- Sep 25, 2018
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This better not awaken anything in me.
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- Nov 3, 2018
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The tongue isn't that that bad, it's definitely a unique model. Seeing something a little bit different is refreshing.Can't wait for more content!
- Feb 2, 2018
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Hello, I'll try to be as constructive as I can be with this review. It is my first time reviewing a game here and the only reason I do it now is because I think this game has a lot of potential to be a really great game.
The pros:
Music and renders/graphic are amazing. The animations are very good( The preview scene is actually pretty great) even the girl in the bathroom brushing her teeth has a nice animation instead of a still picture. I really like those animations.
The women so far looked great. Really some the best renders I've seen so far and I've played a lot of those games hehe, so kudos to the animation/graphic guys/gals. The tongue is alright I don't know why the big fuss about it...some people wants the girls to always look the same I guess.
It always nice to have multiple choices in dialogues. I'm guessing we will have different outcomes depending on what choice we make. This will work if actually we have some consequences to our choices and not just put 3 options but no matter what we still get the same results.
The cons:
While I understand that you have to choose between good,neutral,bad I didn't feel like the choices so far were really realistic to a true conversation between two persons. I mean Ashlynn and MC met for three minutes and already he grabbed her ass,she let him look at her ass willingly and the minute after he calls her a slut, the other naked one(exhibitionnist I know)...I just felt that the pace could've gone a bit slower there. Again I understand that you wanted to show something or people would complain that there's is nothing to see. But yeah the actual encounters was weird for me. I know it's a porn game with goofs and laughs but I would hoping for at least a more realistic dialogue between them.I know that with time we will learn more of their personnalities too...like Ashlynn seems to have little confidence in her maybe that's why she needs to show off(obviously)
MC could use a little work I agree compared to the girls he doesnt seem finished...like his eyes looked weird maybe a lighting issue...
The other stuff like menu,highlights needs to be polished, no doubt it will be 'fixed' in future releases but it is not a priority. It is something dev fix along the way some of them even change the UI after some months so no big deal there.
Final words, It is definitely a beautiful game I just wish for a more 'adult' approach for the dialogues instead of the MC acting like a juvenile sociopath ( not trying to disrespect your vision only my take on it). I can't wait for the next release already and keep up the good work I really think you have the tools to make this unique and great.I definitely can see myself backing this project on patreon.
Again, that's only one guy's opinion after all. Take care!
The pros:
Music and renders/graphic are amazing. The animations are very good( The preview scene is actually pretty great) even the girl in the bathroom brushing her teeth has a nice animation instead of a still picture. I really like those animations.
The women so far looked great. Really some the best renders I've seen so far and I've played a lot of those games hehe, so kudos to the animation/graphic guys/gals. The tongue is alright I don't know why the big fuss about it...some people wants the girls to always look the same I guess.
It always nice to have multiple choices in dialogues. I'm guessing we will have different outcomes depending on what choice we make. This will work if actually we have some consequences to our choices and not just put 3 options but no matter what we still get the same results.
The cons:
While I understand that you have to choose between good,neutral,bad I didn't feel like the choices so far were really realistic to a true conversation between two persons. I mean Ashlynn and MC met for three minutes and already he grabbed her ass,she let him look at her ass willingly and the minute after he calls her a slut, the other naked one(exhibitionnist I know)...I just felt that the pace could've gone a bit slower there. Again I understand that you wanted to show something or people would complain that there's is nothing to see. But yeah the actual encounters was weird for me. I know it's a porn game with goofs and laughs but I would hoping for at least a more realistic dialogue between them.I know that with time we will learn more of their personnalities too...like Ashlynn seems to have little confidence in her maybe that's why she needs to show off(obviously)
MC could use a little work I agree compared to the girls he doesnt seem finished...like his eyes looked weird maybe a lighting issue...
The other stuff like menu,highlights needs to be polished, no doubt it will be 'fixed' in future releases but it is not a priority. It is something dev fix along the way some of them even change the UI after some months so no big deal there.
