VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Book 1 Steam] [STWAdev]

[doovel]

Uhh.... you do realize that scene is about how Valentine's subconscious is aware that Elspeth is a liar? And that he thinks she's the opposite of him? And he's worried that she could be a danger to him and the people he cares about?

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It's one of the best reasons to avoid Elspeth.



Is she an active duty intelligence officer who has been given orders to spy on Valentine?

No? Well then she's just a creep.



See that part right there? That's the provocation we've been accusing Elspeth of.

The idea that she could intimidate them by boasting about her service record is incredibly stupid. How would they know if she's telling the truth? They don't have acess to her military records, and she certainly doesn't look intimidating at all, so of course they're going to think she's full of shit. All they see is a scrawny woman insulting them and boasting about how easily she could beat them up.

Her actions ensured that the fight would happen.

Wow, I was with you until you called Elsie scrawny, that woman is anything but scrawny.

Other than that I completely agree with you. Also I just wrapped up pt7. She even confirms it on the couch.

 

[balboa2151]

The Author is throuple endings with multiple LIs together; like Viridiana and Ines.



And I also made a tier list of LIs for myself:

S - Elspeth (she's the one)
A - Ines (she'd be the best one if not Elspeth)
B - No one here
C - Amrit (she's an airhead jock but not the worst since many coaches marry/fuck their trainees)
D - Kana (her whole existence is a mockery to what Valentine is, apart from loyalty stuff)
E - Serena and baker chick (just FWB)
F- None
T(oxic) - Viridiana (too much baggage, too incestious)

Now, I enjoy some incest in AVNs but this isn't the game for that. This is a much more realistic than almost all other AVNs. Besides I think fucking the little sister is quite contradicting to Valentine's honour code.

thanks for replying...so you're telling me that I could end up with Kana and Elsbeth? I remember Elsbeth saying that once MC and her are a couple if he cheats she'll cut off his penis?

 

[Elduriel]

thanks for replying...so you're telling me that I could end up with Kana and Elsbeth? I remember Elsbeth saying that once MC and her are a couple if he cheats she'll cut off his penis?

it's Elspeth. Anyway, you're not in an exclusive relationship at the moment with anyone, so you can play the field. But just as with the prequel, you'll have to make a choice near the end of the game. That may or may not include a throuple or two.

 

[Zorro#34]

thanks for replying...so you're telling me that I could end up with Kana and Elsbeth? I remember Elsbeth saying that once MC and her are a couple if he cheats she'll cut off his penis?

While some throuples will indeed be available, I very much doubt that the Elspeth-Kana combination is among them. They barely know each other and, while Elspeth finds Kana attractive, she's only playful about it if she's getting friendzoned. If romanced, she sees competition in Kana, first and foremost.
Probably not the preferred situation for us, as I find those two to be the best as well (just with swapped places - Elspeth 1st, Kana 2nd), but let's be real.

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[MF_DOOM]

Outfit Poll 08/20/2024

8 hours ago

I have this stupid Author post sitting in my drafts but no matter how many times I futz with it, it just doesn't feel quite right, so back to the backburner for now. But since I have to give you guys a post, I pulled this poll out a bit early.
So spoilers this update you may have made certain choices that lead you on a date with a certain French. Here are some potential looks for that. And no I'm not telling you what the date is, don't want to ruin the surprise.

A
22%
B
55%
C
23%

69 votes total · 7 days left

 

[Dr.TSoni]

 

[Hengat]

B doesn't seem like her style

 

[Abhai]

B is by far the worst option of those 3...
hopefully kids have finished their voting, so more serious patrons with voting rights could change poli-outcome

 

[Dr.TSoni]

B doesn't seem like her style

I'm not sure if Ines herself knows what her style is yet

 

[cxx]

amrit and kana 3some is must.

 

[yossa999]

amrit and kana 3some is must.

Oh no, did I miss it or is it just a wishful thinking?

 

[cxx]

Oh no, did I miss it or is it just a wishful thinking?

possibility.

