Wasn't expecting update sooner than 25th. Thanks for early sharing, will enjoy for sureUpdated OP with links for v0.05.1 a day early. I'll be out of town and didn't want it to be late over here. Enjoy
oh yeah, for sure. thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed it. a lot of people have enjoyed the original but the revamp is leagues above it. but a lot of fans have enjoyed watching the development process and how the game and project has grown. the original versus the revamp really shows that. i still dont feel like a professional and sometimes the development is slow because i'm emotionally invested in the project and sometimes that doesn't translate into fast updates. so i try and offset that by making the project free. I have heard on my discord that a few other sites have just the revamp posted now and deleted the original and some people got pissed on their sites. i dont have any control over that. i can control the thread here as well as on my patreon and itch.io so if you ever get stuck or are looking for older copies of things, you can always check those other places too. appreciate you checking in <3Thanks for the update but also to let us download the old version completed.
It was so fucking good, character development and story. I really hope we will hear more about them all in a futur game! You totally rock it!
Well, I did play the revamp and of course it looks really good, I can understand why it's not fast to post updates, when you are emotionally and physically invested in your project, you have to make it looks has good as you can imagine it, and honestly, I don't know if it's has good as you want it to be, but it's so damn good!oh yeah, for sure. thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed it. a lot of people have enjoyed the original but the revamp is leagues above it. but a lot of fans have enjoyed watching the development process and how the game and project has grown. the original versus the revamp really shows that. i still dont feel like a professional and sometimes the development is slow because i'm emotionally invested in the project and sometimes that doesn't translate into fast updates. so i try and offset that by making the project free. I have heard on my discord that a few other sites have just the revamp posted now and deleted the original and some people got pissed on their sites. i dont have any control over that. i can control the thread here as well as on my patreon and itch.io so if you ever get stuck or are looking for older copies of things, you can always check those other places too. appreciate you checking in <3
haha. i mean, it's easy to constantly see things to improve on but i'm sure that's neverending anyway. eventually i'll have to walk away and say it's done. i also realize that developers get excited when they can make something 2% better but most people don't even see a difference and that can really feel like a waste of time. So the revamp is very much focused on very obvious improvements to things that were not there before like music and background characters and.... fucking decent lighting in the early game, lol. but yeah, honestly i'm happy with the revamp so far. it can always get better but for me and my current skill level in all of this, this is my best and i'm happy with it. but thank you for your kind words and i'm glad you think it's good. it's a fun story that i'm proud of overall and it's having the effect on people that i really wanted so that's pretty coolWell, I did play the revamp and of course it looks really good, I can understand why it's not fast to post updates, when you are emotionally and physically invested in your project, you have to make it looks has good as you can imagine it, and honestly, I don't know if it's has good as you want it to be, but it's so damn good!
It was not intended as "nasty toned" and i apologize if you read a critique as that way, i am simply stating my opinion.x-interupt tagging you here since I'm not able to reply to game reviews but you left a nasty-toned review that had so many inaccuracies in it that it seemed like you were talking about a completely different project than the one posted.
So hi. I'm the one who's spent the last 6 years with the apparent "creative block" you referenced.
To clarify, this is the only revamp and it just began last fall. I'm not sure why you thought there were others. It will likely be the only revamp because i have no intention of running my project into the ground. This is my first game project and the original game was a rough draft so i'm applying the things i learned the first time through so that the entire project is consistent. The fans, characters, and story deserve that and it means a lot to me.
I have released the game for free throughout its development to compensate for this and run on donations only.
I'm also not sure why you haven't seen any story progression in 6 years. The total original game has 10 chapters and over 60k lines of scripting code and is probably about 15 hours long depending on your reading speed. Each of the 21 updates in that game usually added between one and two hours worth of story which is far beyond the norm for these types of games. There has never been an update released for this project that hasn't added more story content (aside from a hotfix or bug update on my Patreon page). Please reference the posted Change Logs for details; they go all the way back to 2017, giving you an itemized list of everything added. This game is literally ALL story content. You specifically stated the last 3 updates have added nothing which is also untrue as each update has added half of a chapter; thus, the last 3 updates have added one and a half chapters to the progression of the story, which is probably around 7k lines of dialogue and events. The revamp is linear so the coding won't allow you to miss it unless you 1) use an old save and the game crashes, or 2) you just exit out of it and stop playing.