Final words, It is definitely a beautiful game I just wish for a more 'adult' approach for the dialogues instead of the MC acting like a juvenile sociopath ( not trying to disrespect your vision only my take on it). I can't wait for the next release already and keep up the good work I really think you have the tools to make this unique and great.I definitely can see myself backing this project on patreon.
Again, that's only one guy's opinion after all. Take care!
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I appreciate the extensive feedback! It's posts like these that give a clear, well-explained opinion that helps me decide what to appreciate/improve on.
Con 1: For sure! The more "adult" conversations will be leaning more towards the "good" options. The choice you choose (which you only have one at the moment) when you are in the car with the driver sets the tone for how your character will act (at least for a while). Also, the neutral choices are a mix of both good and bad, while trying to stay on a somewhat even level. I'm sure you noticed the "bad" choices are pretty far out there (lol), but that was the point. So a mix of good and, far out there. As far as how the girls are acting, there's not much backstory explained at the moment since he just met them, but further down the game roadmap things will be explained and make sense. Like how Ashlynn says she has a boyfriend, but on her profile, she wrote: "single" (if anyone noticed). However, I very much appreciate your feedback and I will keep in mind everything when I'm writing the script. Thank you
Con 2: Well, to be fair, the character wasn't made to look as beautiful as the girls. He was really made just so his "neck-down" looks nice (in my opinion). Because during sex scenes, that's all you really see. He is actually a very popular male model in the Blender 3D porn scene, but I will see what I can do. The lighting wasn't the best in the living room anyway so some work will be done on future renders. Everything is rendered at 4k with 2k samples, so you'll see quite a bit of detail on the models.
Thank you for the excellent feedback!
Con 1: For sure! The more "adult" conversations will be leaning more towards the "good" options. The choice you choose (which you only have one at the moment) when you are in the car with the driver sets the tone for how your character will act (at least for a while). Also, the neutral choices are a mix of both good and bad, while trying to stay on a somewhat even level. I'm sure you noticed the "bad" choices are pretty far out there (lol), but that was the point. So a mix of good and, far out there. As far as how the girls are acting, there's not much backstory explained at the moment since he just met them, but further down the game roadmap things will be explained and make sense. Like how Ashlynn says she has a boyfriend, but on her profile, she wrote: "single" (if anyone noticed). However, I very much appreciate your feedback and I will keep in mind everything when I'm writing the script. Thank you
Con 2: Well, to be fair, the character wasn't made to look as beautiful as the girls. He was really made just so his "neck-down" looks nice (in my opinion). Because during sex scenes, that's all you really see. He is actually a very popular male model in the Blender 3D porn scene, but I will see what I can do. The lighting wasn't the best in the living room anyway so some work will be done on future renders. Everything is rendered at 4k with 2k samples, so you'll see quite a bit of detail on the models.
hahahahahahahahahaha!!! I must admit, when I read that I laughed so hard. I wrote the script so it's funny because I mean, you're not really wrong lmao. But yes, it is a porn game, and you're choosing the "neutral" choices at the moment which is a mix of good and bad. The good choices, I planned on the conversations flowing a bit more on the "adult" side which you are referring to I believe. As well as stated before, more of the backstory will become known as the game progresses.
Thank you for the excellent feedback!
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girl in pic 3 looks amazing, one of the best renders i've ever seen in any game here.
girl in pic 4 nearly made me shit my pants, but it did pique my curiosity about the possibilities that such a tongue would unlock. i'm surprised tongue implants aren't a thing yet.
girl in pic 4 nearly made me shit my pants, but it did pique my curiosity about the possibilities that such a tongue would unlock. i'm surprised tongue implants aren't a thing yet.
- Feb 14, 2019
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- Feb 2, 2018
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Thanks! Glad that you are openminded about it. Usually people with your mindset tends to succeed and I hope you do.I appreciate the extensive feedback! It's posts like these that give a clear, well-explained opinion that helps me decide what to appreciate/improve on.
