VN Ren'Py Abandoned Spring Break [v0.1] [The Golden Cherry]

[DA22]

Next time, read the synopsis and you will not be disappointed...
Because it's about a (step)sister for now, and all games have a beginning. So be patient

I do not know, but a girl that is over 18, while I am over 18 as well that comes in my home because my mother wants to have a sex life, would just be a stranger to me at that moment. Now if mom keeps hanging with that guy for dozens of years I might start to consider her more like family over time. I get the whole stepthing can be close to real sister or brother for that matter if live together since5-12 yo for ten years, not when you meet them as adults though and forced to live with them. They are just another stranger then, you cannot really avoid getting to know, really none of the incest or family vibes for me there.

 

[Karmadive]

Next time, read the synopsis and you will not be disappointed...
Because it's about a (step)sister for now, and all games have a beginning. So be patient

The Dev has walked back the Step sister definition for the game changing the name of the game and removing the incest tag. It just looks like they forgot to change the developer notes as it still has the old name for the game.

 

[CutieLvr]

Yaaaaa, NTR tag, Yaaaaa!!!!

Ha,ha,ha,ha,ha....I knew that those reactions would be forthcumming....lalalalalalalalala.

 

[Fapmaister]

I understand Fapmaister's anger to a certain extent but it shouldn't have offended the developer, but saying that incest is considered not related to blood is ignoring common sense XD. I think they should reevaluate the forum rules regarding the meaning of what incest is, that's what dictionaries or Google are for XD

yeah i went little to far, i know that. but people think step and adaptive is consider incest is beyond me.

 

[CutieLvr]

yeah i went little to far, i know that. but people think step and adaptive is consider incest is beyond me.

To respond to Raizen84, yes, they most definitely should reevaluate their position on censorship, PERIOD!!! There shouldn't be censorship on a dev's game at all. This is an adult website and we are dealing with art, fantasy, make believe. All this isn't real. If they think that they are protecting the nut-jobs who take this to heart and act on it. I beg to say different. The nut-jobs will do their thing, no matter what. You protect nothing and make the majority pay for it.

 

[CutieLvr]

The only idiot is you.

Learn our site tag rules..

README - Tags Rules And List [Updated 2024-01-29]

• Incest [Sex act between family relatives, including those not related by blood.]

Wow, that may be the rule....but, that's a pretty dumb rule and wrong on so many counts. IJS.

 

[goulet1995]

To respond to Raizen84, yes, they most definitely should reevaluate their position on censorship, PERIOD!!! There shouldn't be censorship on a dev's game at all. This is an adult website and we are dealing with art, fantasy, make believe. All this isn't real. If they think that they are protecting the nut-jobs who take this to heart and act on it. I beg to say different. The nut-jobs will do their thing, no matter what. You protect nothing and make the majority pay for it.

the problem here is that people complain about it to devs im sure most of them would prefer to not have to do the fake incest stuff but the only real way for most of these devs to make anything from these is by having the game on patreon who will ban them if they dont do it this way and there really arent any good alternatives

 

[CutieLvr]

the problem here is that people complain about it to devs im sure most of them would prefer to not have to do the fake incest stuff but the only real way for most of these devs to make anything from these is by having the game on patreon who will ban them if they dont do it this way and there really arent any good alternatives

I understand why they do this, it doesn't make it right. Patreon and others like them should stop trying to play police on an adult game site or with devs. This is only art, nothing more. Why don't they go after the devs who promote violence with guns, with emphasis on guns. Considering what is going on, especially in the US, now that, would be doing a service. But, as I said, it won't do nothing to deter the nut-jobs.

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

Wow, that may be the rule....but, that's a pretty dumb rule and wrong on so many counts. IJS.

I'm not going to go into laws and all that other shit, but "step-cast" and the like still counts as that in some countries, states, regions. The tag rule has been there forever.

People may not like it, but there are other sites and places they go then.

 

[CutieLvr]

I'm not going to go into laws and all that other shit, but "step-cast" and the like still counts as that in some countries, states, regions. The tag rule has been there forever.

People may not like it, but there are other sites and places they go then.

I hope you don't think I'm picking a bone with you SOL, I am just stating my opinion. It is what it is, but, we don't have to like it. By voicing our/my displeasure, maybe, just maybe, we'll see a change. If not, nothing is lost. This is not even close to a deal breaker.