The revamp starts over at the beginning with completely redone graphics, new scenes, sound effects, animations, and a fully licensed soundtrack that was not included in the original. It includes background characters and other elements to make the world more alive that were not included in the original because I was new and learning as I went. It also has all of the originally annoying repeated scenes removed so that players don't get stuck in the early game.
I'm not sure what "stock images" you're talking about because there are zero stock images used in the revamp. I've created every shot in the game myself and I've purchased rights to the music.
Also, my copy only has 1,563 images. I have no idea why your copy has more.
I'm just a regular guy writing a story about two dudes trying to find acceptance with themselves. I'm not really sure why that bothered you so much but I'm going to wish you happiness anyway. Giving you the benefit of the doubt, I hope your tomorrow is better than today was. Life is too short to be writing bitter reviews of existential lgbt indie games on a porn site.
Actually, the old version " v0.21.4 (Complete Story)" is available for download right under the current version of the revamp.you may claim there were 10 chapters and 21 updates, but there is no evidence at this time of those claims here.
the current game is nearly identical to the game i saw a couple years ago when i was initially interested in it, but the story has had no progression.
bruh, the original version is literally on page 1 of this thread where it's been continuously updated for 5 years until it was finished.It was not intended as "nasty toned" and i apologize if you read a critique as that way, i am simply stating my opinion.
and as for the "second revamp" i apologize if i got it mixed up with another game, however the critique still stands as to progress of the story and progression on the game itself. keep in mind that to many of us, the original version is not here, and as such we have only the current version to look at. you may claim there were 10 chapters and 21 updates, but there is no evidence at this time of those claims here.
the current game is nearly identical to the game i saw a couple years ago when i was initially interested in it, but the story has had no progression.
you are to be lauded that you are only accepting donations, and not on subscribestar, or patreon, et all seeking a monthly donation, but the critique still stands, that it appears you have hit a creative block.
and the 1572 images i find are when i type .jpg in the file search of windows at the main folder of the game you are distributing, this is not an attack in anyway shape or form butt i'm inclined that maybe the game you are intending to distribute is not the one that we have available to us here, you may want to check your uploads, and the critique about content again comes to pass, 6 years 1572 images, not all renders, this of course includes the standard GUI images and the others i define as "stock images" that are standard to all Ren'py games.
the game itself has potential, but at it's current progression rate, and i love slow building relationship stories, i must unfortunately say it seems it will never be in a form of closure, or progression that can keep me.
I wish you the best of luck, and i hope one day i'm proven wrong that this becomes one of the greatest stories told, but i won't be there to see it.
Best of Luck
ok first off i love stories in this genre, and as i said previously, and obviously you didn't read, " i love slow building relationship stories," i love lengthy character driven stuff, and apparently those points didn't come off as intended.bruh, the original version is literally on page 1 of this thread where it's been continuously updated for 5 years until it was finished.
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It's right there and hasn't moved for 5 years. There's practically cobwebs on it. Everyone in the forum talking about the game or reviewing the game downloaded it from page 1 right here according to the format that F95zone requires me to post it in. If I don't follow their format, they change it to match every other post on the website. That version, v0.021.4 has over 5,000 images and was very much a work in progress until it was finished last Fall.
And of course i read your feedback in a nasty tone, bro. you put 2 stars down and didn't say one nice thing about it-- in fact, you told me to abandon it and go do something else.
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I'm fine if the review is honest or the project has too much dialogue or you're not interested in a long, drawn out love story with deep adult themes. that's fine and that's fair and i'll obviously respect that because people like/dislike different things. this is a niche story and it's deep and dramatic and that also means it's not for everybody. That's fine. I take constructive criticism very well and I have a pretty open mind. While i dont really care about the star rating here, I still take time to listen to people and see if their feedback coincides with what my vision is. So I read everything people say on multiple websites and I take that serious.
however, i'm not cool with just randomly getting 2 stars and then lectured over a series of complete inaccuracies, confusion with other games, or just not downloading it from the first page of the thread. I go out of my way to distribute this and make it free and available for people because the story has made a difference to people and i'm grateful for that. Like... if you had problems downloading or you were stuck, or you had questions about the versions or whatever you could have just asked and i would helped you out or answered your question.
thank you. i appreciate this and i'm glad the revamp still feels new. I'm really trying hard to make it still feel fresh. For a lot of us on the discord, the revamp has scratched that itch that we had after the end of the original game. I was just so unsatisfied with early parts of the original that there's no way i could leave it that way. it really does look crazy different tho. I'm over halfway through with v0.07 so unless i get stupid and create a ton more work for myself, it shouldn't be too long before we get the second half of chapter 3. Thanks for reading <3Thank you for the revamp! I can re-explore the same excitement reading your vn.
