VN Ren'Py Summer Story [v0.3.0] [Logo]

[Angmir]

Thanks for the feedback, I'm not going to make them much older, I'll just make them the size without the effect of the uncanny valley, at least I'll try

Thx for reply - then try to make their chest less burly - that could help. Although I know in Tk17 it can cause problems with clothing meshes.

Check out my other sugestion

Although if it is not how you intend to tell your story - I understand.

Good luck with your project.

 

[logoarh]

By the way, some video preview of animations in game. It's just sample

 

[logoarh]

Although I know in Tk17 it can cause problems with clothing meshes.

Ow you know about tk17? Yes, to change the chest of the guys and to make it look good, you need to edit the meshes of the model and clothes. This is a pain in the ass for me, so i just try to fit the body size

 

[YaYa_UnTIN2]

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[logoarh]

My thoughts...

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Good luck anyway dev!

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Ok i heard your opinion, thanks and don't worry guys i listening reasonable critique calmly

 

[Angmir]

Ow you know about tk17? Yes, to change the chest of the guys and to make it look good, you need to edit the meshes of the model and clothes. This is a pain in the ass for me, so i just try to fit the body size

Yeah used to play with it a bit a LOOONG time ago - I always recognise especialy male models from there ;-

It looks way better than I remember it myslef in your case. Really great sister model !

Some models I used to make

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I even had my own Shota VN planned but it was back when I was at Uni and had a lot of time ;-)

 

[Angmir]

Ok this is cringy but I made it some 10 years ago.
It was supposed to be for a novel "Shota Trip"
I started working on it as a book, and also did some graphics on the side with TK17

But I never got past the first 2 chapters.

That's why you see - your project is looking so great to me ;-)
It is something I always wanted to make but couldn't.

I hope for your success!

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[logoarh]

That's why you see - your project is looking so great to me ;-)
It is something I always wanted to make but couldn't.

I hope for your success!

That's why i'm here I've always wanted to make my own game too
Thank for support

 

[Ceadmon]

Didn't try it out yet but damn those model's are realistic! Is this using honey select? Can't believe how far this game has been pushed thanks to the mod community.

 

[Angmir]

Didn't try it out yet but damn those model's are realistic! Is this using honey select? Can't believe how far this game has been pushed thanks to the mod community.

It is TK 17 - game/engine from 2002

 

[Bryon Smothers]

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[FreakingBananas]

Few things
Interesting Game
I'll like to name my MC cause like Twins look hella similar and i sure as hell don't wanne share
Is it gonna be Only Sister or Harem
Demo shows about 40% of what the game is going to be like, less than what i am usually used to demo sizes but meh i am spoiled and i do find this game interesting enough to look forward to update
*midgets tho*

 

[Belnick]

not really a v0.1, more like a demo/promo
was no sex animations so have no opinion of game yet

 

[Skankhunt 4 2 0]

mc seems really rare
I'm in

 

[DSTORQUE]

Renders look great, but then I noticed how young the boys are. Simply not my cup of tea, feels wrong. Good luck to you going forward though.

 

[Leo D. Marstone]

The girl looks hot and the render on the OP made me curious. Though her hairline is a bit dark in some renders.
Also am digging the concept and am looking forward to the development.

Now, I take it the game is mostly about some friendly sibling bonding so i would advice like many before me to be wary of Patreon if you want to use it for your income.

With that said I wish you all the luck and most importantly fun ,)
cheers

 

[Zolkane]

Ok i heard your opinion, thanks and don't worry guys i listening reasonable critique calmly

i dont see the problem make them young fi you like shota. But if your plan make them normal make them smalll look dumb

 

[logoarh]

Ooookaaaayy:Final decision about height
Okay, comrades, today I thought a lot and decided to choose version 1.
This is closest to what I wanted at first.
Also i changed the proportions a bit to make it look better.
And I reduced Mary's height a little



Kasie can't pat guys on the head if they're too tall

 

[Vintage Studio]

Renders look great, good luck dev!

 

[Lerd0]

Ooookaaaayy:Final decision about height
Okay, comrades, today I thought a lot and decided to choose version 1.
This is closest to what I wanted at first.
Also i changed the proportions a bit to make it look better.
And I reduced Mary's height a little
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Kasie can't pat guys on the head if they're too tall

It's ur game u can do what u want, but why make a poll if ur gonna ignore it?
Anyway good luck with the game.