VN Ren'Py Summer Story [v0.3.0] [Logo]

[Trasher2018]

I think the premise and idea for the setup is nice and has a lot of potential.

But the look of the MC and his twin is extremely unpleasant. Maybe the dev should rework that and try to get that right. You cant just shrink adults and get teens. Maybe it helps to just make them larger. When they are 18 (as said) they shouldnt be smaller than her) - but then you have to question why they have to stay with their sister ... I mean they are adults ...

But yeah ... oh and the a proofreader is needed. The writing/translation is lacking ..

 

[logoarh]

When they are 18 (as said) they shouldnt be smaller than her) - but then you have to question why they have to stay with their sister ... I mean they are adults ...

Thanks.
Guys we are on a porn forum. Characters under the age of 18 are prohibited by law, and we all obey the law.
And I really NEED to explain why the characters look like this and why they are that age, seriously? SERIOUSLY?




All characters in my game are adults, officer.

 

[Esko]

Создатель, вы не думали создать контент только под Категорию Milf? Спасибо за игру Демо) Поду вас поддерживать на Patreon

 

[logoarh]

Создатель, вы не думали создать контент только под Категорию Milf? Спасибо за игру Демо) Поду вас поддерживать на Patreon

I thought about it, but now I want to make this type of game. Maybe later

 

[DA22]

Why are you all so greedy guys?
Yes, you can take care of everything. But at a certain moment when you are not able to hide this, the second brother may intervene in the relationship. That's the idea of story

Since we do not like sharing or seeing another have the action even if it is a twin. Now to be fair my brothers never shared their GF's or later wives with me either.

Then again, you can just ignore us if that is what you want to be your game to be about. You have been clear enough about your intentions, but if you want those that dislike sharing with another dick to play your game it is better on that path brother is as much exempt as possible and for sure have no implied or even worse shown sex scenes with the main girls and start that divergence as soon as possible within the story. Else just tell those to not play your game, since it is not for them. However nice your story, twist how he becomes involved after he finds out and however well planned they will still dislike it since the basic underlying tenet is something they dislike. Personally it is not even so much another dick is a real problem as long as the MC including lesbian scenes has more as 50% of the action, but MMF is a bonerkiller for me.

Renders look good and clear what intended age of twins is so no problems with that.

 

[logoarh]

Since we do not like sharing or seeing another have the action even if it is a twin. Now to be fair my brothers never shared their GF's or later wives with me either.

Then again, you can just ignore us if that is what you want to be your game to be about. You have been clear enough about your intentions, but if you want those that dislike sharing with another dick to play your game it is better on that path brother is as much exempt as possible and for sure have no implied or even worse shown sex scenes with the main girls and start that divergence as soon as possible within the story. Else just tell those to not play your game, since it is not for them. However nice your story, twist how he becomes involved after he finds out and however well planned they will still dislike it since the basic underlying tenet is something they dislike.

Renders look good and clear what intended age of twins is so no problems with that.

Thanks for the detailed feedback

 

[D-Vine]

Download Unofficial Android Port

Summer Story [v0.1] [Logo] ENG/RUS

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[logoarh]

Microsoft Defender also detects trojan when opening Summer_Story.exe. False positive?

I have licensed windows 10 with last upd and avast premium. Shows nothing. I don't know why your antiviruses are complaining guys

 

[DA22]

I have licensed windows 10 with last upd and avast premium. Shows nothing. I don't know why your antiviruses are complaining guys

Most likely false positives from the Renpy.exe since that version of the exe has not been used enough worldwide by that anti-virus program to be known as a safe exe for the heuristic processes taste.

 

[Anastasia Lanycia]

What do you know about the new update?

 

[caxhub]

Download android v0.1 APK

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P/s: Request Link Android Game at my

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[logoarh]

What do you know about the new update?

For now done half of the first day (demo is day 0), in size almost like the whole demo.
I can't say the exact dates, because if I name a specific date, I will definitely not done in time.

 

[__1994___]

Just ended this game - it was amazing, thank you, dev's for Summer Story The game is great and keep going


I absolutely loved it. I'd support you if I wasn't living on a student budget
Waiting patiently on next updates

 

[logoarh]

Just ended this game - it was amazing, thank you, dev's for Summer Story The game is great and keep going


I absolutely loved it. I'd support you if I wasn't living on a student budget
Waiting patiently on next updates

Thanks a lot for the words.
And guys do not worry about money, if you dont have much for you'r living, don’t donate me, I’m not a beast to ask the last money from people. I will not be lost anyway.

 

[Nikhi]

Any android link?

 

[Takkertje]

Why?

Ugly brothers , unrealistic (they look 15)
Unbelievable story , very bad use of the english language.
When i make up my own MC name i see the old one coming back too often ( keep getting Derek)
Much too short.
You'had better fixed this issues before publishing.
I know enough.
Delete.

 

[Frank Chateau]

I haven't been this optimistic about a game in awhile. Original designs, fun setting -Im in.
Just please dont hurt me like Lust & Passion does

 

[logoarh]

I haven't been this optimistic about a game in awhile. Original designs, fun setting -Im in.
Just please dont hurt me like Lust & Passion does

Thanks.
What is wrong with Lust & Passion? The last time I played(a year ago) it seemed to be good

 

[Frank Chateau]

Thanks.
What is wrong with Lust & Passion? The last time I played(a year ago) it seemed to be good

Long & slow updates are how L&P pains me. Although they just had some kind of surgery

 

[HellNoo01]

any news about update?