Con 1: For sure! The more "adult" conversations will be leaning more towards the "good" options. The choice you choose (which you only have one at the moment) when you are in the car with the driver sets the tone for how your character will act (at least for a while). Also, the neutral choices are a mix of both good and bad, while trying to stay on a somewhat even level. I'm sure you noticed the "bad" choices are pretty far out there (lol), but that was the point. So a mix of good and, far out there. As far as how the girls are acting, there's not much backstory explained at the moment since he just met them, but further down the game roadmap things will be explained and make sense. Like how Ashlynn says she has a boyfriend, but on her profile, she wrote: "single" (if anyone noticed). However, I very much appreciate your feedback and I will keep in mind everything when I'm writing the script. Thank you
Con 2: Well, to be fair, the character wasn't made to look as beautiful as the girls. He was really made just so his "neck-down" looks nice (in my opinion). Because during sex scenes, that's all you really see. He is actually a very popular male model in the Blender 3D porn scene, but I will see what I can do. The lighting wasn't the best in the living room anyway so some work will be done on future renders. Everything is rendered at 4k with 2k samples, so you'll see quite a bit of detail on the models.
hahahahahahahahahaha!!! I must admit, when I read that I laughed so hard. I wrote the script so it's funny because I mean, you're not really wrong lmao. But yes, it is a porn game, and you're choosing the "neutral" choices at the moment which is a mix of good and bad. The good choices, I planned on the conversations flowing a bit more on the "adult" side which you are referring to I believe. As well as stated before, more of the backstory will become known as the game progresses.
Thank you for the excellent feedback!
For the MC model, yeah bottom line is you are right, the women are the stars here no doubt and I prefer it that way than the other way around. The MC is not 'struck in face by lightning' ugly just less refined i guess the term i'm looking for?! But like you said the important part are below...down below.
Btw I really like the idea to use social media for in game characters that could change the way the story unfolds, nice touch.
I know it's a long road ahead but do you have plans to have collectibles like photos you find 'hidden' in rooms that would show maybe unused renders?
- May 7, 2018
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Ashlynn is hands down one of my favorite looking females in any of these games, holy hell. I am loving the direction so far, I only hope that you do not punish players too severely for going down the bad path if they feel so inclined. One expects consequences in these kinds of games, but I have seen plenty of them ruined by giving an illusion of choice, where picking the obviously bad answer either just ends your play-through or locks you out of the best content the developer has to offer. Striking the balance will be key, but I have faith in this project. Definitely shall be watching, once the virus stops fucking people in the ass I will likely also be supporting.
- Dec 19, 2017
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I like it so far keep up the good work Cheesecake3D.
the Tongue is Long and Thicc should make for some interesting content
You got a good style, the animation of the girl in the bathroom, I could use that as a screensaver hehe
the Tongue is Long and Thicc should make for some interesting content
You got a good style, the animation of the girl in the bathroom, I could use that as a screensaver hehe
what do i do after talking with asshlyn in her room? dont know where else to go,and dont know how tosave game either,please make the setting simple like renpy and make the text can be rollback thx
That is the end of the current version, perhaps I should specify this in the developer notes on the front page.
There is no save game feature yet (not a big deal since this version isn't long). However, saving and the scroll wheel will be added in the August version, along with bug fixes and more content.
I actually have not thought of that, but that is an interesting idea...
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Actual models worthy of the big ass tag. I know its the first release so is it better waiting for further updates or does it have some decent stuff already?
Interesting thing is there are women who have big tongues >.>
- Apr 12, 2018
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Do you plan to add any sex scenes with any MILF in next update or anytime soon ? I'm here just for the busty MILFs and I want to know is it worth the wait...
I like what you're doing with the game so far; will definitely be checking for updates frequently. My heart can't take another abandonware :'(
would there be away to have character skin change i would love to play as a black guy, there are very limited games with thicc girls and black males as the lead, and usually when there is a black male mc, ppl complain that why they cant be white instead, I would like to be represented more in these type of games