VN Ren'Py Summer Story [v0.3.0] [Logo]

[logoarh]

It's ur game u can do what u want, but why make a poll if ur gonna ignore it?
Anyway good luck with the game.

That, detective, is the right question. I wanted to know what would be best for most, but a lot of people wrote in PM with a request not to change anything much and I tried the prepared poses with a new size. They began to look strange.
So I apologize to everyone and no longer distract

 

[finndem]

Anyone else having issues with the links in OP? Getting a lot of white screens when I click them.

 

[Roninsoul7]

This game sort of has potential, but since the MC is both unable to be named, and a dwarf, not really my cup of tea.

I would suggest you ask the community for a translator because the english in the game is pretty much nonsense, literal translations are always bad and even worse when any language to english. Even english (britain) to english (united states) can be horrible. Take the word nappy, and it has so many meanings in both countries that are at once the same and mutually exclusive depending on context.
It's understandable that you want the brothers to be shorter for story purposes, but barring significant genetic abnormalities, males are taller than females of the same family group. To justify the extreme height difference, you are going to either have to put in that they both suffer from dwarfism, or that they are under the age of 12.
There is a massive potential grind already added in, so you should probably tag sandbox, or put it in planned tags before those who dislike/hate sandbox games come down on you for not warning them.

Good luck on your story, and I hope I was able to help you with my critique.

 

[Angmir]

Ooookaaaayy:Final decision about height
Okay, comrades, today I thought a lot and decided to choose version 1.
This is closest to what I wanted at first.
Also i changed the proportions a bit to make it look better.
And I reduced Mary's height a little
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Kasie can't pat guys on the head if they're too tall

Whatever you do remember - democracy wont help you make good creative decisions ;-)
Go with whatever feels correct to you. You are the author, make people see your vision the way it was intended, and then judge it. If you will listen to mayority - you will always end up with most borring most souless thing in the end.

Now time for real work starts.
Good Luck.

 

[tg]

Ooookaaaayy:Final decision about height
Okay, comrades, today I thought a lot and decided to choose version 1.
This is closest to what I wanted at first.
Also i changed the proportions a bit to make it look better.
And I reduced Mary's height a little

Nice. I think you have the elements for a pretty interesting game. I really like the models of the sister and mom. I haven't played the game, since I've seen it's more like a demo right now. But, with the right story and events, I'm sure it'll be a fun game to play.

And, you did good with the edit. Even the young male looks OK. Mostly, I like the sister though, so that's one big factor of my good impressions of this game. Keep up the work, and try to show us some nice things!

 

[logoarh]

This game sort of has potential, but since the MC is both unable to be named, and a dwarf, not really my cup of tea.

I would suggest you ask the community for a translator because the english in the game is pretty much nonsense, literal translations are always bad and even worse when any language to english. Even english (britain) to english (united states) can be horrible. Take the word nappy, and it has so many meanings in both countries that are at once the same and mutually exclusive depending on context.
It's understandable that you want the brothers to be shorter for story purposes, but barring significant genetic abnormalities, males are taller than females of the same family group. To justify the extreme height difference, you are going to either have to put in that they both suffer from dwarfism, or that they are under the age of 12.
There is a massive potential grind already added in, so you should probably tag sandbox, or put it in planned tags before those who dislike/hate sandbox games come down on you for not warning them.

Good luck on your story, and I hope I was able to help you with my critique.

What superpower did you use to determine what the grind will be? Of the characteristics that can be accumulated in addition to history, only Derek's dexteruty. which opens additional events and sudden events of the type if casey falls, you can catch her. The rest of the characteristics are accumulated in the course of history when you make choices.
i'm not ubisoft, man
About translation, I'll find someone to help me later, probably

 

[logoarh]

Now time for real work starts.
Good Luck.

Nice. I think you have the elements for a pretty interesting game. I really like the models of the sister and mom. I haven't played the game, since I've seen it's more like a demo right now. But, with the right story and events, I'm sure it'll be a fun game to play.

And, you did good with the edit. Even the young male looks OK. Mostly, I like the sister though, so that's one big factor of my good impressions of this game. Keep up the work, and try to show us some nice things!

Thanks a lot

 

[kinox90]

Looking foward to play new content Great potential imo !

 

[Hermit76]

I don't understand why there is a twin brother. A twin sister on the other hand...

 

[Hermit76]

The twin bro is there for the 3somes.
Would also prefer a twin sister, maybe the dev can pop one out nowhere.

A threesome would also work with a twin sister... Also with two older twin sisters instead of one of the same age...

Nevertheless - I like that mother and daughter look similar enough that it is really believeable for them being related. And they both look great! In many other games the artists just choose some models they like and claim that they are mother and daughter (or landylady and roommate... ).

 

[Deleted member 54063]

Fucking hell.

Another one for the ignore list.

 

[Pulse12]

Soooo will I be given the option early on to NOT share with the other brother...?

 

[tg]

I don't think there's much wrong with this. I like it. I finally played it, and I like the characters. I'm not sure why people where so concerned with the brothers. Or even about /sharing/.

I put forward ideas that the brothers (twins) might be antagonistic with each other. But, having played, I don't see that as the best approach. One you play directly, and the other brother is there too. I don't mind if that brother gets some action. I do think there could be benefit in having like three paths. One where your brother gets most scenes. One where you do. One where there's a mutual sharing going on.

It's too early to see what kind of story this will be. But, as I previously said, it's got elements to be pretty fun. I like that the brothers are into different things. And I like how the sister treats them. Seems pretty realistic. I look forward to seeing what comes next.

 

[skorpyo1975]

Looks something new i like it.
I really like the models of the sister and mom even the young male looks OK.
Kasie looks very hot.
I think you have the elements for a pretty interesting game.
I played the game, but it's more like a demo right now.With the right story and events,.
I'm sure it'll be a great fun game to play.
Keep up the work, and show us some nice things!

Thank you!

 

[logoarh]

Soooo will I be given the option early on to NOT share with the other brother...?

Why are you all so greedy guys?
Yes, you can take care of everything. But at a certain moment when you are not able to hide this, the second brother may intervene in the relationship. That's the idea of story

 

[Nulldev]

Not played yet, but if the twins written like the Harry Potter mischief twins, then it's not sharing girl with someone, but with your other half. I mean your left hand is not jealous of your right hand when feeling up a girl

 

[paust.alex]

Why are you all so greedy guys?

We are not greedy, we are just supporters of traditional family values - one husband and many wives. Other men are not allowed in this system of values, unless they are eunuchs. Is it possible to make a brother a eunuch? If so, then everything is fine. Let him change our babies ' diapers while we make new ones.

 

[Jansen]

Wow!! This looks really nice. The Sister is very hot and cute and the same time. Eagerly waiting for the next update to come out. Lots of sexy scenes can be created in this Small house scenario. Im already loving it. Keep it up logoarh

 

[RIC0H]

Rename the game to Death by snu snu

 

[SilX]

This game is gonna be great