VN Ren'Py Completed Sorcerer [v1.0.0] [Talothral]

[Arigon]

So why I am loving this
1- Main Character doesn't look like a horny 18 or less year old asian boy with a horse dick. Instead is mature and am fine with the horse dick
2- The story is interesting.
3-The main character has discipline and class. At least so far.
4-I suspect the main character is going to be a mega powerful sorcerer and I like that kind of thing.
5-I suspect there will be a harem building process that is good.
6-I like the direction it seems to be going, and having all night with Li demonstrates class and truly is just a good vibe.

Some music might be a nice add, but knowing that costs money to produce I am ok without it. Maybe something built in to allow us to add our own sound track without tabbing etc.

7- I like the menace of our MC, the violence is good. I am pretty happy over all.

 

[MrFriendly]

Well, she's adopted. I don't consider that incest. I'm a huge zombie fan.

1. The MC in 'Now & Then' is also an older guy.
2. I don't drink much anymore. Not judging though.

If he raised her and does the pursuing it does to me. I am not.

1) cool, see previous. Any other older protag games to suggest?

2) I don’t do it often, but for our anniversary we splurged on a bottle of the good stuff. Considering how shitty it’s been it felt like a good idea.

This game also has the bonus faerie dragon familiar which was a nice touch. Haven’t seen that in a game before. Honestly has a lot more positives than negatives.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

So why I am loving this
1- Main Character doesn't look like a horny 18 or less year old asian boy with a horse dick. Instead is mature and am fine with the horse dick
2- The story is interesting.
3-The main character has discipline and class. At least so far.
4-I suspect the main character is going to be a mega powerful sorcerer and I like that kind of thing.
5-I suspect there will be a harem building process that is good.
6-I like the direction it seems to be going, and having all night with Li demonstrates class and truly is just a good vibe.

Some music might be a nice add, but knowing that costs money to produce I am ok without it. Maybe something built in to allow us to add our own sound track without tabbing etc.

Agreed mostly. The MC doesn't have a 'horse dick'. This has a 'Reluctant Archon' feeling to it. Only a bit darker. As for music, no thanks. I kick on Spotify and mute game sounds.

If he raised her and does the pursuing it does to me. I am not.

1) cool, see previous. Any other older protag games to suggest?

2) I don’t do it often, but for our anniversary we splurged on a bottle of the good stuff. Considering how shitty it’s been it felt like a good idea.

This game also has the bonus faerie dragon familiar which was a nice touch. Haven’t seen that in a game before. Honestly has a lot more positives than negatives.

Several months back, I started drinking heavy again after many years of not drinking. Fucking stress is a motherfucker. But, I had to stop. My girls weren't happy with me doing that. But, yeah. I like the game so far. As long as certain things aren't forced to further the story, I may end up becoming a patron. Same as I'm think about doing with 'Now & Then'.

 

[Arigon]

I have a lot of empathy here. I am not addicted to alcohol, but when I drink, I can definitely be known to abuse it. Even had legal problems from it, but that is in the past. Simple empathy here. Booze is good for what ails you, until it isn't... or ain't I will never judge a brother of the cups. I only offer understanding, and empathy.

Horse dick... yeah ok, maybe our protagonist doesn't have a horse dick.... I am not ashamed to say I envy what he does have... but I am soooooooo over all these pre pubescent asian dudes with cocks the size of their forearms. Not trying to be racist or a dick, but as military and fed gov, I travelled a lot... Asian dudes do not, as a rule impress like our typical 18 or less year old Korean or Chinese or Japanese protagonists have.... so it is AMAZINGLY good to find a game that it is more....... dunno.... REALISTIC maybe?

I just remember S. Korea and Japan that the girls I dated all commented about Asian penis in a less than flattering way. I guess these games give some of the creators what they wish they had???

 

[Talothral]

I agree, that's why I said that the updates aren't that big, but always have actual story progression. It wasn't a complain, I actually prefer that from hours of grinding or meaningless filler content.

And not taken as a complaint, it's just one of those things that my brain went and was like "Oh hey explain that thing" just because, usually I can ignore it but occasionally not.

Short update and really not sure how any of it correlates with the story. But, I would like to fuck Susan. lol

It's background for Susan and to a point to Alexander (MC), so some of the things she does later on don't come out as a huge WTF moment and don't feel like it would be out of character for her. It continues in 0.7.0, mostly because it is the right time for this to happen as things starts to go weird after that.

And then other bits that I didn't quote, not in any particular order.
1) I like bodies that makes sense and are proportional. So no horse dicks or beach ball sized tits, unless they fit rest of the body. So if I make a giant expect body parts being proportional, not that I'm going to make a giant... or am I? >.>

2) Sex, unlike in TRS where sex was mandatory to reach the "good ending" it's more optional in here. Having sex with most characters don't change things drastically, and you aren't penalized for not having sex with most characters. But also keep in mind the situation, occasionally it is better not to have sex with the character even if the option presents itself, but that might be also the other way around. So no, turning Li down won't screw you over if you are on that path. For examples sake.

