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Who do you like best in the prologue?

  • Rafflesia Yudi

    Votes: 30 30.3%
  • Astra Yanwang

    Votes: 69 69.7%

  • Total voters
    99
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broken_division

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Hi there i made an android port v0.8

 
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Page_Turner

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I love the look of the art, and the environments are good so far; but I can't really keep playing if the spelling and grammar is so poor. I'm guessing the creator's first language isn't English? It seems like they just put the Russian version through Google Translate. 9/10 for the look, 1/10 for the story. Such great potential--maybe hire a translator or someone to clean up the script.
 
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LustFight

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I love the look of the art, and the environments are good so far; but I can't really keep playing if the spelling and grammar is so poor. I'm guessing the creator's first language isn't English? It seems like they just put the Russian version through Google Translate. 9/10 for the look, 1/10 for the story. Such great potential--maybe hire a translator or someone to clean up the script.
I'm working on improving the English in the game. Thanks <3
 

petertavy

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Aug 21, 2020
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I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

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ScriptError: could not find label 'lonlylove3'.
I got a similar error but a different missing label. Traceback attached-I-hope

I did the following: went to lake & met lonly; somehow upset her; went to the 2
forests, then to the bridge & then got the error. Please any advice?

later: I am having difficulty trying to insert traceback

View attachment traceback.txt View attachment traceback.txt
 
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LustFight

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I got a similar error but a different missing label. Traceback attached-I-hope

I did the following: went to lake & met lonly; somehow upset her; went to the 2
forests, then to the bridge & then got the error. Please any advice?

later: I am having difficulty trying to insert traceback

View attachment 1883293 View attachment 1883293
Oh, this is my mistake. I'll fix it for the next update
 

Content_Consumer

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Dec 24, 2019
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I tried to like it, I really did.
But I don't think I can slog through this 'story' if its going to go on like this.

I started out by picking a random location [what is even the point since it looks like you're supposed to see it all anyway? might as well be linear story.] and ended up finding "Lonly". Then I spent the next 5-10 minutes trying to pay attention to the most painfully boring and banal 'conversation' that two people could have, including the weather, things they don't remember but do remember because its in their genetics [this is illogical], bath water and finally this all culminated in an exchange that makes no sense and Lonly gets offended by something and then retorts with some word salad "Poor man, they humiliated him. You still melt in your bath." ... I don't have a clue what happened in this whole dialogue, I don't know what either of them were talking about, I don't know what the offensive remark was and I don't understand her reply.

So far nothing interesting has happened and I don't care about either the MC or this "Lonly". I have no desire to know anything more about either of them.

After all that I decide, lets give it one last try and go in the opposite direction ...

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Its like it can read my mind.

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Huh ...


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Bruh ... for real, its reading my mind.

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LustFight

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I tried to like it, I really did.
But I don't think I can slog through this 'story' if its going to go on like this.

I started out by picking a random location [what is even the point since it looks like you're supposed to see it all anyway? might as well be linear story.] and ended up finding "Lonly". Then I spent the next 5-10 minutes trying to pay attention to the most painfully boring and banal 'conversation' that two people could have, including the weather, things they don't remember but do remember because its in their genetics [this makes no sense], bath water and finally this all culminated in an exchange that makes no sense and Lonly gets offended by something and then retorts with some word salad "Poor man, they humiliated him. You still melt in your bath." ... I don't have a clue what happened in this whole dialogue, I don't know what either of them were talking about, I don't know what the offensive remark was and I don't understand her reply.

So far nothing interesting has happened and I don't care about either the MC or this "Lonly". I have no desire to know anything more about either of them.

After all that I decide, lets give it one last try and go in the opposite direction ...

View attachment 1891872

Its like it can read my mind.

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Huh ...


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Bruh ... for real, its reading my mind.

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xD Thanks for the extended opinion! I'm working on a better translation and will post a fully checked English translation in the next updates
 
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Udayana

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I'm working on a better translation and will post a fully checked English translation in the next updates
Thanks to you. This story is rather complicated; even if one knows what saṃsāra means, it would help if dialogues were clearer.
 

zomkung

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Sep 28, 2017
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The animation and render is good. But not the mainstream game, and the niche is too hard to grasp, hard to get many patreons I thinks.

Some niche
 
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LustFight

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The animation and render is good. But not the mainstream game, and the niche is too hard to grasp, hard to get many patreons I thinks.

Some niche
Thanks, but what does this game have to do with mine? I don't see anything in common from the description.
 

zomkung

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Thanks, but what does this game have to do with mine? I don't see anything in common from the description.
I gave you an example of a niche, they are extremely one but still easy to catch up with for most people.

I don't know, maybe if you finish this game. Can try reusing assets to create a new game with a new plot. See if it works.
 
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