defenestration, set in a dystopian communist world and made by two Ukrainians.
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Being asked to taking it to DMs or are separate thread has less to do with them trying to hide what you're saying but more with your post – like any other discussing the matter – being an infraction of 1.2 and 1.11 of the general rules. By rights, it should just be scrubbed. All of it.
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I'm aware and I'm fine with it. It's good that it's still up and it'll be good if it gets deleted. Although I still find it insane that what I said could be considered anything "controversial". Just basic human decency.
Your comment about overspending on clothes makes sense.
(I just needed to post something on topic. I will now report my own post to notify the moderators that there are several off topic posts that break the rules about "no politics". I do symphatize with the plight of Ukraine, but absolutely nothing is gained by talking about the war on a porn game forum thread)
(I just needed to post something on topic. I will now report my own post to notify the moderators that there are several off topic posts that break the rules about "no politics". I do symphatize with the plight of Ukraine, but absolutely nothing is gained by talking about the war on a porn game forum thread)
the first day I press go to school, the inscriptions disappear and there are no more actions! what to do next
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I had the same problem a while ago and the error said that I didn't had Java, so try to instal it to see if it works.
If you're on windows or linux press ctrl+shift+I to show the dev tools, go to the console tab and see if there are any errors there.
The game uses Javascript, but not Java, so don't install Java, the browser should be enough.
Feedback for version 06a_155:
First off, this game is VERY GOOD. Graphics are effective - not spectacular but good enough and hopefully not too timeconsuming on your side (I had to google "foxi di bus" and what a wonderful vid that is).
Now then:
1.
As with so many other corruption games, it is very very hard to get the pace "just right". So I'm not even going to ask you change that. What you could do, however, is to add a bit of checks and balances, basically just text and "are you sure?", to signal that the player is trying to do stuff the girl has never done before and/or isn't comfortable doing (too low slut score).
I'm driving at how you go so quickly from "do I dare take a topless selfie" to getting naked and sucking cocks. (I'm sure there are plenty of real girls who do this without a worry in the world, but games of this sort usually plays up the forbidden or naughty angle)
You don't need more game complexity or decision points. Just force the player to confirm she goes along with whatever is about to happen, to signal it is the first time and/or it is at the edge of her comfort zone.
2. Pregnancy scare / risk play. Offer the following new items at the shopping mall:
A. Birth Control Pill. Taking this pill means the player is saying "no impregnation content for me thank you". Fair enough.
B. Condoms
* "Bulk", a pack of 50 for $50 ($1 each)
* "Plain", a pack of 20 for $200 ($10 each)
* "Elite", a pack of 6 for $600 ($100 each)
Bulk condoms have a 1 in 3 risk of rupturing, but you will probably never have to go back to buy another pack.
Plain condoms have a 1 in 6 risk of rupturing, and you should only run out once or twice.
Elite condoms have only a 1 in 9 risk of rupturing, but is a pain in the ass to restock all the time
This adds content for decision points such as:
Do you ask for the boy to wear a condom? Few if none of the men will carry condoms of their own, so you will have to supply them if you want them used? Do you refuse sex without a condom? What if they don't want to wear a condom? Call sex off altogether or take them in your mouth or arse?
If you fuck bareback, do you tell them to withdraw before cumming? Do you try to push them off if they "forget"? Do you get mad at them if you see cum oozing out your snatch?
If a boy has cum inside you after you having told him you didn't want that, do you trust him to have sex with you in the future? Do you insist on a condom? Do you get angry if he fucks you bareback anyway? What if he "forgets" to cum outside more than once?
3. I see you've added a few "random encounters" between locations, when you wear daring clothing (whatever the game considered daring). And I quite applaud this. But the current implementation just won't do, since it means meeting the same fat lady, the same cop, the same gossiping student over and over again. Please consider both of: A) making it only a 1 in 3 chance of having a random encounter B) making sure any given encounter cannot happen again until at least X days later (if all current encounters are on a "cooldown" there simply aren't any) and of course C) add more variety in encounters. You will hopefully realize I understand 3) is time consuming and that I don't expect every part of the content to grow at the same time. But until then, please consider 1 and 2.