3) And not every update will make sense right at the moment playing, as you aren't making choices just for the moment in question but also for the future. Some might throw an extra hurdle in your way, some may screw you over, or you gain a boon for it. However one "bad choice" will not fuck you over completely, you need to make several bad choices for it to really fuck you up. And only one of them is related to sex, if you are impatient.

 

[Talothral]

Can we rename the mc?

And this slipped by me, yes you can rename the MC. It was added in 0.4.0.

 

[Deleted member 2752928]

hey, Talothral,

And this slipped by me, yes you can rename the MC. It was added in 0.4.0.

hope this finds you well.
any idea when v.0.6.0 for Mac should be released?

thanks in advance and cheers.

 

[Talothral]

hey, Talothral,



hope this finds you well.
any idea when v.0.6.0 for Mac should be released?

thanks in advance and cheers.

It's out already, but apparently the OP wasn't updated with it for some reason?

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[Deleted member 2752928]

hey, Talothral,

It's out already, but apparently the OP wasn't updated with it for some reason?

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my gratitude. cheers.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

And not taken as a complaint, it's just one of those things that my brain went and was like "Oh hey explain that thing" just because, usually I can ignore it but occasionally not.


It's background for Susan and to a point to Alexander (MC), so some of the things she does later on don't come out as a huge WTF moment and don't feel like it would be out of character for her. It continues in 0.7.0, mostly because it is the right time for this to happen as things starts to go weird after that.

And then other bits that I didn't quote, not in any particular order.
1) I like bodies that makes sense and are proportional. So no horse dicks or beach ball sized tits, unless they fit rest of the body. So if I make a giant expect body parts being proportional, not that I'm going to make a giant... or am I? >.>

2) Sex, unlike in TRS where sex was mandatory to reach the "good ending" it's more optional in here. Having sex with most characters don't change things drastically, and you aren't penalized for not having sex with most characters. But also keep in mind the situation, occasionally it is better not to have sex with the character even if the option presents itself, but that might be also the other way around. So no, turning Li down won't screw you over if you are on that path. For examples sake.

3) And not every update will make sense right at the moment playing, as you aren't making choices just for the moment in question but also for the future. Some might throw an extra hurdle in your way, some may screw you over, or you gain a boon for it. However one "bad choice" will not fuck you over completely, you need to make several bad choices for it to really fuck you up. And only one of them is related to sex, if you are impatient.

I just hope Susan isn't just some side piece. I'm already drawn to her more than the others.

 

[Talothral]

I just hope Susan isn't just some side piece. I'm already drawn to her more than the others.

Technically the answer is already there, take a look where her left hand is during the start of the meeting in the bar, and after she takes her coat off, that should give you the answer you need.

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[Deleted member 1571716]

Technically the answer is already there, take a look where her left hand is during the start of the meeting in the bar, and after she takes her coat off, that should give you the answer you need.

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I saw that. But, I'm sure you know that other devs have pulled an okie doke, even after giving blatant hints that someone will be an LI.

 

[Talothral]

I saw that. But, I'm sure you know that other devs have pulled an okie doke, even after giving blatant hints that someone will be an LI.

Sadly, I'm aware of it, and the concern is valid when it comes to a character you are interested in. But rest assured, someone like Susan isn't someone I would write doing things like that if I wouldn't have intention to follow through it. And I have too much respect of what she represents to make her shallow side fuck, if I'm allowed to be blunt.

 

[desmosome]

I travelled a lot... Asian dudes do not, as a rule impress like our typical 18 or less year old Korean or Chinese or Japanese protagonists have

So you've traveled around the world to peek at random dudes' penises?

Jokes aside, that's a pretty funny sentiment in itself. Based on your other post, you are ok with white guys having horse cocks but not Asians. Ethnicity does affect the average penis size slightly, but it doesn't affect the chances of being hung like a pornstar to a noticable degree since those are outliers for any race. It's certainly not a factor in having a "horsecock" since those sizes are essentially fictional for any race.

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

Really enjoyed the ride so far. The characters have their own distinct personalities and are consistent. Great renders.. good storyline. Not a story I usually click on but man am I glad I did. Definitely a bookmarked one for me. Really enjoying the MC's 'ethics' and how he goes about things. Two thumbs up!

 

[Monkey83]

As a adult game it is very boring, but i really like the story so far.

 

[Spfjolietjake]

Finally played the update.. Still loving it. Looking forward to more. Thank you

 

[Arigon]

I was being somewhat sarcastic, but yeah, there are lots of jokes regarding penis length and race.

What I guess I really at the heart of the matter wanted to get across is the creepy young young protagonist ICSTOR seems to prefer for his "games"/novels is very off putting. Honestly could be any race just make em legal looking if you are going to put a face on at all
Cheers!

 

[Trapezio]

Well, I really enjoyed the story so far.

I have a question for the Author: are the girls that the MC helped going to come back? I think they were such good characters, so it would be nice if they came back (not necessarily as love interests).

 

[Talothral]

Well, I really enjoyed the story so far.

I have a question for the Author: are the girls that the MC helped going to come back? I think they were such good characters, so it would be nice if they came back (not necessarily as love interests).

Gail and Teagan? Yeah they have a visit or two later on, bit depends on few things. But no, they aren't love interest simply due Teagan not liking guys that way and Gail wanting to be a good girlfriend she stays loyal.