Race of Life will join the very biggest names in the adult gaming industry, including Being a Dik and Freshwomen. It will make its creators millionaires. From that perspective, it is an outstanding success and its developers can be completely unapologetic. They can give a great big middle finger to anyone who poo-poos it because they know that they made a game that will be wildly popular. And personally, I think it's a very well-made, enjoyable porn game.
BUT
It does not belong on any story first list. As you guys have already dissected it, I'll only comment on one thing that has been bothering me since the first release.
While I understand that for many players, the Lily drama was impactful, to me it felt hamfisted and cheap. But worse, it completely disassembles MC's redemption story: MC's daughter is grievously wounded by a speeding car. His response is to participate in illegal street racing, which in turn threatens more innocent people with the exact type of harm which his daughter suffered? The writer could have used a million different things as a catalyst to get the racing stuff into the story, none of which would have thrown the moral quandary right in the player's face. Perhaps the writer is planning for MC to hit someone else's child and realize that what he is doing is wrong? Surely the immorality of his conduct would have occurred to him far earlier that that.
I've seen many people saying how nice it is to have a mature MC for a change, and I feel like we must have played different games. Maybe players are so used to playing students and out-of-work programmers that they can't tell the difference between maturity and having a job?