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Yes, I'm one of the people interested in such lighthearted games.And there is obviously a demand for such lighthearted games.
This will sound harsh no matter how I put it, so... "Lighthearted" doesn't mean "incompetent". It means you avoid conflict and serious themes. It doesn't mean your characters need to be empty. You chose to have characters and to give them many many lines of dialogue. What I'm criticizing is that the dialogue accomplishes next to nothing while also being annoying and the plot events take the reader out of the story by being breaking suspension of disbelief. Admittedly, humor is subjective, so maybe most people here are laughing instead of rolling their eyes.
You and Hungover00 talk as if I'm demanding pizza at an ice cream shop when I'm trying to say the ice cream is flavorless.
Again, harsh, but I want to be very clear about what I'm doing.
I have no personal ill will towards you. What happened is that I started reading a VN with potential then saw that potential squandered, which upset me a bit. When I write long posts like that it's not out of hatred, It's because I want the work to become better. If you don't think my input has much value, then I don't have much reason to stay invested, since I don't believe the work will improve.
In any case, I honestly wish you good luck with your project.