3.50 star(s) 104 Votes

Porn_Jesus

Forum Fanatic
Jun 21, 2017
5,612
5,552
If this game get voiced, I definetly know that Silky Milk fits the amazonian lady(Who with Iola is my fav here). And the sister of the Embodied looks intreasting.
There will be very little voiced lines because that stuff cost quite the money and there is way too much dialogue already in the game and it only gets worse.

The generals for an example have voiced lines.
 

Ir0n Ma1den

Well-Known Member
Jun 15, 2021
1,542
1,933
There will be very little voiced lines because that stuff cost quite the money and there is way too much dialogue already in the game and it only gets worse.

The generals for an example have voiced lines.
I've noticed but its in Japanese(Not that I'm complaining), I understand its a big game and voicing all the lines will cost to much. But if this game gets funds I suggest Silky milk to play amazonian lady, and the Succubus queen.

Atessatia and Iole already have 1 quest each, starting on your tribe. And yes, I plan to have 3 quest per game for each love interest to develop them as best I can.

Incubi are stronger than the succubus queen. They aren't called 'Wondering Gods' for nothing. But they are very rare and each have their own pocket realm of existence, as you can see by going to the Gifted Mountain. They don't care about the Scorching Hell or demons at all. But they do like to challenge one another from time to time, just for fun.
And do u have a male arch angel counter part to the Incubi?
534a5ab312261c8fc2797fead9ed5977--archangel-tattoo-warrior-angel.jpg
 

Zion of Olympus

Well-Known Member
Game Developer
Apr 23, 2019
1,838
3,891
I've noticed but its in Japanese(Not that I'm complaining), I understand its a big game and voicing all the lines will cost to much. But if this game gets funds I suggest Silky milk to play amazonian lady, and the Succubus queen.



And do u have a male arch angel counter part to the Incubi?
View attachment 1447329
It's possible. Supposedly, Astéri, Selene and Ílios were all Seraphim that made a huge impact on human society before they left, becoming Gods in the process.
 

NinjaNamedBob

Member
May 3, 2018
261
450
If you have so much time and energy to write long texts explaining how things should be done on other's people work, I suggest putting all this availability into your own project. It will be much more fruitful.
My own project is fine. It's also not relevant to providing you feedback on how to improve your writing. For someone who claims to be confident about his project, you sure get defensive about criticism.

I have a vision for this series, both how should be made and the story, and no amount of feedback will change that.
The making of a good writer is to be willing to make compromises for the sake of telling a fluid, coherent story. If a majority of people say your process is bad (as they have), then it's not those people trying to trample on your vision. It's people who see potential telling you that you need to work on your writing. You want to keep producing sub-par quality content, cool. Personally, as a writer myself, I would hate to have someone come to me and say "hey, man, your story has potential, but the quality of writing is really not up to snuff."

Then again, maybe the difference is pride in my work, and you lacking any in yours.


People who share the vision will gather and people who don't will not.

I'm here only to answer questions from the community, because I know that when they can't support us, they gather here.

Have a great day.
I'll preface this with noting that I hate the concept of "broader audience appeal." I think it's a cheap tagline by out-of-touch execs who have no actual investment in the media they're trying to sell. It only works if the people selling the product understand both the entrenched base that already exists, and how to respect that group while also seeking to bring more people into the fold. It's a tricky tightrope, so I have my qualms about the concept itself.

That said...

As a writer and someone who has multiple hobbies, I can't think of a more self-destructive phrase than "I only care about those who agree with me." You couldn't have said it more transparently than if you had typed out those exact words. You're the next Eromancer, bud. Over 3 years with little progress, and you started a second project with ambiguous intent. If you had been working with 3D renders rather than anime cg, I would have called you out on being the guy himself.

You're not coming here to do anything except satisfy your own ego and punch down at the critics. That's it. If you legitimately wanted to improve, wanted to receive real feedback, and sought to truly make the "pitiful poor" people feel acknowledged, neither you nor I would be investing any time in this specific discourse. You'd be ignoring the people who offer praise and ask the most obvious, low-effort questions. But, we both know you're only here to have your ego stroked. A shame, because as I've said several times already, your story has potential.

If my absence and the fact that I am only now replying hasn't indicated as much, let me spell it out. I have a life outside these forums. Providing you criticism to help you improve your writing is neither a lengthy venture nor too great a distraction from my current day-to-day. What I am attempting to offer is a carefully crafted bit of suggestions and insights to help you improve your writing and tell a more engaging story. You have not only refused to consider what the critics have said, but also shown contempt to anyone who doesn't immediately lay praise on you. Hell, you admitted that you went out of your way to harass someone who criticized your writing in a review.

