3.70 star(s) 59 Votes

louisamay

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Jan 2, 2021
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Developer posed a simple question, "Will you shun your feelings to appease your son, or will you give in to your carnal desires and possibly destroy what's left of your relationship?"
Restated the question for clarity, will I let an adolescent's immature angst that has been making everyone miserable for the last five years or so control my life and condemn me to a desolate undeserved ceibacy, or will I listen to my little head, my dear friend and the author of so many of my bad decisions for the last 35 years, and let it lead me to lusty, passionate adventures in unrestrained sex with beautiful young women before old age drains my powers?
See? Simpli restating a problem can make the solution obvious!

Answer key:
If you chose the second path, A+ and go get 'em!
If you chose the first option, F- and just leave your weiner in the wastebasket as you leave the classrooom
Well either way, his weiner ended up in a wastebasket...
 

TheSmokeGuy

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Aug 18, 2021
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Is that it - Final ? no more adventures. if so that was the most stupidest fuckedup disapointing piece of crap I have eva seen ending a what could have been a great game. Thank god I was not a patron Not worth downloading guys. that was just so fucked up. score out of 10 - 2 and thats only because it had some of the most incredible animations in it. but thats all you are getting from me.
 
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adr5ian

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Nov 5, 2019
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We should respect an artist's integrity. If you buy a book, you expect the writer to write it as you please? Trying to please the paying supporters surely ruined a few games. I can understand if one dude pays to commission an entire game to suit his fantasies, but I don't think it's the case with those complaining so harshly in this case. I hope the developer isn't going to be influenced by this.
 

fez16

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Dec 7, 2022
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We should respect an artist's integrity. If you buy a book, you expect the writer to write it as you please? Trying to please the paying supporters surely ruined a few games. I can understand if one dude pays to commission an entire game to suit his fantasies, but I don't think it's the case with those complaining so harshly in this case. I hope the developer isn't going to be influenced by this.
Integrity? Lol bro just wanted to troll.
 

cyphre

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Jul 13, 2024
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We should respect an artist's integrity. If you buy a book, you expect the writer to write it as you please? Trying to please the paying supporters surely ruined a few games. I can understand if one dude pays to commission an entire game to suit his fantasies, but I don't think it's the case with those complaining so harshly in this case. I hope the developer isn't going to be influenced by this.
I will respect artists integrity in a work of art. Kind of in the name. Whatever this is has nothing to do with art in any way, shape or form. Stop defending terrible games and/or decisions.
 

adr5ian

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Nov 5, 2019
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I will respect artists integrity in a work of art. Kind of in the name. Whatever this is has nothing to do with art in any way, shape or form. Stop defending terrible games and/or decisions.
This is art and actually very good art. Even more, some of the earliest known forms of art were erotica and much of the art always was erotica. Some of the best examples of art are erotica, from ancient Greek statues, to erotic sculptures in the temples of India, to the abundance of nudes in Western paintings.

There an article on Wikipedia called Erotic Art, take a look.
 
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cyphre

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Jul 13, 2024
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This is art and actually very good art. Even more, some of the earliest known forms of art were erotica and much of the art always was erotica.
???

If you mean VN as a medium, of course it's art, no one remotely implied anything else and i don't know where this weird generalization of yours came from. I however meant this particular disaster, and no, you objectively cannot call this art, as inherent part of being a work of art is being appreciated for it's beauty/emotional fulfillment, whatever emotions a work is supposed to invoke. This is simply an aimless mess even without a criminally awful ending(s).
 
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adr5ian

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Nov 5, 2019
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???

If you mean VN as a medium, of course it's art, no one remotely implied anything else and i don't know where this weird generalization of yours came from. I however meant this particular disaster, and no, you objectively cannot call this art, as inherent part of being a work of art is being appreciated for it's beauty/emotional fulfillment, whatever emotions a work is supposed to invoke. This is simply an aimless mess even without a criminally awful ending(s).
Shell I quote you again saying this "has nothing to do with art in any way, shape or form". Let's leave it as it is. The author of this game is a very talented artist, one of the best in adult video games development. Criticism is expected and normal, but some here went way too far.

PS, I only played till Chapter 2. That scene at the end, in the club... if that's not great art, I don't know what is.
 

MrJay

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Apr 21, 2017
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We should respect an artist's integrity. If you buy a book, you expect the writer to write it as you please? Trying to please the paying supporters surely ruined a few games. I can understand if one dude pays to commission an entire game to suit his fantasies, but I don't think it's the case with those complaining so harshly in this case. I hope the developer isn't going to be influenced by this.
No, artists don't get special treatment. Make stupid shit, you get called out.
 

95zuser99031

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Jan 28, 2020
100
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This game is shit. So, two endings. The first ever decision in the game locks you into one of two routes. DEATH route or FAILURE OF POTENTIAL route. Your decisions dont matter, fuck the fatty and you get a fat scene and Steph scene.
DEATH - Accept Tina
You fuck Tina a bunch. You fucking die, well your dick does so its close enough. Of aids, herpes and shit they havent inveted yet.

FOP - Refuse Tina
You refused Tina, you got to have sex with Blair and Stephanie, a threesome even. Then Stephanie is freaked out by your crotch goblin marrying her mother and she vanishes. Blair gets pregnant.

Thats the game. Chaos has a bland ending from what I remember but this is just crap, made even worse because Chaos had the same damn ending and Goose clearly didnt learn a thing.
 

Hungover00

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Apr 29, 2023
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Stupidest ending, but otherwise, a fun little game (with impressive animations). Very stupid endings though. So dumb.
 
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UnDoubleUpUhUh

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May 13, 2018
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Really enjoyed this game...until the end. MAJOR loose thread left unresolved, the rest felt hurried and out of tune with the entire rest of the game.

Like your work, Goosenards, and I'll sponsor (via either Subscribestar or Unifans) because I want to see more, but the ending here was a real disappointment. I'd have felt better subscribing if the story had further chapters (and would have subscribed for a larger amount) than with the end on this one.

Of course, given the MC's vivid dreams, there is an available retcon if you choose to go that way...
 
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ionogo

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Feb 13, 2024
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While the turns are abrupt, it seems to me a disconnect to think that a smut game (which this is), where a creepy father fucks schoolgirls should have happy endings. I think it can be given a bit of a pass since it is brief. It's not Acting Lessons level emotional involvement followed by a rug pull ending.
 

Enigemm

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May 30, 2024
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I really do not want to add more insult to injury but this is the worst ever ending I've ever seen to any AVN. I will not even play the excuse of writer's block because not even writer's block would produce that crappy ending of an AVN. He dealt with the build up good enough then poof....you're locked unto one particular root early on and hell breaks lose no matter what your other choices are. ALL endings are shitty, downright BS. I think the dev himself doubted himself. A complete waste of playing time.
 

Dessolos

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Jul 25, 2017
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I really do not want to add more insult to injury but this is the worst ever ending I've ever seen to any AVN. I will not even play the excuse of writer's block because not even writer's block would produce that crappy ending of an AVN. He dealt with the build up good enough then poof....you're locked unto one particular root early on and hell breaks lose no matter what your other choices are. ALL endings are shitty, downright BS. I think the dev himself doubted himself. A complete waste of playing time.
yeah seriously like if I didn't like Blaire the ending would of been way worst of an disappointment for me. The only good thing is Blaire got a good ending but the rest felt like it was a big joke to him. I could of accept the Tina ending if there was a way to get a good ending for her as well.
 
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