Feedback for version 06a_155:
First off, this game is VERY GOOD. Graphics are effective - not spectacular but good enough and hopefully not too timeconsuming on your side (I had to google "foxi di bus" and what a wonderful vid that is).
Now then:
1.
As with so many other corruption games, it is very very hard to get the pace "just right". So I'm not even going to ask you change that. What you could do, however, is to add a bit of checks and balances, basically just text and "are you sure?", to signal that the player is trying to do stuff the girl has never done before and/or isn't comfortable doing (too low slut score).
I'm driving at how you go so quickly from "do I dare take a topless selfie" to getting naked and sucking cocks. (I'm sure there are plenty of real girls who do this without a worry in the world, but games of this sort usually plays up the forbidden or naughty angle)
You don't need more game complexity or decision points. Just force the player to confirm she goes along with whatever is about to happen, to signal it is the first time and/or it is at the edge of her comfort zone.
2. Pregnancy scare / risk play. Offer the following new items at the shopping mall:
A. Birth Control Pill. Taking this pill means the player is saying "no impregnation content for me thank you". Fair enough.
B. Condoms
* "Bulk", a pack of 50 for $50 ($1 each)
* "Plain", a pack of 20 for $200 ($10 each)
* "Elite", a pack of 6 for $600 ($100 each)
Bulk condoms have a 1 in 3 risk of rupturing, but you will probably never have to go back to buy another pack.
Plain condoms have a 1 in 6 risk of rupturing, and you should only run out once or twice.
Elite condoms have only a 1 in 9 risk of rupturing, but is a pain in the ass to restock all the time
This adds content for decision points such as:
Do you ask for the boy to wear a condom? Few if none of the men will carry condoms of their own, so you will have to supply them if you want them used? Do you refuse sex without a condom? What if they don't want to wear a condom? Call sex off altogether or take them in your mouth or arse?
If you fuck bareback, do you tell them to withdraw before cumming? Do you try to push them off if they "forget"? Do you get mad at them if you see cum oozing out your snatch?
If a boy has cum inside you after you having told him you didn't want that, do you trust him to have sex with you in the future? Do you insist on a condom? Do you get angry if he fucks you bareback anyway? What if he "forgets" to cum outside more than once?
3. I see you've added a few "random encounters" between locations, when you wear daring clothing (whatever the game considered daring). And I quite applaud this. But the current implementation just won't do, since it means meeting the same fat lady, the same cop, the same gossiping student over and over again. Please consider both of: A) making it only a 1 in 3 chance of having a random encounter B) making sure any given encounter cannot happen again until at least X days later (if all current encounters are on a "cooldown" there simply aren't any) and of course C) add more variety in encounters. You will hopefully realize I understand 3) is time consuming and that I don't expect every part of the content to grow at the same time. But until then, please consider 1 and 2.
4. I quite like the basic idea, of having an assertive student (Ben) ask you to do outrageous things. I would love it the game separated what the girl actually does from how she talks back at him. Basically, allow the scenario where the player makes the choices that leads to her being pimped out to random students and teachers for Ben's benefit but where the girl gets angry and talks back at him.
Instead of just
A) she declines to get naked or suck cock and her slut score stays low
B) she accepts his dares, slut score increases
You'd have
A) she declines to go naked or whatever
B) she accepts to do it
C) she gets mad but he dominates her and she has to do it anyway, muttering "asshole" under her breath.
You see the difference? In C the player wants one thing but the girl wants another. If the player can only express his wishes through her actions this is not (easily) possible.
Note: in C I'm not necessarily imagining her being forced, just her being reluctant. I respect you said you wrote shitty rape scenarios. The point is that I want her to be able to delude herself she's better than that, and she's only doing it because Ben tells her to. This makes it IMHO much more satisfying when Lenard later cajoles her into going nude Stonehenging.
5. Which brings me to - I think your intention is that if she allows nude pics to spread, the school starts gossiping and this reaches the school boys that interact with her. But if so, this is not clear enough. If Lenard takes her to nude Stonehenge only if she's acted carelessly before that is completely unclear.
6. Would love it if there was, say, three Ben-type characters at school.
Abe: Bossy but for personal benefit. That is, uses her personally.
Ben: As written - bossy for profit. Uses her as a tool for better grades, and just because he's an asshole (the typical slut trainer mentality)
Cel: Bossy to degrade her. Likes to pinch her nipples until she gets teary eyed, say. Gets disgusted if she loves him back
She would early on realize she might need to cling to one at them to guard against the others. That is, the player can avoid rough content by deciding against that bully.
Choosing none of them, taking the high road. She shouldn't have to submit to either. This opens her up to all three, and to the delusional route. She tells herself Abe didn't just cum in her pussy without a condom, or that Ben forced her to remove her panties only to trip her so that the math teacher got distracted. And she'll report Cel to the police any day now!
7. The final random encounter is with a john wanting his cock sucked. Even if you don't have time to add scenes with anal or vaginal, this kind of repeteable content needs a minimum of variety. Perhaps as little as three or five variations on the text, what offers are made, and if she can even say no. Since this is a game, I suggest
* one john would respect a no, but will not withdraw before cumming even if asked to
* another john would even wear a condom, but would get enraged if she said no (she ends up raped)
...and so on. The current event plays out exactly the same way. Honestly no encounter is better than an encounter with zero variability.
