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Let's not forget that it is very important that two unrelated roommates do not copulate, It's a real taboo
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This could be easily explained with Zara and Mila thinking they are related, and then they clarifying that they are just roommates. The problem is why Mc and Nami is so taboo, why the "Race of Impossible Odds" choices why they could not kiss at Vic's, I don't know how Ocean will explain it.
He wants to move away from it because he needs to eat and financial security, but how he will make sense of the story I don't know. Is not like he can keep the ambiguiness for long either. I just can not think of a solution that fits it.
Moving forward I don't think that we can expect this type of content on either game, regardless of how much sense it makes or not.
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And if they are ralated at the end? Maybe both lost their parents in a car accident because they are siblings and for some reason someone don´t want them to know so they have been raised as roomates
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Even if my brain could ignore the inconsistencies of them asking why she's red, there is no way I can make up excuses for the "Race of Impossible odds" like you mentioned, or Nojiko being so concerned about their "weird" relationship or the fact that them, two completely unrelated people, could not make out in front of Vic and Mila, or the subsequent conversation before getting to the pizza place.
It just doesn't add up. I'm sorry but as it stands, I have to reiterate. There is only one way the dialogue makes any sense. On this hill I would die. Any day of the week.
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At this point we're like in Kung Pow: Nojiko raised them badly on purpose, as a jokeAnd if they are ralated at the end? Maybe both lost their parents in a car accident because they are siblings and for some reason someone don´t want them to know so they have been raised as roomates
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I don't understand why not change some dialogues to fix the dynamics between Nami and Nika
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I did suggest a new release of season 1 with only changes to the script. Clean up the dialogue and make their relationship clearer from the get-go. But some people started freaking out thinking I was suggesting yet another rework
Also after all the rushed changes he had to do to get the game published on Steam, I doubt Ocean wants to go back to the S1 release. I got the feeling he just wanted to move forward so he'll probably explain things later and leave the S1 shitshow as is.
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I agree with you on the whole about their reactions not making sense, but the line about being red? The script literally points out they have different parents at that exact point. In normal english, we'd understand that the stress on 'her' parents vs 'your' parents is 100% clear when mentioned sequentially, especially followed by 'they' 'and (what about) Nami's?' It'sclear what the script means there.
za "Why is she red?"
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d "That you'll have to ask her parents."
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za "What happened to yours?"
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d "They died in a car accident."
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za "And Nami's?"
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d "Believe it or not... The same."
So... believe it or not, the line here with Zara shows that the race against impossible odds doesn't make sense, their behaviour doesn't make sense, not their history. It's the same as when everyone thought they were a cute couple. The script makes sense, Nami and Nika's reactions don't.
Besides, given Nami's porn habits, if I were Noji I'd be worried about her weird relationships ALL.THE.TIME.
How Ocean reconciles their behaviour with their history, well, I'm as keen as you for it to be cleared up and neatly explained. Based on the current script, it is their hangup that is th oddity.
Everyone is SG knows and obeys the ToS that Ocean operates under, so I can't see how Nika or Nami would be so disrespectful to Ocean. Maybe that's a deadpool style fourth wall breaking - Nika and Nami know Ocean is against them!And if they are ralated at the end? Maybe both lost their parents in a car accident because they are siblings and for some reason someone don´t want them to know so they have been raised as roomates
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Oh I completely agree with you, was reinforcing your point not contraring it. The problem is that we know that the oblivious answer is not on the table anymore, the question then is how will Ocean handle the problem? And how much it will affect the story? Personally I don't have a clue and I don't think he can maintain the uncertainty of it either, so he either as a one hell of a explanation or this part of the game will always have a weirdness about it. The same goes for WiaB, we are speculating that the twins are adopted, but I don't think Patreon distinguishes between blood and law relations as some might do, and if William is not even adopted then that story really needs some really good explanation to make sense.
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Yes.
I like the stories of both games, but currently they both have holes that need filling. Normally that comment means something else on this forum... anyway...
Remember that WiaB isn't on patreon, so the future proofing is not only concerning what we currently know, but about Ocean's plot moving forward for both games, and ensuring the details aren't mistaken. Ocean also mentions about how to make sure they make sense for the kind of story he wants to tell.
About Nika and Nami. Ocean just needs to put the entire narrative weight on the fear of Nojiko discovering their affair.
Let's start with a few tearful flashbacks from their childhood where Nojiko hugs them and says you're like my children to me. You need to create the impression that Nojiko treats them like her real children and will never accept any intimacy between them. And then you have an explanation for why they have to hide. If someone from the College knows, then the whole College knows, and so does Zara, and if she knows, then so does Nick, and if he knows, then so does Nojiko.
Let's start with a few tearful flashbacks from their childhood where Nojiko hugs them and says you're like my children to me. You need to create the impression that Nojiko treats them like her real children and will never accept any intimacy between them. And then you have an explanation for why they have to hide. If someone from the College knows, then the whole College knows, and so does Zara, and if she knows, then so does Nick, and if he knows, then so does Nojiko.
