VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Book 1 Steam] [STWAdev]

[dontehall2023]

Pretty much everyone in the story is attractive to me except Jenny. Her face goes weird sometimes. Vi's face does too but I love her constant staring so I forgive it. Els is definitely top tier imo except her nipples. I was not expecting it when I saw them the first time. It's like going to a fancy restaurant, paying $30 for an entrée, getting a huge plate but the food only takes up 1/10th of it.

A+ description. Now I have some to look forward to.

 

[Maccabbee]

Pretty much everyone in the story is attractive to me except Jenny. Her face goes weird sometimes. Vi's face does too but I love her constant staring so I forgive it. Els is definitely top tier imo except her nipples. I was not expecting it when I saw them the first time. It's like going to a fancy restaurant, paying $30 for an entrée, getting a huge plate but the food only takes up 1/10th of it.

Dude, it was probably cold, and she was excited. She's also pretty young, and not a mom yet. Give her time.

 

[Rehwyn]

#BestGirl


I wouldn't complain but I don't see it.

I think it'll be Vi+Ines and Amrit+Kana

Yeah i feel the same about the trouple possibilities, amrit + ines could be a throuple too but it would be way too much of a middle finger towards vi

Personally I hope for Amrit+Ines

I don't see Vi+Ines. They need each other too much to risk some kind of weird relationship and they don't have a lot of romantic chemistry as is. Armit+Ines makes way more sense given their friendly rivalry. Kana I see as solo only, it took her a while to even go all the way with Valentine alone. Vi+Els is a dream. There is mutual respect but it's more of a race at the moment than a throuple setup.

Pretty much agree with jadepaladin here. My money is on Amrit+Ines and VI+Els for the same reasons, but also a few more.

Regarding Kana, she doesn't feel like much of a sharer long-term. She was the first to propose a monogamous commitment on certain paths already, and I'm not feeling a ton of chemistry recently between her and Amrit, the only LI I really could see her with.

Regarding VI+Els, on certain paths, Els got some of her first "interested in girls" points last chapter, all of which were in relation to some admiration of Vi in their rivalry for MC. Wouldn't surprise me if it's the beginning of their rivalry shifting to something different.

 

[cxx]

Thank you. This game has some ridiculously good looking women. And I've only started part 2. They all seem to be fairly interesting as well. Choosing one to start with has not been an easy task. I've started with Elspeth but I really want to collect them all. Amrit is especially cute.

yea can date and eventually fuck'em all but in the end someday needs to choose 1 and maybe 1 or 3 threesomes.

 

[mruggeri2]

Do the lewd scenes in this game get better? I just started playing these days and I got the Eliza blowjob scene and damn, the animation was so bad. It looked clunky af and it had some really weird renders. Is that the standard for the game or it gets better?

 

[jadepaladin]

Do the lewd scenes in this game get better? I just started playing these days and I got the Eliza blowjob scene and damn, the animation was so bad. It looked clunky af and it had some really weird renders. Is that the standard for the game or it gets better?

I don't remember an Eliza in Unbroken. Wrong thread?

 

[DevinHesi]

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[Krytax123]

I don't remember an Eliza in Unbroken. Wrong thread?

I think he's talking about Serena.

Do the lewd scenes in this game get better? I just started playing these days and I got the Eliza blowjob scene and damn, the animation was so bad. It looked clunky af and it had some really weird renders. Is that the standard for the game or it gets better?

They get better but i consider them one of the few flaws of this avn.

But i think this is very much a matter of opinion/taste as a lot of people seem to like this style (im not sure, is it blender?), Chasing S****** uses the same style and i always think its kinda strange when the characters suddenly look different and like some kind of plastic dolls.

But anyway, i would still say they get better.

 

[VicValenn]

Do the lewd scenes in this game get better? I just started playing these days and I got the Eliza blowjob scene and damn, the animation was so bad. It looked clunky af and it had some really weird renders. Is that the standard for the game or it gets better?

Well, the lewd scenes from this game has certainly improved a lot with the updates. It's still a little annoying that all the animation disappears after a single click, but that's a minor thing.


About Eliza...

 

[jadepaladin]

I think he's talking about Serena.



They get better but i consider them one of the few flaws of this avn.

But i think this is very much a matter of opinion/taste as a lot of people seem to like this style (im not sure, is it blender?), Chasing S****** uses the same style and i always think its kinda strange when the characters suddenly look different and like some kind of plastic dolls.

But anyway, i would still say they get better.

How does someone butcher Eliza into Serena? Wait till they meet Bob, I mean Amrit.

I'm not really a fan of the sex scenes either but it's the least of my priorities in this VN. Honestly, I think sex scenes in most VNs are kinda cringe but I accept that it's incredibly hard to animate something that looks natural so I tend to give it passes unless it's just hilariously bad. Every scene with any LI in the VN related to racing after the evening (I took too long to think of this) was uncanny valley.

 

[Krytax123]

How does someone butcher Eliza into Serena? Wait till they meet Bob, I mean Amrit.

I'm not really a fan of the sex scenes either but it's the least of my priorities in this VN. Honestly, I think sex scenes in most VNs are kinda cringe but I accept that it's incredibly hard to animate something that looks natural so I tend to give it passes unless it's just hilariously bad. Every scene with any LI in the VN related to racing after the evening (I took too long to think of this) was uncanny valley.

