VN Ren'Py Abandoned Soul at a Crossroads [Ep.1 Full] [MFN]

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virtually 1 min of play?amelia asks me to join in the baths,blowjob then back home to be asked by matilda to join her next day,end of update?
 
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amiable34 said:
virtually 1 min of play?amelia asks me to join in the baths,blowjob then back home to be asked by matilda to join her next day,end of update?
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Ntr scene with Amelia + Oscar conversation.
Play again - love scene with Amelia + Matilda conversation.
 
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Android port update checked and works fine
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I will add it in op tomorrow. Im just not at home today, sorry.
UPD: android added in OP. Thanks to Manewr for great work! If you played game with his/her android port, please, give him/her a like:)
 
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What's the difference in the Good Hero vs Bad Hero paths? I think Oscar is a dick so I'm leaning towards Bad Hero, but I don't want to then start treating the girls like shit because I went down the Bad Hero path...
 
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Soundtrack. Intro + Day 1.
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It's not a judgement on the music itself, but about the selection, your choices, you picking up these specific songs. I am also not going into the usage rights part which if not sorted out can potentially turn into a big problem.
The music you have chosen, in my opinion, is too distracting, loud and unfitting the the game and its scenes.
It can work well on sequences with videos, where nothing has to be done by the player - if you have no clicks and no reading - where you can sit end enjoy the trip and the lyrics.
 
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szabon said:
It's not a judgement on the music itself, but about the selection, your choices, you picking up these specific songs. I am also not going into the usage rights part which if not sorted out can potentially turn into a big problem.
The music you have chosen, in my opinion, is too distracting, loud and unfitting the the game and its scenes.
It can work well on sequences with videos, where nothing has to be done by the player - if you have no clicks and no reading - where you can sit end enjoy the trip and the lyrics.
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Hey!
About music: i made it all for my pleasure. And i like music :)
If u don't like this songs, u can turn off them:) or u can listen your music. Its not a big problem, on my opinion.
About music rights, credits: i don't post my games on patreon. Patreon only for news, arts and votes in future. And for people, who want support my ideas and creativity:)
My games only for f95 zone, so, i don't think about rights and etc:)
 
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Faptime said:
What's the difference in the Good Hero vs Bad Hero paths? I think Oscar is a dick so I'm leaning towards Bad Hero, but I don't want to then start treating the girls like shit because I went down the Bad Hero path...
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Right now bad or good don't influence on girls :)
 
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Hey!
About music: i made it all for my pleasure. And i like music :)
If u don't like this songs, u can turn off them:) or u can listen your music. Its not a big problem, on my opinion.
About music rights, credits: i don't post my games on patreon. Patreon only for news, arts and votes in future. And for people, who want support my ideas and creativity:)
My games only for f95 zone, so, i don't think about rights and etc:)
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Right. Again I repeat that it wasn't a judgement on the music. I didn't say that the music was bad.
I gave a suggestion on how you could have more focus on what you write. You can have that only, or you can have that enhanced by the music if well fitting and not distracting,or you can have none if both music and text conflict on the attention of the player. It's your game, your choice and it's fine. I simply think it can work better if you tweak that. ;)
 
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I Liked so far. But i find it weird, at least the NTR path because the MC see all the girls being fucked in front of him or doing something with others and he acts like he doesn't cares. And to me is weird because there are moments where the MC says he missed them or that he loves them, aside that he is fisically atracted to all of them. If you love them or are at least atracted you would act or react in some way, not just see them with a blank stare, like you see a wall.
 
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