Dude, I did read your comments. They're just hard to take seriously when you admit to leaving a review for a game that you haven't played, missed the actual download button, asked for proof that the game had progressed, were shown that proof and 6 years worth of content being added, then you refused to look into any of the content, and then accusing me of being in a creative block because I'm editing my originally published rough draft.ok first off i love stories in this genre, and as i said previously, and obviously you didn't read, " i love slow building relationship stories," i love lengthy character driven stuff, and apparently those points didn't come off as intended.
i apologize for not noticing "spoliler" boxes and clicking on them to see the complete story. again my bad.
"And of course i read your feedback in a nasty tone, bro. you put 2 stars down and didn't say one nice thing about it"
Stop right there, i'm supposed to say something nice? since when?
why is anyone leaving a review required to ever give constructive feedback?
answer never, not all reviews are going to be constructive.
we are not required when looking at someone and say "you're an asshole, but incredibly literate"
"-- in fact, you told me to abandon it and go do something else."
i stand by this statement.
you are rehashing something and retreading the same ground you admit you've tread, that indicates again that you are stuck in a creative block.
again, i have not attacked you, i have simply said what i observe and what i feel, it's time to move on from this story. now, i didn't tell you to stop making games, i said "do something else".
Maybe try a new story, that'll stand as the constructive criticism which you seem to expect from every reviewer apparently.
or maybe accept that not every review is going to be glowing, every person is different, and maybe while yes i was mistaken in a few things, my opinion of 6 years doing the same thing over and over is worth moving on from.
I absolutely agree!This game is easily one of the top tier LGBTQ+ VNs that I've played, primarily because the script is so sincere and so well written; rather than just following along with the characters, you really start to believe in them (that sounds so corny as I type that out), even during the cheesy bits. Additionally, the script maintains a decent flow throughout the game, I never really grew bored or lost interest. I think there's a real talent at work here, and the game is completed, and it's for free. It was a real treat to experience, the author should be immensely proud. Thank you for putting this out there Aaryn!
Dude. Go actually play this game to completion before you leave any more comments in this thread, this is embarrassing to read.ok first off i love stories in this genre, and as i said previously, and obviously you didn't read, " i love slow building relationship stories," i love lengthy character driven stuff, and apparently those points didn't come off as intended.
i apologize for not noticing "spoliler" boxes and clicking on them to see the complete story. again my bad.
"And of course i read your feedback in a nasty tone, bro. you put 2 stars down and didn't say one nice thing about it"
Stop right there, i'm supposed to say something nice? since when?
why is anyone leaving a review required to ever give constructive feedback?
answer never, not all reviews are going to be constructive.
we are not required when looking at someone and say "you're an asshole, but incredibly literate"
"-- in fact, you told me to abandon it and go do something else."
i stand by this statement.
you are rehashing something and retreading the same ground you admit you've tread, that indicates again that you are stuck in a creative block.
again, i have not attacked you, i have simply said what i observe and what i feel, it's time to move on from this story. now, i didn't tell you to stop making games, i said "do something else".
Maybe try a new story, that'll stand as the constructive criticism which you seem to expect from every reviewer apparently.
or maybe accept that not every review is going to be glowing, every person is different, and maybe while yes i was mistaken in a few things, my opinion of 6 years doing the same thing over and over is worth moving on from.
This game is easily one of the top tier LGBTQ+ VNs that I've played, primarily because the script is so sincere and so well written; rather than just following along with the characters, you really start to believe in them (that sounds so corny as I type that out), even during the cheesy bits. Additionally, the script maintains a decent flow throughout the game, I never really grew bored or lost interest. I think there's a real talent at work here, and the game is completed, and it's for free. It was a real treat to experience, the author should be immensely proud. Thank you for putting this out there Aaryn!
I absolutely agree!
appreciate the support and i'm glad yall enjoyed the story. very much a weird exchange that still doesn't make any sense to me but that's alright. the story isn't for everyone and there's no way i'm going to force someone into reading it when they've already made their mind up about it (especially if they play the older version because the beginning sucks, lol). It doesn't change my focus and i'll confirm that i'm still working on the project and have no intention of abandoning it.Dude. Go actually play this game to completion before you leave any more comments in this thread, this is embarrassing to read.