Uhhh dunnoooo, Reennaaa ... Eliza ... two letters are the same

I just figured because i think she has the first (or a very early) scene and it starts with a blowjob?

I just disliked this style of animations more than usual as its kinda breaks my immersion when everything looks suddenly different, as if renpy closes and youre suddenly watching a weird gif. There are a few high quality avns who use this style and i just really dislike it. I prefer "worse" anmiations in the same style of the avn over this stuff.

Look how they massacred our boy:



Ok, ok, i will shut up Kana, sorry.

 

[SerHawkes]

Top girl is CLEARLY Ines. Because she will be our sugar mommy while also being a mommy at the same time.

Next up is The Fighting Quinn, mainly because she REALLY loves creampies and likely wants our baby.

Thirdly, Little Red, for while she is stacked, she is endearing. Stubborn, yet wholesome.

Our Muscle Wifers rounds 4th with impressive range and stamina and truly will likely see us balls deep in Amrit and to tag team in.

Our Secertary takes the 5th spot, for she really loves blowjobs and has the best pussy around... The feline kind, clearly. Fucking degenerates...

Sus Bitch takes last for clear as day reasons.

 

[jadepaladin]

Uhhh dunnoooo, Reennaaa ... Eliza ... two letters are the same

I just figured because i think she has the first (or a very early) scene and it starts with a blowjob?

I just disliked this style of animations more than usual as its kinda breaks my immersion when everything looks suddenly different, as if renpy closes and youre suddenly watching a weird gif. There are a few high quality avns who use this style and i just really dislike it. I prefer "worse" anmiations in the same style of the avn over this stuff.

Look how they massacred our boy:

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Ok, ok, i will shut up Kana, sorry.

There's a scene with Els (if I wasn't actively working on another VN I'd go grab a snip) where I asked my girlfriend if Els got replaced with a doppelganger because there's no way it's the same person.

 

[ohhiimfox]

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I wish i could... Stupid German Goverment.

 

[Tremonia]

I wish i could... Stupid German Goverment.

Wasn't the government this time. The problem is Steam/Valve. In the EU you have to have an age verification system. It's EU law. The problem with Germany is that Germany is the only country in the EU where an old catholic hag sued Valve because of the lack of said verfication system. Instead of implementing an age verification system which fits to EU law, Valve decided to shadow ban german customers from games with sexual content. Same would happen if someone in the Netherlands, Poland, Austria, Denmark, France, Italy, etc. would sue them. Valve don't want to invest money into an age verification system. As long as no one goes to court no government cares about it. But it's EU law.

And just a FYI: as a german you can buy said games on Steam. You just have to know how. I'm german myself and have plenty of AVN in my Steam library.

 

[cxx]

ready for update after long play (even with skip since there's some choice like 5 secs after previous) of steam version.

 

[Rehwyn]

Wasn't the government this time. The problem is Steam/Valve. In the EU you have to have an age verification system. It's EU law. The problem with Germany is that Germany is the only country in the EU where an old catholic hag sued Valve because of the lack of said verfication system. Instead of implementing an age verification system which fits to EU law, Valve decided to shadow ban german customers from games with sexual content. Same would happen if someone in the Netherlands, Poland, Austria, Denmark, France, Italy, etc. would sue them. Valve don't want to invest money into an age verification system. As long as no one goes to court no government cares about it. But it's EU law.

And just a FYI: as a german you can buy said games on Steam. You just have to know how. I'm german myself and have plenty of AVN in my Steam library.

I'm sure the main barrier here is that the law requires a physical person as witness to verify age, which means Steam is going to need to rely on third-party companies for age verification. There's no way Steam is going to set up such a system themselves.

It also could potentially set precedent for someone to argue that Steam should do that everywhere, which I'm sure they don't want. It'd almost certainly decrease sales to legal customers since it's an annoying extra step to literally have to travel somewhere to meet a person for the verification. So they might intentionally be avoiding complying as a business decision too.

I'm sure they'll eventually set something up if the issue becomes more widespread and there's enough third-party support to outsource it though.

 

[Elduriel]

I'm sure the main barrier here is that the law requires a physical person as witness to verify age, which means Steam is going to need to rely on third-party companies for age verification. There's no way Steam is going to set up such a system themselves.

nah, many companies do online age/identity verification via a picture of your ID/passport etc. Why Valve doesn't want to do it imo is because it brings up a whole lot of PI and red tape that they need to deal with according to GDPR, and they don't want to do that. They probably did the math on it and it costs them more to implement all that than what they "lose" by doing nothing (as mentioned before, easy to work around it for end-users)

 

[Rehwyn]

nah, many companies do online age/identity verification via a picture of your ID/passport etc. Why Valve doesn't want to do it imo is because it brings up a whole lot of PI and red tape that they need to deal with according to GDPR, and they don't want to do that. They probably did the math on it and it costs them more to implement all that than what they "lose" by doing nothing (as mentioned before, easy to work around it for end-users)

Hmm, I swear a read that in-person verification was needed, but I'm having trouble finding a reliable source (at least in English ). Might have been some misinformation.

It sounds like exactly what is going to be required is still a bit in flux, so it's possible Steam is waiting for things to become a bit more settled (and widespread required) before committing any resources to it.

 

[mruggeri2]

I don't remember an Eliza in Unbroken. Wrong thread?

Definitely wrong thread lol

I had the Nephilim thread open together with SWTA and posted in the wrong one lmao