4. I quite like the basic idea, of having an assertive student (Ben) ask you to do outrageous things. I would love it the game separated what the girl actually does from how she talks back at him. Basically, allow the scenario where the player makes the choices that leads to her being pimped out to random students and teachers for Ben's benefit but where the girl gets angry and talks back at him.
Instead of just
A) she declines to get naked or suck cock and her slut score stays low
B) she accepts his dares, slut score increases
You'd have
A) she declines to go naked or whatever
B) she accepts to do it
C) she gets mad but he dominates her and she has to do it anyway, muttering "asshole" under her breath.
You see the difference? In C the player wants one thing but the girl wants another. If the player can only express his wishes through her actions this is not (easily) possible.
Note: in C I'm not necessarily imagining her being forced, just her being reluctant. I respect you said you wrote shitty rape scenarios. The point is that I want her to be able to delude herself she's better than that, and she's only doing it because Ben tells her to. This makes it IMHO much more satisfying when Lenard later cajoles her into going nude Stonehenging.
5. Which brings me to - I think your intention is that if she allows nude pics to spread, the school starts gossiping and this reaches the school boys that interact with her. But if so, this is not clear enough. If Lenard takes her to nude Stonehenge only if she's acted carelessly before that is completely unclear.
6. Would love it if there was, say, three Ben-type characters at school.
Abe: Bossy but for personal benefit. That is, uses her personally.
Ben: As written - bossy for profit. Uses her as a tool for better grades, and just because he's an asshole (the typical slut trainer mentality)
Cel: Bossy to degrade her. Likes to pinch her nipples until she gets teary eyed, say. Gets disgusted if she loves him back
She would early on realize she might need to cling to one at them to guard against the others. That is, the player can avoid rough content by deciding against that bully.
Choosing none of them, taking the high road. She shouldn't have to submit to either. This opens her up to all three, and to the delusional route. She tells herself Abe didn't just cum in her pussy without a condom, or that Ben forced her to remove her panties only to trip her so that the math teacher got distracted. And she'll report Cel to the police any day now!
7. The final random encounter is with a john wanting his cock sucked. Even if you don't have time to add scenes with anal or vaginal, this kind of repeteable content needs a minimum of variety. Perhaps as little as three or five variations on the text, what offers are made, and if she can even say no. Since this is a game, I suggest
* one john would respect a no, but will not withdraw before cumming even if asked to
* another john would even wear a condom, but would get enraged if she said no (she ends up raped)
...and so on. The current event plays out exactly the same way. Honestly no encounter is better than an encounter with zero variability.
First off, this game is VERY GOOD. Graphics are effective - not spectacular but good enough and hopefully not too timeconsuming on your side (I had to google "foxi di bus" and what a wonderful vid that is).
Now then:
1.
As with so many other corruption games, it is very very hard to get the pace "just right". So I'm not even going to ask you change that. What you could do, however, is to add a bit of checks and balances, basically just text and "are you sure?", to signal that the player is trying to do stuff the girl has never done before and/or isn't comfortable doing (too low slut score).
I'm driving at how you go so quickly from "do I dare take a topless selfie" to getting naked and sucking cocks. (I'm sure there are plenty of real girls who do this without a worry in the world, but games of this sort usually plays up the forbidden or naughty angle)
You don't need more game complexity or decision points. Just force the player to confirm she goes along with whatever is about to happen, to signal it is the first time and/or it is at the edge of her comfort zone.
2. Pregnancy scare / risk play. Offer the following new items at the shopping mall:
A. Birth Control Pill. Taking this pill means the player is saying "no impregnation content for me thank you". Fair enough.
B. Condoms
* "Bulk", a pack of 50 for $50 ($1 each)
* "Plain", a pack of 20 for $200 ($10 each)
* "Elite", a pack of 6 for $600 ($100 each)
Bulk condoms have a 1 in 3 risk of rupturing, but you will probably never have to go back to buy another pack.
Plain condoms have a 1 in 6 risk of rupturing, and you should only run out once or twice.
Elite condoms have only a 1 in 9 risk of rupturing, but is a pain in the ass to restock all the time
This adds content for decision points such as:
Do you ask for the boy to wear a condom? Few if none of the men will carry condoms of their own, so you will have to supply them if you want them used? Do you refuse sex without a condom? What if they don't want to wear a condom? Call sex off altogether or take them in your mouth or arse?