At this point, I know it's worthless for anyone to send any kind of feedback that isn't blatant sycophancy your way. You're not here for anything but to have your ego stroked, and I see no value for myself or anyone who strives for quality in their content to engage you. You can reply if you want. I might feel inclined to read it, or not. But, as far as further discourse, you'll receive none.

Good luck, Eromancer Jr.
 

Porn_Jesus

Forum Fanatic
Jun 21, 2017
5,612
5,552
My own project is fine. It's also not relevant to providing you feedback on how to improve your writing. For someone who claims to be confident about his project, you sure get defensive about criticism.



The making of a good writer is to be willing to make compromises for the sake of telling a fluid, coherent story. If a majority of people say your process is bad (as they have), then it's not those people trying to trample on your vision. It's people who see potential telling you that you need to work on your writing. You want to keep producing sub-par quality content, cool. Personally, as a writer myself, I would hate to have someone come to me and say "hey, man, your story has potential, but the quality of writing is really not up to snuff."

Then again, maybe the difference is pride in my work, and you lacking any in yours.




I'll preface this with noting that I hate the concept of "broader audience appeal." I think it's a cheap tagline by out-of-touch execs who have no actual investment in the media they're trying to sell. It only works if the people selling the product understand both the entrenched base that already exists, and how to respect that group while also seeking to bring more people into the fold. It's a tricky tightrope, so I have my qualms about the concept itself.

That said...

As a writer and someone who has multiple hobbies, I can't think of a more self-destructive phrase than "I only care about those who agree with me." You couldn't have said it more transparently than if you had typed out those exact words. You're the next Eromancer, bud. Over 3 years with little progress, and you started a second project with ambiguous intent. If you had been working with 3D renders rather than anime cg, I would have called you out on being the guy himself.

You're not coming here to do anything except satisfy your own ego and punch down at the critics. That's it. If you legitimately wanted to improve, wanted to receive real feedback, and sought to truly make the "pitiful poor" people feel acknowledged, neither you nor I would be investing any time in this specific discourse. You'd be ignoring the people who offer praise and ask the most obvious, low-effort questions. But, we both know you're only here to have your ego stroked. A shame, because as I've said several times already, your story has potential.

If my absence and the fact that I am only now replying hasn't indicated as much, let me spell it out. I have a life outside these forums. Providing you criticism to help you improve your writing is neither a lengthy venture nor too great a distraction from my current day-to-day. What I am attempting to offer is a carefully crafted bit of suggestions and insights to help you improve your writing and tell a more engaging story. You have not only refused to consider what the critics have said, but also shown contempt to anyone who doesn't immediately lay praise on you. Hell, you admitted that you went out of your way to harass someone who criticized your writing in a review.

At this point, I know it's worthless for anyone to send any kind of feedback that isn't blatant sycophancy your way. You're not here for anything but to have your ego stroked, and I see no value for myself or anyone who strives for quality in their content to engage you. You can reply if you want. I might feel inclined to read it, or not. But, as far as further discourse, you'll receive none.

Good luck, Eromancer Jr.
Oh my, you surely invest a lot of time even though, based on your own sentences, it's a waste of time because the dev doesn't listen. From my point of view this would mean you don't care either about the reaction but you enjoy to talk to the air or something.

It's so tiresome to read your comments, there's always so much blaming and " I know everything and will teach you" vibes in the room. Could you just... work on your highly successful project plus increasing the focus on your real life, which would mean you are less active here for the sake of other people?
 

Zion of Olympus

Well-Known Member
Game Developer
Apr 23, 2019
1,838
3,891
Oh my, you surely invest a lot of time even though, based on your own sentences, it's a waste of time because the dev doesn't listen. From my point of view this would mean you don't care either about the reaction but you enjoy to talk to the air or something.

It's so tiresome to read your comments, there's always so much blaming and " I know everything and will teach you" vibes in the room. Could you just... work on your highly successful project plus increasing the focus on your real life, which would mean you are less active here for the sake of other people?
Ignore him, brother. This guy is so bitter that he made a review now just because he was angry with my reply. Like this would somehow affect me in the slightest lol

Perhaps by ignoring him, he can finally find the time to focus on his own project and show us how a perfect and flawless game/story is done, instead of giving unwanted opinions on other people's work.

