- Apr 29, 2018
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Says gefault instead of default when you're entering your name.
Lesten instead of listen
Lesten instead of listen
- Mar 3, 2018
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Great game, but the sex animation is too fucking slow! Its unerotic! At this stage, its better to use still renders with good description than this tortoise speed fuck animations
- Jan 26, 2020
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Remove the sex mini-game it sucks. Otherwise good game.
- Nov 22, 2018
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Very mixed bag so far.
The setup for the plot is good. It's a good start for an isekai game. I also like that the MC is a grown man, which seems rare for this kind of game.
Lots of people make fun of the title, and I get why. I think it might be too generic.
Language-wise, it's a mid-sized disaster. Some words are misspelled (e.g. "Lesten quitely" -> "Listen quietly"). Sometimes it's words the dev invented, like Zomalia/Zamolia. One of those is right, and I don't know which. More importantly, everyone speaks like they're still learning the language. There's missing and misplaced articles, tons of missing commas. Frankly, a proofread is needed.
Turning sex scenes into minigames is a really bad idea. It's impossible to enjoy.
Also, I think someone mentioned it already, but the name Gott is just weird. It's German for "god", which just looks weird as a name for a side character, especially for a German like me.
Finally, while I'm in favor of giving the player lots of choices, I think that maybe touching the magic-unlocking stone should not have been optional, given that the MC has to take a 3-day trip back to the stone, and another 3 days to get back to the village, all alone, which seems a bit too dangerous to be worth the risk.
I really hope you fix your script and give us more. There's a lot of potential here.
The setup for the plot is good. It's a good start for an isekai game. I also like that the MC is a grown man, which seems rare for this kind of game.
Lots of people make fun of the title, and I get why. I think it might be too generic.
Language-wise, it's a mid-sized disaster. Some words are misspelled (e.g. "Lesten quitely" -> "Listen quietly"). Sometimes it's words the dev invented, like Zomalia/Zamolia. One of those is right, and I don't know which. More importantly, everyone speaks like they're still learning the language. There's missing and misplaced articles, tons of missing commas. Frankly, a proofread is needed.
Turning sex scenes into minigames is a really bad idea. It's impossible to enjoy.
Also, I think someone mentioned it already, but the name Gott is just weird. It's German for "god", which just looks weird as a name for a side character, especially for a German like me.
Finally, while I'm in favor of giving the player lots of choices, I think that maybe touching the magic-unlocking stone should not have been optional, given that the MC has to take a 3-day trip back to the stone, and another 3 days to get back to the village, all alone, which seems a bit too dangerous to be worth the risk.
I really hope you fix your script and give us more. There's a lot of potential here.
Thank you for finding the misspelled words... I fixed Zomalia... the other has been corrected already.
I don't know German ... so I didn't know that "Gott" has meaning.. it is hard to find word which doesn't have meaning in some language... but it is at the beginning of the game and I can change the name.
Thank you for letting me know about it.
Thank you for finding the bug with Maola (EDIT: oops..it was someone else..) - I found a big error in my script and indeed Maola was everywhere ... it is fixed for the next update ( I will make v.0.1.1 soon.. this is a major bug).
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What sort of pregnancy are you planning? Like, how long will it last? Would it go through the three phases? Is the player around to see the labor? Would labor happen gradually? Does parenting have unique interactions? Will there be interactions like care and comfort for the lady?
Hi Norexy,
Yes.. MC will have a child.
I will create a vote poll for the mini-game to become optional or not. It will be for version 0.2
- Aug 15, 2020
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Unofficial Android Port of:
Story [v0.1]
My android port has an alternative save location, the save will remain intact when you uninstall the game so don't worry about starting over. And my port has a textbox opacity slider and text size slider and added change name to the main menu.
Story [v0.1]
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- May 20, 2020
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For a 0.1 that was both quite impressive and promising. Will keep an eye on this.
- Dec 1, 2019
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Good start so far. Interested to see where this goes with world travelling. One thing you may want to fix is that I chose not to marry Maola just because I wasn't sure what other girls would be available in that world and half the scenes still act like you did. Like when building houses or the firepit scenes after hunting. Other than that, I look forward to more updates.
I just released version 0.1.1 and the bug with Maola has been fixed.
Thank you for reporting it !
Gotta say, surprisingly detailed lore for a v0.1 game. Maola seems like a nice girl. Hopefully we will be blessed with lots of children.
Only thing I would do without is the minigame. It got annoying after the first time.
Keep up the great work, mate!
Only thing I would do without is the minigame. It got annoying after the first time.
Keep up the great work, mate!