Wait, your daughter? Or her father interrupted your lapdance to ask if she a virgin?
Rose is the PC's daughter. He takes her back to the lapdance room, 1 of the routes is to get her away from everyone so he can talk to her. 1 of the routes is to fuck her. 1 of the routes starts as him wanting to fuck her, but changes his mind.
I not feeling the daughter is a stripper slut/virgin aspect as well.
Daughter isn't a slut, she just has a fetish for men that look like her Dad.
tittyfucks and anals only? keeps the gloryhole fresh i guess.... XD
LOL There is Vag, Oral, Anal, Tiddyfucks.
So played the game, the lighting could be better and also, I don't see the maledom content.
The male Dom content starts with the second girl on day 2, Samantha. If you have her stay with you at the table, then you choose the top option ("I'll pass, I was just worried about you. (BDSM and slave training)"
That will be the start of it. The second option turns her into a whore. The third option is just a second way to get her into the private dance, and give her the chance to get her shit together, or reject her and shit happens.)
That was the hottest first release I've seen in a long time. looking forward to seeing more
Thank you very much for that, I was getting a little depressed reading the first page of comments.
i enjoyed the game decently enough. the only part i didnt care for were the stripping scenes on stage were overly narrated for me. actually aside from that i really liked it for a first release. i hope to see more.
Thanks for the feedback, On some of the stripper scenes I was going for the idea of the PC thinking about things that he sees during the dance, and other times I was trying to describe what the girls were doing. I'll continue to try and get better.
the writing was ok for me. or maybe im so used to engrish my standards have dropped. but for the most part the flow of the story for me was good enough. i'll admit the daughter scene in whch you dont reveal yourself was off in terms of making sense.
her desire to remain a stripper didnt leave a bad tase either since it's just stripping. also i guess im ok towards strippers since i know not all who do that as a job are sluts. those in this game though are what dev makes them so ill see how it works out if it continues. also no NTR tag so that's always a plus for me
Thanks for the feedback, and I am still learning how to do proper story telling. I have the idea of how I want things to flow but sometimes the idea I am trying to share, doesn't always come across how I want it to. (But I DID use grammarly quite a bit for the grammar and spelling.).
As for the NTR I absolutely HATE NTR so I won't ever have that in anything that I work on. )))
I just saw there's no oral tag either. Using logic of elimination and the presence of a "stripping" tag, we can only conclude the following
Honestly I just forgot to put a few tags in. I got a little distracted putting the post together.
Wait is this a father daughter game? If so I'm in.
At it's core it's a father daughter love story, with a lot of kink. The Dad never saw his daughter as anything more than his lil girl. But she's had a crush on him for years, her interest in men is based off of her interest in her dad. So she prefers older, successful, and slightly domineering men.
You have a really great start for a new release, sure its short, but the dialog is great, no horrible grammar mistakes as i constantly see with other visual novels "and 90% of those are never fixed and still continue", but you have the potential for creating something really great... Hopefully you will add a few more kinks/fetishes to the list, (pregnancy, lactation, mother daughter, harem) you know what i mean... anyways... good luck in the creation of the rest...
Thank you very much for the positive feedback. )))
I have more content I want to add, but the rules said do not add the tags unless it's already in the game / story.... So I left them out.
As for the list you mentioned, most of them will be in the story at some point. The only one that won't is the mother daughter, due to the Mom's personality. You'll see more of that in the coming releases. As for it being short, it is short to get an idea for what people liked and disliked about it, as well as to give a few different options with each character, so someone could play through the project a few times and see the different ways that the girls will change in the story.
The stage lighting is ugly and makes it hard to see anything - probably would in a real club, too - and i noticed more than one place where the images don't even nearly match the text that goes with them.
If you can point me at where I messed up the descriptions and the images I'd really appreciate it. I thought I had them all lined up correctly, I'd like to get any problems fixed before the next release.
So.....
I told my daughter she can strip as long as she fucks no one, made friends with a cute lil stripper, helped another stripper after she got punched by a fat guy and sent another one to rehab.
I am the fucking queen of fixing strippers lives.
Shit at getting laid though.
HAHAHAHAHA the good guy route, it works out in the end and the girls turn more into loves that way. But yeah that route is a little slower with the sex.
