Ren'Py Abandoned Soft Asians [Demo 0.2] [Ero Content]

[Ero Content]

that story went from 0 to 100 in an instant.
first everything seems completely normal.
then he drugs a person he supposedly cares about like its nothing and drags his "friend" to the bathroom to fuck her against her will as if its the obvious thing to do.
to say that nothing about this makes sense would be an understatement.

having the mc go from normal guy and friend of the family to violent rapist in an instant without any explanation is not what i would call a great start.

Thank you very much for the feedback, I will definitely take it into consideration to try to plan more linear actions, thanks for testing

 

[Ero Content]

Is there actually a futa protag option or am i being baited?

The intention is to develop 2 campaigns, 1 based in a man and the other futanari, for now I'm just collecting some feedback to mature the story, soon I intend to work better on the characters

 

[Ero Content]

Karachi Pakistan?

No, it's a completely fictional city, I could locate it in Japan or South Korea, but I avoided using any name that already exists

 

[vs2011xyz]

why is it so difficult to make and androd port. its a whole different ;level of coding or time consuuming.

 

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Ok, I see that it says Futa/trans protagonist and Male protagonist, does that mean that the player selects the Protagonist at the beginning or that the Male Mc is going to change?

Leaving that aside, dev the kinks/fetishes are going to be avoidable (they don't happen in the story according to player choice) skippable ( they happen in the story but the player doesn't see the scene) forced by plot?
I see a post that says Mc drugs someone and then practically rapes her, is that avoidable? (I have no problem playing with an Mc who is an asshole depending on the situation.)

Thanks, good luck.

I haven't enabled the shemale character yet.
I am collecting this feedback precisely to better define the story, ty for u comment

There is no rape. MC's friend asks him to drug her aunt because she's bringing friends over (no way to avoid this, you can only choose whether you give her 2 or 3 pills) then when she arrives with her friends he pulls her (the friend not her aunt that he drugged) into the bathroom and has sex with her. He's a bit aggressive but she's into it.

Spoiler: just what a girl being raped would say, lmao.

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The game has very perverse characters, who can even surpass the MC, Ming's construction is based on a completely uninhibited character, who likes and takes pleasure in playing erotic games with his friends.
Your personality borders on nymphomania.

The scene may seem a little strong, but the protagonist will become a pawn on Ming's infernal board
Thank you very much for testing and commenting

 

[Ero Content]

First of all, thanx for the share and good luck with your game.

Pros:

1) It is not a tentacle locker game.
2) It is a "real" demo, and not those lame "sample" type demos we were blessed/cursed with a while back.
3) No real porn or green orcs/kobolds were found in this demo.

Cons:

1) That hair man. Can't touch this.

Overall: Good Demo, shows promise.

2 suggestions: Please include tags for current content only & please include some normal sized models for those of us who are not into exaggerated boobs and booties all that much.

Thanx again for the share & Good luck!​

Thank you very much for your comment meanoldman

 

[Ero Content]

why is it so difficult to make and androd port. its a whole different ;level of coding or time consuuming.

I really don't know how to do this port, I've been learning the Renpy language for the last 2 months, so I'm not so easy with some aspects
Ty for the comment

 

[consumptionist]

The intention is to develop 2 campaigns, 1 based in a man and the other futanari, for now I'm just collecting some feedback to mature the story, soon I intend to work better on the characters

the tags are for CURRENT content not future content as per site rules
false advertising is not a plus for many who use tag search system to find the content they want.

having directions highlighted without having to mouse around the screen to find directions would be a plus as hiding them until you mouse over them is time wasted searching. it is only a minor thing but even a minor irritation can become a real annoyance after some time. just seems a pointless waste of players time for no reason.
it is already a sandbox game, which is not the most popular choice given how so many devs get it very wrong, so adding more pointless gaming puff just seems an odd choice.

writing needs some work as even from the get go you have someone mentioned by MC as both a 'he' and a 'she'.

more here not to like for my taste
not a fan of this game but i do wish you well

 

[joryh]

why?

Cause they're deformed and hideous.

 

[Ero Content]

the tags are for CURRENT content not future content as per site rules
false advertising is not a plus for many who use tag search system to find the content they want.

having directions highlighted without having to mouse around the screen to find directions would be a plus as hiding them until you mouse over them is time wasted searching. it is only a minor thing but even a minor irritation can become a real annoyance after some time. just seems a pointless waste of players time for no reason.
it is already a sandbox game, which is not the most popular choice given how so many devs get it very wrong, so adding more pointless gaming puff just seems an odd choice.

writing needs some work as even from the get go you have someone mentioned by MC as both a 'he' and a 'she'.

more here not to like for my taste
not a fan of this game but i do wish you well

Perfect, as soon as possible I will change this tag.
I plan to make object interactions more visible, and the text/writing definitely needs correction, at some point I will hire someone to review the texts.

Thanks for your sincere feedback

 

[Tyrranus]

despite my harsh/blunt assessment I do hope you consider it. The idea here is sound but you need a lot of work before this is really going to be worth playing.

 

[zeus04]

 

[elistraee]

watched with great interest
please enable Shemale protagonist asap lol

 

[ThaDude1977]

Question. Is this going to be a harem? also Is there going to be romance or is it more of a sex buddy type deal?

 

[Ero Content]

despite my harsh/blunt assessment I do hope you consider it. The idea here is sound but you need a lot of work before this is really going to be worth playing.

I thank you in every way and I will definitely take all feedback here to improve the game

 

[Ero Content]

Question. Is this going to be a harem? also Is there going to be romance or is it more of a sex buddy type deal?

My initial idea was to work and keep the characters close to different girls, I think it's closer to the idea of a harem, I believe that a singular romance can obstruct the game's proposal a little.

Thanks for your comment

 

[AK Khan]

Does anyone know how to find the Ayumi's room keys here?

 

[vincent13]

Does anyone know how to find the Ayumi's room keys here?

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click on the 2 books called trinity

 

[FreakinRolinss]

click on the 2 books called trinity

I have clicked already,but it seems that I have to do something else.

 

[papakrisss]

there is a second book with this name...then should be the key around the table be