The first half was perfect with their shy/teasing/flirting activities and all around fun friendship but the second half you beat me to death with a baseball bat called drama.
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I never cry, but I did reading this story. In the Epilog I bawled uncontrollably for an hour and a half. Good thing there was no-one around to hear me. Except, not.
You touched me hard, all the way in. Thank you Aaryn Reese and team.
You touched me hard, all the way in. Thank you Aaryn Reese and team.
Normally im not into gay stuff. I did download it without cheking the description . Since i did download it ill look if it has a good story . And maybe skip sex scene lol . I love good story so , i would say i enjoy sex at 20% and the story content at 80% . Not only sex for sex without a good story haha
the beginning is very rough so bear with it. you gotta keep picking choices until you figure out the right combination. that was kinda the "grinding" mentality of the genre then and honestly i hate it. I'm reworking the beginning now because it's very juvenile but i promise that part goes away by like chapter 3 then it's more linear based and much more story driven. it also wont smack you over the head with gay sex stuff and is very character driven. I dont view it as a porn game. i just needed the adult tag to tell the story i wanted to tell
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Salut,
Le jeu se bloque une fois que Braden et le MC entrent dans le dortoir pour leur dernière nuit ensemble. Une page d'erreur s'affiche plusieurs fois puis le jeu revient et on se retrouve à la page d'erreur sans pouvoir dépasser, impossible de continuer l'histoire. S'il vous plaît résoudre ce problème rapidement car ce jeu est vraiment bon. Merci.
Le jeu se bloque une fois que Braden et le MC entrent dans le dortoir pour leur dernière nuit ensemble. Une page d'erreur s'affiche plusieurs fois puis le jeu revient et on se retrouve à la page d'erreur sans pouvoir dépasser, impossible de continuer l'histoire. S'il vous plaît résoudre ce problème rapidement car ce jeu est vraiment bon. Merci.
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Salut, le jeu rencontre un carlin, plusieurs pages d'erreurs s'ouvrent les unes après les autres et on recommence le jeu indéfiniment au même endroit sans pouvoir continuer l'histoire.
Cela se passe dans le nouveau dortoir où le MC et son colocataire passent une dernière nuit ensemble.
Merci d'avoir corrigé ce problème pour pouvoir continuer ce grand jeu.
Cela se passe dans le nouveau dortoir où le MC et son colocataire passent une dernière nuit ensemble.
Merci d'avoir corrigé ce problème pour pouvoir continuer ce grand jeu.
I'll only respond to once since it was a double post. I'm guessing the error message you're getting says something is "not define." Pretty sure you're used an old save. Those always crash the game. Go back to the main menu and click New Game then click Update and it'll drop back back at the bar. You can replay from there (which is the last update) or hold down CTRL to fast forward through everything you've already read. Do not try and ignore the bug, it will skip massive amounts of the story. If you encountered that problem before and you clicked ignore, you may just want to replay from the bar because you've already missed stuff and the story may not make sense. I try to warn people not to use old saves with that screen when the game boots but a lot of people still miss it. Hope you enjoy
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Jhank you for this great game as I like them. Well written story, well done graphics. For me this game is a small marvel :RÉ
no sequel planned right now. i told the story i wanted to tell and I refuse to just keep writing the thing in an attempt to milk and string supporters along for financial gain. my consistent response so far as been if or when i think of a story that is better than this one, then i'll do a sequel. for the time being, i'm redoing the beginning part of this game and i have to say the visual changes I'm making are a staggering upgrade. i'm gonna share it publicly before long but I've dropped a few teasers on my twitter if you wanna check it out.
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If you end up wanting to make a game with more sex scenes like some have been asking for, you could make an offshoot game of Ash in military school. The possibilities are endless...
yep, that's been an early idea that i had and i'll keep it open. Ash is an amazing character and he's super fun to write because he's basically a very unfiltered side of me that's just fun to play with. However, from a narrative point of view, that story would probably be a mess. I've flirted with a few different mediums to use to potentially bring a story like that to life-- i just dont know if Ash as a narrator would make a lick of sense at all. It would be a very chaotic telling of a story-- which is fun-- if the readers can actually follow him. Honestly, if I did an Ash story-- I'd probably lean more towards a virtual comic than I would an actual VN or game. We'll see. I really do keep my mind open. I'm just not doing a pure sex game as a cash grab. There's a billion of those and they're all the same. Plus, developing that gets boring really quick when you sit around for 12 hours a day trying to make up pointless encounters for people to get laid. So i have to be invested in the story and have a purpose to all of it. And it's even better when you take take an adult story like this and have it actually mean something to people.If you end up wanting to make a game with more sex scenes like some have been asking for, you could make an offshoot game of Ash in military school. The possibilities are endless...
But yeah, i don't disagree with you on an Ash story and I purposely left that open in case I ever wanted to play with it
That's a nice idea. Besides the hot encounters among military bros (that anybody would be sad to witnessyep, that's been an early idea that i had and i'll keep it open. Ash is an amazing character and he's super fun to write because he's basically a very unfiltered side of me that's just fun to play with. However, from a narrative point of view, that story would probably be a mess. I've flirted with a few different mediums to use to potentially bring a story like that to life-- i just dont know if Ash as a narrator would make a lick of sense at all. It would be a very chaotic telling of a story-- which is fun-- if the readers can actually follow him. Honestly, if I did an Ash story-- I'd probably lean more towards a virtual comic than I would an actual VN or game. We'll see. I really do keep my mind open. I'm just not doing a pure sex game as a cash grab. There's a billion of those and they're all the same. Plus, developing that gets boring really quick when you sit around for 12 hours a day trying to make up pointless encounters for people to get laid. So i have to be invested in the story and have a purpose to all of it. And it's even better when you take take an adult story like this and have it actually mean something to people.
But yeah, i don't disagree with you on an Ash story and I purposely left that open in case I ever wanted to play with it
I am sure) there is the prospective narrative arc about he and Mikhael and, mostly, his younger brother. So I can imagine another heart-breaking story, where even the protagonists of the actual VN can have their short "guest scenes" as well. Stay well!
haha, i'm probably done with cameos. i usually hate the idea of meta stuff like that because it's cringe af, but the reason i wrote this was for very different reasons than, at least i feel like, most people write a game that gets posted here. I needed some time with my MC after all we been through over the last 5 years. the other cameos were just a nod of respect to my friends that helped me. that's a major advantage to producing stuff like this yourself, you can be selfish and include a scene for yourself and ain't nobody that can stop youThat's a nice idea. Besides the hot encounters among military bros (that anybody would be sad to witness
I played this expecting a sexual game experience... But instead I got an incredible page turner of a story. I played through the whole thing in one sitting and lost track of time with how invested I got.
It's a touching story and I really loved the ending. I look forward to future works.
It's a touching story and I really loved the ending. I look forward to future works.
heya. glad you liked it and holy crap, how the fuck did you make it through in one sitting, it takes me like 3 or 4 days to get through it and i wrote the damn thing, lol. But seriously, thanks. glad you were open to the substance of it. Also, i'm honored to be related to your first post. welcome