I feel like sometimes 'story' and 'characters' (which are both parts of the writing) get tangled up in these discussions. I personally think it's extremely harsh to say the game has "really shitty writing", especially (as dolfe67 and Ragnar touch on) in comparison to other AVNs. For me not much has happened yet in the story, and I guess not really enough to judge whether it's a good story or not (although I am personally engaged by the threads it's started (although to be fair I like slice of life kind of games without really feeling there's a need for an elaborate plot)). But I do think the characters are good, and quite distinctly drawn (again, especially compared to many AVNs). If for no other reason than it feels like they each have their own personalities and motivations and preferences, in a way that a lot of games' love interests don't.
Where I maybe agree with you Lux Perpetua is about the main character being a bit blank. But TBH I don't really have a problem with that in a game like this - the absence can be filled by players imagining their own objectives onto the MC.
Anyway, I write this as someone who really likes this game. So obviously take that for what it's worth.
