wildride69

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Ok I can agree about it's weird dissociation with reality. But for me a porn game ostensibly set in the real world should have characters and plot that seem real ( not real just realistic) otherwise the story component looses it's logical and emotional value. I can view a million porn pictures but a good porn game story brings the excitement to another level. That's the games value prop over just images. Example ;I'm just going through the moments when Laura and Emily are being told they are to be in a lesbian contest.Emily is pregnant,getting married and the one that loses the contest is going to fuck 4 guys.The girls reaction and immediate acquiescence to Garys command and his evil indifference to Emily's pregnancy and marriage- ,"She'll have a niche market in a few months." is ridiculous. Not just the arch villain coldness but the bizarre confidence that Emily is going to be his working pregnant prostitute months from now. And Inga the toady minion is treating the whole thing like arranging a school play. Wouldn't you think one or both characters would have a tremendous reaction to this cruel and evil indifference to their fate. Throw themselves at both of them so in the scuffle they are too bloody to take part in the meeting, kick him in the nuts,scream you "Fucking scumbag we'll kill you"-ANYTHING. But their behavior narrative is to shuffle them to the next set of porn panels. When villains are this wooden, their followers mindless sicko's and the victims gutless fodder there is no sense of a story in real time or place just a weird science fiction of porn set pieces. I could go on but I will spare you. Frankly as I've said before the porn set pieces are very creative. The shaving vignette was very cool. But I am dropping this story from my reading list. It just doesn't work for me,cute abused chicks or not. Again thanks you have been patient. And good luck to Laura.
It's interesting that you say

"But for me a porn game ostensibly set in the real world should have characters and plot that seem real ( not real just realistic) otherwise the story component looses it's logical and emotional value."

but you also say

"A pistol might not be the way to go. Can she use a knife. The org would be crippled and they might just fall apart."

The reasons it makes, no more sense than porn logic... You seem to be suggesting that a highly educated top level executive having to deal with light trauma/blackmail situations would go murderous vengeful murderer in the span of a few weeks. Laura hasn't been subjected to any violent brutal rapes, no matter what people want to call rape in today's society.

Laura is highly educated and smart not violent, so it stands to reason she would and is using the tools at her disposal to fight back, her friends, her brains, her observations and constantly looking for a weak spot to escape. So knowing what we know about her situation as it stands today, her current situation is much more realistic than her going to get a gun and shooting someone.
 

zernex

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It's interesting that you say

"But for me a porn game ostensibly set in the real world should have characters and plot that seem real ( not real just realistic) otherwise the story component looses it's logical and emotional value."

but you also say

"A pistol might not be the way to go. Can she use a knife. The org would be crippled and they might just fall apart."

The reasons it makes, no more sense than porn logic... You seem to be suggesting that a highly educated top level executive having to deal with light trauma/blackmail situations would go murderous vengeful murderer in the span of a few weeks. Laura hasn't been subjected to any violent brutal rapes, no matter what people want to call rape in today's society.

Laura is highly educated and smart not violent, so it stands to reason she would and is using the tools at her disposal to fight back, her friends, her brains, her observations and constantly looking for a weak spot to escape. So knowing what we know about her situation as it stands today, her current situation is much more realistic than her going to get a gun and shooting someone.
Look I like her body, the rape setups,and the clothing. The "plot" allows a sexy supposedly intelligent bitch to be abused and humiliated by powerful evil dominator's. I say evil because no one who forces a women to do what they coerce her to do is anything less then evil. My suggestion about guns or knives or whatever was just being provocative. This game is not an action movie,film noir or a serial killer story and so guns in this tale are largely unseen or wagged around for threat purposes.Gun play would be distasteful and out of genre form in a porn NTR corruption detective soap like this.

That she thinks her entrapment can be manipulated in this profoundly corrupt fantasy city stretches the credibility of logic.But that's okay because it allows the author to showcase every level of depravity that can be perpetrated on this sexy submissive, soon to be exhibitionist prostitute. She makes little creative attempts before or during her physical and mental abuse to reduce the level and extent of the abuse-other then the usual "I'll fuck him harder so he cums sooner". She lets those tits fly outside her outfits anywhere anytime. Proud of them I guess and certainly not shy. Her outbursts of shock from each new horror presented to her amount to the kind of short blurted "OW" you do when you stub your toe. It fades without follow-up. She quickly accepts and folds. She is clearly presented as a fuckmeat prop with the detective plot a thin porn action framework. Her quest provides the stereotypical ascending ladder of porn scene atrocities. You know the scenes;groping,dress humiliation,strip show, dildo masturbation,stripping at gun point, BJ,rape,anal rape,gang rape,forced lesbianism,husband cucking,prostituting,marriage threat,virgin anal rape,gang rape.