 

[ModiThorrson]

B doesn't seem like her style

Agreed, I love B but I think for her and a date C is the better option.

 

[doovel]

Agreed, I love B but I think for her and a date C is the better option.

C with the chocker from outfit A. Or if the dev is feeling frisky let the outfit depend on how submissive or independent you influence her to be.

 

[Scyths]

Hey, been playing this since yesterday basically all day for 2 days, and I gotta say that I find this one to be exceptional. The synopsis and pictures on the first page really doesn't make it justice because I genuinely didn't except such a good story as this just from those. Should probably update both the pictures and the text because I really wouldn't have tried this one for quite a long while still if I didn't do a random flip between a few games, which this one won. It has an absurdly good amount of content which is somewhat excepted for a game that's been releasing for 3 whole years.

Genuinely some of my favourite characters I've seen in VN's. I'm really looking forward to future updates.

edit: also, if some people have recommendations of good written stories with good written characters, I'd really appreciate DM's with names. I really like somewhat serious stories like this one and I don't care if the main character is a sex machine or not, I care more about the story than the number of sex scenes.

 

[doovel]

Hey, been playing this since yesterday basically all day for 2 days, and I gotta say that I find this one to be exceptional. The synopsis and pictures on the first page really doesn't make it justice because I genuinely didn't except such a good story as this just from those. Should probably update both the pictures and the text because I really wouldn't have tried this one for quite a long while still if I didn't do a random flip between a few games, which this one won. It has an absurdly good amount of content which is somewhat excepted for a game that's been releasing for 3 whole years.

Genuinely some of my favourite characters I've seen in VN's. I'm really looking forward to future updates.

edit: also, if some people have recommendations of good written stories with good written characters, I'd really appreciate DM's with names. I really like somewhat serious stories like this one and I don't care if the main character is a sex machine or not, I care more about the story than the number of sex scenes.

the scenes are the cherry on top. Granted the stark difference between the Daz stills and the blender videos (especially noticeable in the Ines shower scene). Make them hard to enjoy for me. And they’re a bit too short and quick for my tastes. The story and character work more than make up for it.

the characters are all unique and have their own shit going own making them feel much more real than the average AVN. Even though they all want to be with the MC when he plays his cards right it doesn’t feel forced as the game hasn’t reached a point of “you have to choose” yet. I’m looking forward to the potential drama when you do.

Unfortunately most AVNs aren’t as well written as this one so it’s hard to give you names of other AVNs. Most of them are already near the top when you sort by likes.

 

[cxx]

can't say that stwa isn't making fun games since this is hilarious. anyways funny update, plot going somewhere and sex with 1 of girls until other wants "treatment" too.

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[cxx]

if she needs warming up i will volunteer.

 

[Mwrp]

Holy Shit, Montreal Screwjob Reference I didn't expect . Nice job. My fav game so far

 

[MF_DOOM]

Check in 08/23/2024
4 hours ago

Hello all!
Fun times here at at Stew industries. ATM about 38,000 words of the script completed, churning through at a decent pace. Hoping that I should be finished and off to the proofreader by early or mid Oct, huzzah!
Started renders today, and as of the moment I have a whopping a herculean 9 renders finished as I type this. Try not to swoon, I promise my PC won't catch fire at those blistering speeds. Jokes aside I'm about where I was hoping to be at the begin of September progress wise so that gives me about a week or so of wiggle room for things, always exciting.
That's about it on update stuff. A few behind the scenes notes. When I started dev stuff back in the day I found that Wednesday and Sunday where the best days for me to make my weekly/ Blue belt update posts respectively. Since then my schedule has shifted slightly so it's been easier to to do Friday/Monday, so while I've been sort of drifting there unofficially this is the official announcement so you can expect those days going forward, no change otherwise, just a shifting of days.
Final note I'll be having an impromptu art stream for an hour or two Sunday at 1pm pacific time, it will be open to all patrons so feel free to drop by, I'll be working on supplementary work and or customs so no spoilers for Unbroken part 8.
That's it for today, hope you have a lovely weekend and as always thank you for the support.
Sláinte!