VN Ren'Py Abandoned Something Special [v0.1.13] [WonderGames]

2.20 star(s) 43 Votes

ThunderRob

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May 10, 2018
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I do not think the dev is an English first and uses a machine translator and touches up the remaining engrish afterwards..it lacks nuance and emotion and comes off blunt and cold..but generally speaking..the game is an easy play..inoffensive and worthy of some time.
 

SandmansMisery

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The renders are damn good. His engrish need work an also lacking content and story, but with time this could be a really good game. Not the best but I liked the update I'll checking back again.
 
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Watcher X

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Dec 26, 2017
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A harem game with mother and sisters? I don't think I've seen anything like this before....:rolleyes:
 

Mikey Mike

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Feb 18, 2018
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My previous saves no workey, and am too damn lazy to start over!:( I guess it's time to check the Hopper!;)
 

FreshRevenge

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Sigh, I swear this feels like a 5 year old wrote this? A grown ass man in the shower says "I like your boobs and I think their awesome"

The renders are great to look at but the story or the writing feels like someone in kindergarden wrote it. I think you need to collaborate with a writer, you can stick with the renders, let someone else write the dialog and story.
 

zh

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This game made my day :ROFLMAO:
I don't think the dialogues are bad since they made me laugh ! The dialogues seems to be like some sort of old porn meme :ROFLMAO: inc in next update : red-head will ask "hey, since my shower is broken, wanna help me do some plumbing ? I see you already have a big hard... pipe... " :ROFLMAO:
 
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Maderyx

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Feb 26, 2018
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Except the very beginning and some of Annie's lines everything was just pure "hornyness".
Every single Character behaves worse than a constantly horny 13yr boy. Because they at least know whats OK to say out loud and what better kept in their head.

Also the MCs Model looks like hes the same age as his Mother which makes this even more weird
 
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botc76

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There is those that have English as their first language, that fail to string sentences together as well though. Some games out there have dialogues that make you wonder if the creator ever spoken to any woman or adult at all before.
That would have been so much better, if your post didn't read so awkward. This way it feels a bit like the pot calling the kettle black.
 
2.20 star(s) 43 Votes