Her high level executive title is window dressing-she has zero agency,self or otherwise. She never prepares for physical threat-she leaves herself defenseless. She slides easily, without much mental turmoil ( a pleasant lunch with a friend dressed like a whore after a previous days rape) into each descending level of depraved behavior. No doubt she'll reach her justice goal. Silliness like this needs a happy ending. Unlikely they show a more realistic end for a victim of such abuse (voluntarily doing something under threat is not acceptance). Trauma,therapy,PTSD or a mind broken shell of a woman craving abuse and self harm. Perhaps even a trafficked women disappeared once she is used up. Dark it's true but probably closer to real.

BTW Intelligence and violence are not mutually exclusive, Her intelligence is assumed here not proven. The inner and outer dialog given this character throughout does nothing to dispel my conclusion. I can't help it if I was looking for something a little more raw.This is just my opinion and it was fun to opine.My experience was good. I'm sure you will enjoy the story and that's great. It's actually a big nasty fun tale for what it is. You can't beats Laura's calves or ass..or, well maybe you can! I'm likely dropping it as I have others to keep up with so consider this my last comment.
 
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Sorry to drop by but I must add that the scene that made me run screaming and laughing to the door on this game was Gary's demand they both be fucked on Emily's wedding day-in any hole, Ha!. A day after the stage fuck show no less! No pimp, no where, no how would attempt this and no bitch ass whore would accept it. Death would be preferable. Just cartoon dialog-"she knew what she was getting into" and "wait Gary my panties" along with the guys even more juvenile observations about the ladies.Hike up the skirts ladies and like little robots against the wall they do. God take a bullet or give it bitch. This would be a perfect example of a justifiable moment of violence in this turd. Maybe one of these robotic cock sleeves could lose it and punch Gary in his ridiculous nose-just a little. Ha.
 
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Sorry to drop by but I must add that the scene that made me run screaming and laughing to the door on this game was Gary's demand they both be fucked on Emily's wedding day-in any hole, Ha!. A day after the stage fuck show no less! No pimp, no where, no how would attempt this and no bitch ass whore would accept it. Death would be preferable. Just cartoon dialog-"she knew what she was getting into" and "wait Gary my panties" along with the guys even more juvenile observations about the ladies.Hike up the skirts ladies and like little robots against the wall they do. God take a bullet or give it bitch. This would be a perfect example of a justifiable moment of violence in this turd. Maybe one of these robotic cock sleeves could lose it and punch Gary in his ridiculous nose-just a little. Ha.
It's a porn game, now go do some breathing exercises lil pup
 
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zernex

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It's a porn game, now go do some breathing exercises lil pup
Oh for Christs sake just having fun with the silly thing. Though I must say it is a monster of ridiculous dialog. Best to just look at the pictures-elsewhere. And isn't it true that the bigger crime is human trafficking rather then drugs or whatever. Whether in a sweat shop or office tower,prostitution or clerk coercion by threat to life is enslavement and thus human trafficking. Tons of witnesses, all the girls forced to work under one threat or the other-and men too. It's the elephant in the room..But the town and the law here is as fanciful a construction as the ladies.Porn indeed!
 
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moon.buster

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Looks like 2.8 has been released, anyone know when it'll be up on F95? :)

Really hoping there will be some more content with Oliver, like the walk in the park scene, the beach scene, or better yet, like the one where she went naked in from of the courier with Oliver standing right there (still can't believe we didn't actually get to see the courier scene, it just skipped past it as though it was unimportant, wish there had actually been a scene to go with it but it was still nice to see Laura finally go naked in front of another person with Oliver watching).
 

Kroelle Cook

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Have you played the 2.8 update yet? If so, any chance you could provide a download link? :)
2.8 will be here Friday (ish). Please wait for it...

We have a pretty well established release cycle for the game going on already.

1. Early Access
2. Official Release (Where we are now) - One week following the Early Access release.
3. Public Release - One week following the Official release.

It has worked this way for a long time now, and everyone benefits from it :)
 
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Looks like 2.8 has been released, anyone know when it'll be up on F95? :)

Really hoping there will be some more content with Oliver, like the walk in the park scene, the beach scene, or better yet, like the one where she went naked in from of the courier with Oliver standing right there (still can't believe we didn't actually get to see the courier scene, it just skipped past it as though it was unimportant, wish there had actually been a scene to go with it but it was still nice to see Laura finally go naked in front of another person with Oliver watching).
There was the whole Sunday teambuilding scene at PAM also :)

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moon.buster

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That scene happened in the last Sunday game day, or v2.5 if you will.
Yeah, sorry but no matter how hard I look for it, I'm just not getting that scene, the only thing that happens in PAM on the final Sunday of the game for me is a lousy scene where Berta fucks Laura with a double ended dildo. Can you tell me how to get it exactly?

Also, the specific game week and outfit Laura is wearing at the time would be very helpful too :)
 
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Kroelle Cook

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Yeah, sorry but no matter how hard I look for it, I'm just not getting that scene, the only thing that happens in PAM on the final Sunday of the game for me is a lousy scene where Berta fucks Laura with a double ended dildo. Can you tell me how to get it exactly?

Also, the specific game week and outfit Laura is wearing at the time would be very helpful too :)
Ooofff - I'm not sure about all the variables, but I'm sure BB needs to be bad, and obviously Oliver should to be home.
 
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