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This MC is some superhero, like damn son, I can't get that much done even in like one week, yet this mf is doing it all within the first 24 hours: Bree is already so ready to drop her panties for the MC, MC is making out with Sophie, rizzing up both Catherine and Eve, getting Mia to do some naughty naughty, banging Jennie and Cassie, rizzing up some hoes on dating app, doing groceries with Mr. Miller, fixing lights, doing some gymnastics, getting wasted at the club while some shady shit is going down, exploring some junkie cave... He really isn't wasting any time.
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MC on that 'sheer will' time
 

songlick

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There's a lot of good stuff going on, I don't mind some actual story, sure it may end up a huge cliche but without it characters would also be more boring.
There's some good scenes, but true, things just come way too easy to this guy, maybe even in VN terms :)
 

Panther16

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My one and only complaint is the fact that we have yet another contrived 'mafia/drug lord' side plot being built up.

It just feels like a pointless waste of time. I don't want intrigue and danger, I just want a fun summer of youthful exploration and partying. The side plot stuff just slows everything down and drags it out... which I think might be why we see them in damn near every VN...

Aside from that, the characters all have interesting personalities and realistic dialogue that you typically don't find in VN's. My two favorite scenes are Sophie in the pool and Mia/Eve on the couch simply because they felt so realistic. I don't need tons of renders and fancy slow zooms when the writing is this good, I just need the story to be complete before the end of the decade or I'll end up writing this off as yet another grift and move on.
Yes, Sophie in the pool and Mia/Eve watching TV were two really great scenes. We don't need the 'mafia/drug lord' stuff to take up a lot of time with so many good scenes & possibilities involving the girls.

Other scenes I really liked were exercising with Sophie, getting to know everyone at the table, talking to all the girls in the field, Bree/Sophie in the pool, Eve and Jogger, meeting Livia and Hannah at the club, walking with Mia and Sophie to the field. Then also some good lewd scenes as well. Mia in the field, Mia at night, Mia in the morning, in Eve's room. There's a LOT to like just interacting with all the girls.
 
4.50 star(s) 381 Votes