If you fuck bareback, do you tell them to withdraw before cumming? Do you try to push them off if they "forget"? Do you get mad at them if you see cum oozing out your snatch?
If a boy has cum inside you after you having told him you didn't want that, do you trust him to have sex with you in the future? Do you insist on a condom? Do you get angry if he fucks you bareback anyway? What if he "forgets" to cum outside more than once?
3. I see you've added a few "random encounters" between locations, when you wear daring clothing (whatever the game considered daring). And I quite applaud this. But the current implementation just won't do, since it means meeting the same fat lady, the same cop, the same gossiping student over and over again. Please consider both of: A) making it only a 1 in 3 chance of having a random encounter B) making sure any given encounter cannot happen again until at least X days later (if all current encounters are on a "cooldown" there simply aren't any) and of course C) add more variety in encounters. You will hopefully realize I understand 3) is time consuming and that I don't expect every part of the content to grow at the same time. But until then, please consider 1 and 2.
4. I quite like the basic idea, of having an assertive student (Ben) ask you to do outrageous things. I would love it the game separated what the girl actually does from how she talks back at him. Basically, allow the scenario where the player makes the choices that leads to her being pimped out to random students and teachers for Ben's benefit but where the girl gets angry and talks back at him.
Instead of just
A) she declines to get naked or suck cock and her slut score stays low
B) she accepts his dares, slut score increases
You'd have
A) she declines to go naked or whatever
B) she accepts to do it
C) she gets mad but he dominates her and she has to do it anyway, muttering "asshole" under her breath.
You see the difference? In C the player wants one thing but the girl wants another. If the player can only express his wishes through her actions this is not (easily) possible.
Note: in C I'm not necessarily imagining her being forced, just her being reluctant. I respect you said you wrote shitty rape scenarios. The point is that I want her to be able to delude herself she's better than that, and she's only doing it because Ben tells her to. This makes it IMHO much more satisfying when Lenard later cajoles her into going nude Stonehenging.
5. Which brings me to - I think your intention is that if she allows nude pics to spread, the school starts gossiping and this reaches the school boys that interact with her. But if so, this is not clear enough. If Lenard takes her to nude Stonehenge only if she's acted carelessly before that is completely unclear.
6. Would love it if there was, say, three Ben-type characters at school.
Abe: Bossy but for personal benefit. That is, uses her personally.
Ben: As written - bossy for profit. Uses her as a tool for better grades, and just because he's an asshole (the typical slut trainer mentality)
Cel: Bossy to degrade her. Likes to pinch her nipples until she gets teary eyed, say. Gets disgusted if she loves him back
She would early on realize she might need to cling to one at them to guard against the others. That is, the player can avoid rough content by deciding against that bully.
Choosing none of them, taking the high road. She shouldn't have to submit to either. This opens her up to all three, and to the delusional route. She tells herself Abe didn't just cum in her pussy without a condom, or that Ben forced her to remove her panties only to trip her so that the math teacher got distracted. And she'll report Cel to the police any day now!
7. The final random encounter is with a john wanting his cock sucked. Even if you don't have time to add scenes with anal or vaginal, this kind of repeteable content needs a minimum of variety. Perhaps as little as three or five variations on the text, what offers are made, and if she can even say no. Since this is a game, I suggest
* one john would respect a no, but will not withdraw before cumming even if asked to
* another john would even wear a condom, but would get enraged if she said no (she ends up raped)
...and so on. The current event plays out exactly the same way. Honestly no encounter is better than an encounter with zero variability.
And oh, something maybe obvious:
9. The porn trope of men that are able to cum more than once in a row.
In other words, all sex scenes (that I got at least) feature ONE fuck. But it's VERY HOT if the man wants to go again, and again. Just coding the game so every man you encounter can cum at least three times in a scene would be very hot all of in itself.
Also, this plays into the risk play (suggestion #3 above). If you asked a man to withdraw, and he failed to do so, will you let him have sex with you again? What if he says he's sorry / it was an accident? What if he says "don't worry about it" / "what's done is done"?
What if he didn't stop but you managed to push him out before he had time to splurt just once? What if the both of you agree to play it safe and do anal, but he switches to your pussy mid-coitus? Do you let this slide or do you fight him?
Also note how 6 condoms is ridiculously little - you will have to fight any man that wants to go twice and / or have to go shopping three times each day.