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My suspicion is that Ocean does not want to change the story more than he has to. Nami's path was thought out as taboo, change it is change the entirely of the path and I think Ocean is not so keen in doing it. Now what could be as taboo as incest that explain their behavior ?
Besides, given Nami's porn habits, if I were Noji I'd be worried about her weird relationships ALL.THE.TIME.
Does Nami's porn habits still is in game ?beyond the face sitting thing ?
To be perfectly honest, I don't think that he can pull it off, not for a lack of skill of his part but because it was too core to the story to now they just be good old friends. Does not work. I plan on still follow the games, but I think it will lessen the story if William has no relations to the Zanes. As for SG we have to wait and see but Nami's path will look pretty strange as it is.
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I don't think that it works, still would not explain their reactions at Vic's and would paint Nojiko in a not so good light. It also does not solves the problem as Nojiko is only their landlady.
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Yep, Nami's still a weirdo.
n "Asshole!"
n "You swore, you wouldn't tell her I rented Spank Canyon 4!"
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d "No? I said I'd hint at it to make you uncomfortable."
n "I bet she has a secret trapdoor to a sex dungeon."
n "Let's watch a porno."
n "I can either give you a very long speech about why we're gonna watch a porno, or you save us both some time and we just watch a porno."
Regards WiaB, Leia and William are not just good friends. The change clearly states that. What that means for the rest of the game and the universe is something else. I guess my thoughts with both games, is, can we leave our preconceptions and what we once believed aside to see waht the change actually does to the plot? If the characters are engaging and the dramas feel consequential, maybe it'll still be an excellent game, even if it's not the one we'd hoped. I mean, heck Star Wars did me dirty after the first three movies, LotR pissed me off and I loved it anyway. I'm going to suspend my judgement until I can actually play through the change and see what it's like.
Nojiko is only landlady part will never make any sense you can't take care of two 12 and 13 year olds and not have any papers for it. And he will never fix it because then romance with Nami is illegal on patreon so that's already a mistake you will never get rid of
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You say that it is necessary to suspend theorization? you are not asking too much?
As for the examples you give to have hope... it is not at all comparable, here there are no books or original trilogies in which to rest if the story told in the games changes until it disappears.
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Was talking about the "special porn", that I think was cut.
Yeah, but is Leia still a LI ? and if she is, how does it future proof anything ? If she is not, you killed the heart of the story.
Don't get me wrong, it still can be a good story, I am not making judgments yet. But it will be a lesser story only because it will lack a logical sense to its development. I really can not think of a good enough reason beyond the obvius answer, that is fine, is not me who is written it, Ocean does not have this luxury though.
Besides, given Nami's porn habits, if I were Noji I'd be worried about her weird relationships ALL.THE.TIME.
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...you got meYou say that it is necessary to suspend theorization? you are not asking too much?
As for the examples you give to have hope... it is not at all comparable, here there are no books or original trilogies in which to rest if the story told in the games changes until it disappears.
I am trying to be open minded about it though rather than pretend there is no spoon. Regards Star Wars, I'd love the script for the last film that was abandoned, but we got what we got. The question is whether I can measure something on it's own merits rather than against my hopes and expectations: is it enjoyable, or am I resenting it for mot meeting my expectations? I think that for me is a valid approach.I'd not trust Nami to chose porn for me still. She keeps a roll of toilet paper near her computer and puts it near her bread rolls
I can't answer those questions, and I don't think anyone other than Ocean can. What it will be missing is our expectations, and it is up to Ocean to make sure that whatever change he does is compelling enough for us to keep playing. Either way, it won't affect SG in the same way for obvious reasons.
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I mean both can (and hopefully will be) awesome avns but its not really preconceptions, it was just the story until it suddenly wasnt anymore.
I think even making Helen not a LI (sorry milf lovers) and Katie a neighboor would have been a better solution than William (and Leia) not being Zane's. As of now its just too confusing, everything is in a unexplained mumbo jumbo while we are supposed to understand why William feel any attachment at all to these Zane people and goes back to wollust in the first place.
If its not his family (and hes not even adopted) the whole premise is kinda moot, isnt it? That kinda frustates me, not gonna lie and the Nika and Nami situation is similarly nonsensical.
And im not even into incest
and dont even want to think about how the incest lovers feel about that And i Leia is somehow still williams twin .. despite all changes ... i just dont get it
Havent thought about Leia losing the LI status and think (hope) thats not the case but it would make a lot of things for ocean easier i guess. And im afraid i possibly agree, it feels like the story lost the foundation everything was carefully build on.
I just really hope Ocean has this amazing awesome idea and plan how all of these strange developments lead to a satisfying solution but i feel like he should have just started with non-incest games from the beginning ...