Zion of Olympus I'll try to do some constructive feedback regarding
combat:
- During first fight with succubus and later encounters with her Iron Will sometimes is not applied after leaving grapple - leads to stunlock until it is applied again (I think the whole animation of IW is skipped).
- Succubus Temptation's drain during Iron Will seems kinda redundant unless there will be more mechanics involved. It does prolong the fight for about like 1 attack? If there is no other meaning for it, there is no need for it. Also it seems nonsensical from ''lore'' point.
- I like that you have kept Iron Will going on during Stun on Second fight to prevent stunlock.
- Maybe for convenience there could be a visible turn timer on Iron Will, but it's also good as it is since it force player to being more observant.
- I like Iron Will system, but maybe there could be some content bypassing Iron Will since if I want to do well at the game, but also see some scenes, I have to lose on purpose. This could be done with additional moves with higher dmg or status effects (like smaller hj strokes or gropes) which do not lead to game over. I am pretty sure there will be scenes outside combat, but this could also spice combat a little more.
Overall I like the idea and amount of work for world design you put into. Also appreciate the music, sound effects, various dialogue choices (for now without consequences, but still adds to immersion) and responses. It feels refreshing to feel effort from other things than art only.