10. Does the game end when you become pregnant? I sure hope not, but I realize the graphics can't handle a preggo belly. Maybe you are given a pregnancy acceleration drug to give birth so very quickly the game can then proceed; you being warned not to get pregnant again! (Which, of course, could well happen...)
(New post since shark has already liked and therefore read my prev post. I appreciate you taking the time to read even if nothing comes out of all this)
9. The porn trope of men that are able to cum more than once in a row.
In other words, all sex scenes (that I got at least) feature ONE fuck. But it's VERY HOT if the man wants to go again, and again. Just coding the game so every man you encounter can cum at least three times in a scene would be very hot all of in itself.
Also, this plays into the risk play (suggestion #3 above). If you asked a man to withdraw, and he failed to do so, will you let him have sex with you again? What if he says he's sorry / it was an accident? What if he says "don't worry about it" / "what's done is done"?
What if he didn't stop but you managed to push him out before he had time to splurt just once? What if the both of you agree to play it safe and do anal, but he switches to your pussy mid-coitus? Do you let this slide or do you fight him?
Also note how 6 condoms is ridiculously little - you will have to fight any man that wants to go twice and / or have to go shopping three times each day.
10. Does the game end when you become pregnant? I sure hope not, but I realize the graphics can't handle a preggo belly. Maybe you are given a pregnancy acceleration drug to give birth so very quickly the game can then proceed; you being warned not to get pregnant again! (Which, of course, could well happen...)
(New post since shark has already liked and therefore read my prev post. I appreciate you taking the time to read even if nothing comes out of all this)
Thanks for the feedback. Good points and I probably will use some of your ideas.
I'm not dead set against pregnancy content, but at the rate things are going, computer says it would take me 12 years to make 9 months of in-game content.
I have a system in place for random encounters, it's just missing content. The basic idea is to use weights for each event (eg. A 10, B 5, C 5, D 1 so A is 10x more likely to happen than D, and 2x more likely than B and C) and each time the event happens its weight is reduced by 1 and it's excluded from the pool for the next roll. The chances of events may be changed based on clothing or other things. For it all to work I'd need about 20 events and that's probably what I'll be doing for v0.8.
I think I already have too many characters, I'll focus on the ones I have before adding more, but hey - we got mods! I can drop a few npc pictures into the npc folder if anyone wants to give it a shot.
I'm not dead set against pregnancy content, but at the rate things are going, computer says it would take me 12 years to make 9 months of in-game content.
I have a system in place for random encounters, it's just missing content. The basic idea is to use weights for each event (eg. A 10, B 5, C 5, D 1 so A is 10x more likely to happen than D, and 2x more likely than B and C) and each time the event happens its weight is reduced by 1 and it's excluded from the pool for the next roll. The chances of events may be changed based on clothing or other things. For it all to work I'd need about 20 events and that's probably what I'll be doing for v0.8.
I think I already have too many characters, I'll focus on the ones I have before adding more, but hey - we got mods! I can drop a few npc pictures into the npc folder if anyone wants to give it a shot.
Lol
Sounds goodJust know that currently you get one out of only four(?) encounters each time. Even with twenty encounters, the repetition will be too much, since (if I understand you correctly) some encounters will happen far more often than once every 20.
That doesn't mean you should add more than twenty encounters. That means you should either add "no encounter" as the likeliest encounter, or you should consider making, dunno, the top five encounters variable. For instance, the "random man mistakes you for a hooker" encounter. Something as "simple" as having several different images (of johns) and offering variety in dialogue (so the menu tree isn't the same):
* the timid man easily told off; you basically need to be his mom
* the nasty dirty-mouthed man if you like being verbally degraded
* maybe one is drunk and one is on speed; each gives you huge orgasms but forgets to pay you, making you feel extra whorish
* one draws steel, negating the "say no" option, but will honor your agreement and pay you
...while still reusing the actual sex graphics for instance. That would mean you could have that encounter once every day, something the current always-the-same encounter is unsuitable for.
Any chance there'll be more semen food play? She could be given a giant thermos each day that she drinks during school. It could come from a variety of places: donors in and outside the school (possibly given pictures of her to jerk off too) or expired semen from a human or animal donor bank that has to be disposed of for whatever reason.