 

[SonsOfLiberty]

I hope you don't think I'm picking a bone with you SOL, I am just stating my opinion. It is what it is, but, we don't have to like it. By voicing our/my displeasure, maybe, just maybe, we'll see a change. If not, nothing is lost. This is not even close to a deal breaker.

I doubt it, there is even a new tags discussion and it's listed the same.

Announcement - New Tag Discussion

Tags List v2

 

[CutieLvr]

I doubt it, there is even a new tags discussion and it's listed the same.

Announcement - New Tag Discussion

Tags List v2

It is, what it is.

 

[BrandonX13]

If you do add the mom as a love interests don't immediately have her break up with the boyfriend so many devs have the woman be divorced or single because there too much of a pussy to have the mc steal woman like a Chad from guys I'm looking/talking about every dev who makes stupid excuses why the gorgeous woman are single divorced or virgins your a lose coward it's a game your not committing a sin

 

[BrandonX13]

If you do add the mom as a love interests don't immediately have her break up with the boyfriend so many devs have the woman be divorced or single because there too much of a pussy to have the mc steal woman like a Chad from guys I'm looking/talking about every dev who makes stupid excuses why the gorgeous woman are single divorced or virgins your a lose coward it's a game your not committing a sin

Have the mc seduce her Don't puss out

 

[Beast Within]

If you do add the mom as a love interests don't immediately have her break up with the boyfriend so many devs have the woman be divorced or single because there too much of a pussy to have the mc steal woman like a Chad from guys I'm looking/talking about every dev who makes stupid excuses why the gorgeous woman are single divorced or virgins your a lose coward it's a game your not committing a sin

 

[BrandonX13]

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I stand by what I said it's a lazy pussy move to make all woman divorced or virgins make the MC a Chad and seduce married woman

 

[malridoo]

I stand by what I said it's a lazy pussy move to make all woman divorced or virgins make the MC a Chad and seduce married woman

Well.., there are some games that let you do the stealing... For ex: It Could Be Worse!, But I'm the Bad Guy? and others..
Just saying...

 

[Beast Within]

I stand by what I said it's a lazy pussy move to make all woman divorced or virgins make the MC a Chad and seduce married woman

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[Radagastt]

TheGoldenCherry welcome to f95 and great game on your first attempt .

Honestly our interest now is in mom more than the sister and praying that you add mom as an love interest.

Well everyone has already mentioned it.

But will ask again how soon will mom be romanceable ?

 

[Sngo]

Short really short, dialogues are mess, renders are nice except some like the summer pussy that looked like someone just put a traffick cone down her pussy to stretch it like that, the clipping during the sex scene.

If the dev isn't going for the NTR tag he definitely needs to do some changes, if mom is going to be a LI her being in good spirits with the bf and bringing him to live with her is bad, summer well honestly see just comes as a huge slut, she cheated in previous relationship, she is sending lots os nudes, she as sex with her "step" in a matter of 5 sentences, yeah not good for a LI to come as a huge slut as her.

If you are going for the NTR tag better to warn us before hand so we can leave the ship right now if not I would suggest changes to the plot and specially changing Summer to not be a cheating hoe and used easy lay.

When the render of her pussy being stretch like a traffick cone the first thing that had come to my mind was: now I understand her hoe conversation before, used pussy a hell(yes I know it was a render mistake to be stretched like that) but honestly was what made more sense in the game between dialogues and scenes.

Dialogues don't make much sense and are rushed, there is no build up, mom didn't even care for her son opinion about the bf and his daughter coming to live with them, basically shrug her shoulders about mc may think about it.

Mc inner dialogue about that scene seems more like a passive-agressive person than anything or the usual beta mc.

Not having the mom as a LI would be a waste.

Honestly right now the game isn't worth the time even if the game length is about5min.

Without a rework I probably will not try it again since nothing in the game grabed my interest, summer being like that is already crossed out as a love interest for me and the mom dunno if she is going or not to be a love interest but her being all good and happy with the bf don't seems like it but you should do what you think it's best based on the fan base you want to attract and the story you Invision.

And that's my feedback after trying it TheGoldenCherry