We might be helping him this way. I already set to ignore all his messages. I don't have time for text walls these days.
 

blufalcon

Member
Dec 14, 2018
184
325
Wait for a full save. Full gallery unlocked. Or simply enjoy other games that suit your taste better.
SC is clearly not for you.
You should never play an RPG Maker game if reading text isn't your thing. There's most likely not a single game out there which has only voiced lines.^^
It was a joke that didn't land. If the Dev doesn't have times for walls of text themselves, then the game wouldn't get finished, because they wouldn't implement their own walls of text. That was the line of thinking.
I get that you're all in full-defense mode, though. Personally, my issue with the game is the pacing and with the sense of promise, progress, and payoff. Not the plot and story itself.
 

Ir0n Ma1den

Well-Known Member
Jun 15, 2021
1,542
1,933
I don't get the issue, if you don't like the game then stop playing it and move on. I don't understand the bitching, I'm now playing the spin-off and I like the game.

Don't understand why people don't like the story, there are games with much worse stories outside.
 

blufalcon

Member
Dec 14, 2018
184
325
I don't get the issue, if you don't like the game then stop playing it and move on. I don't understand the bitching, I'm now playing the spin-off and I like the game.

Don't understand why people don't like the story, there are games with much worse stories outside.
I like the game I just think that there's exposition dumps that happen too often and at times that brings the momentum of things to a screeching halt. To me, it's like I'm trying to watch a 10 minute YouTube video that has 5 Ad breaks in it. I think it takes away from the immersion and that there could be better ways to have players engage with the story.

There are other things I could criticize as well, such as the lack of actual build options and runes just being stat-sticks. The lack of combat depth makes every fight in the game as easy as applying Iron Will before the battle and just holding down the confirm key to attack a few times to win. The only potential roadblock being the chance of getting RNG permastunned by the few enemies that have access to stuns, but that still usually isn't an issue. Let me ask this, if this game is supposed to span multiple chapters, generations, eons, etc, is the combat actually going to remain this stale throughout the entirety of it? Will we be challenged at all? Or is the Adalon Hunter going to continue to slice through everyone like a hot knife through butter? Did this dev work at fucking Blizzard or something? If the story is going to be raising stakes, then I think the combat should reflect that as well. It's obvious that the combat part of this role-playing game was sacrificed for the story. If I were to compare this game to something like The Three Charms R, then mechanically and narratively, Minwa is superior. Depth to the combat and story provided in ways that don't feel like you're #1 on every telemarketer's to-call list.

The dev is probably going to block anyone that criticizes them and say that we just don't understand their grand tale, but that won't stop me from pledging during release months to play the game. I'd like to note I'm not intending to come off as hostile, just criticizing. These forums are meant for discussion as well, but for some reason people here actually fucking hate any type of discourse and turn it into tribal warfare bullshit and try to shoo people away.
 
Last edited:

Porn_Jesus

Forum Fanatic
Jun 21, 2017
5,612
5,552
I get that you're all in full-defense mode, though. Personally, my issue with the game is the pacing and with the sense of promise, progress, and payoff. Not the plot and story itself.
Why full defense? I just gave an advice in a calm way. :D

If the dev fucks up in some way I will mention that and ask what happened. I just can't stand people (not you in that case) who think they know everything but let other people do the work while playing the all-knowing supervisor. X3
 

Dreamer44

Well-Known Member
Dec 19, 2019
1,125
1,003
Sorry, maybe someone has already asked this question, but how to go further through the barrier View attachment 1451524
Complete the mission on the Bloody jaw tribe.

Talk character with a ! Over it in the tribe. He's a witch hunter, and gives you a mission to kill a witch. When you go and meet her, you're given the option of killing the witch or changing sides and go back to the tribe to kill the witch hunter.

After the mission is complete, the one you sided with will help you take down the barrier.
 

Asdf1234hf

New Member
Aug 22, 2021
2
2
What if you don't want to side with either the witch or the hunter to get rid of the barrier. Can we have like another route of neutral progression. Not siding with either should be a choice gameplay wise.
 
  • Angry
Reactions: Oathakafaze

Porn_Jesus

Forum Fanatic
Jun 21, 2017
5,612
5,552
What if you don't want to side with either the witch or the hunter to get rid of the barrier. Can we have like another route of neutral progression. Not siding with either should be a choice gameplay wise.
That wouldn't make sense for the plot. You need every help you can get against the succubus invasion. You don't have the luxury of playing one man army. :D
 
3.50 star(s) 104 Votes