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allanl9020142

Well-Known Member
Aug 23, 2018
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My one and only complaint is the fact that we have yet another contrived 'mafia/drug lord' side plot being built up.

It just feels like a pointless waste of time. I don't want intrigue and danger, I just want a fun summer of youthful exploration and partying. The side plot stuff just slows everything down and drags it out... which I think might be why we see them in damn near every VN...

Aside from that, the characters all have interesting personalities and realistic dialogue that you typically don't find in VN's. My two favorite scenes are Sophie in the pool and Mia/Eve on the couch simply because they felt so realistic. I don't need tons of renders and fancy slow zooms when the writing is this good, I just need the story to be complete before the end of the decade or I'll end up writing this off as yet another grift and move on.
True. I'm not really a fan of stuff like that. The premise makes me feel sort of nostalgic about earlier VNs but stuff like that always ends up being shoehorned in during the climax because the two themes just sort end up clashing in a mismatched fashion instead of a tight juxtaposition.

These two definitely have the writing chops to just make it a "fun summer of youthful exploration and partying" they don't really need extra drama on top of that. I mean, damn. So much underlying tension between the characters just bubbling up is enough to keep me interested. Especially between MC and Ms. Hill as well as Mia and Sophie (different kind of tension lol).

Still, it's kind of whatever. It's nothing actually egregious. The "underbelly of society" stuff is just kind of like a "meh" from me. I think we can both agree if that's the only thing about the story then it's already a lot better than a lot of other VNs.
 

MrBaddieBear

Active Member
Apr 10, 2022
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This MC is some superhero, like damn son, I can't get that much done even in like one week, yet this mf is doing it all within the first 24 hours: Bree is already so ready to drop her panties for the MC, MC is making out with Sophie, rizzing up both Catherine and Eve, getting Mia to do some naughty naughty, banging Jennie and Cassie, rizzing up some hoes on dating app, doing groceries with Mr. Miller, fixing lights, doing some gymnastics, getting wasted at the club while some shady shit is going down, exploring some junkie cave... He really isn't wasting any time.
 
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This MC is some superhero, like damn son, I can't get that much done even in like one week, yet this mf is doing it all within the first 24 hours: Bree is already so ready to drop her panties for the MC, MC is making out with Sophie, rizzing up both Catherine and Eve, getting Mia to do some naughty naughty, banging Jennie and Cassie, rizzing up some hoes on dating app, doing groceries with Mr. Miller, fixing lights, doing some gymnastics, getting wasted at the club while some shady shit is going down, exploring some junkie cave... He really isn't wasting any time.
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MC on that 'sheer will' time
 

songlick

Newbie
May 19, 2024
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There's a lot of good stuff going on, I don't mind some actual story, sure it may end up a huge cliche but without it characters would also be more boring.
There's some good scenes, but true, things just come way too easy to this guy, maybe even in VN terms :)
 

Panther16

Newbie
Apr 29, 2022
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My one and only complaint is the fact that we have yet another contrived 'mafia/drug lord' side plot being built up.

It just feels like a pointless waste of time. I don't want intrigue and danger, I just want a fun summer of youthful exploration and partying. The side plot stuff just slows everything down and drags it out... which I think might be why we see them in damn near every VN...

Aside from that, the characters all have interesting personalities and realistic dialogue that you typically don't find in VN's. My two favorite scenes are Sophie in the pool and Mia/Eve on the couch simply because they felt so realistic. I don't need tons of renders and fancy slow zooms when the writing is this good, I just need the story to be complete before the end of the decade or I'll end up writing this off as yet another grift and move on.
Yes, Sophie in the pool and Mia/Eve watching TV were two really great scenes. We don't need the 'mafia/drug lord' stuff to take up a lot of time with so many good scenes & possibilities involving the girls.

Other scenes I really liked were exercising with Sophie, getting to know everyone at the table, talking to all the girls in the field, Bree/Sophie in the pool, Eve and Jogger, meeting Livia and Hannah at the club, walking with Mia and Sophie to the field. Then also some good lewd scenes as well. Mia in the field, Mia at night, Mia in the morning, in Eve's room. There's a LOT to like just interacting with all the girls.
 
4.60 star(s) 331 Votes