- Feb 12, 2018
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With you on that. Lots of great secondary choices, but man, Bella's perfect for him.
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My favorites are definitely bella and sasha, but.. If nami continue the way she is right now i will have to chose her.
Bella's sce was absolutely amazing ,but nami really made my heartache
Bella's sce was absolutely amazing ,but nami really made my heartache
okay thanksNo there is no any lewd scene ATM, and startup theme was changed too.
- Oct 21, 2017
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I'm surprised people aren't talking about Ayua more. She's hilarious.
"Now I want to have sex with MC. You said I can't have it! Now I want it!".
"Now I want to have sex with MC. You said I can't have it! Now I want it!".
- May 31, 2019
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Wait when did she say that? in the locker room in 3.5?
- May 20, 2019
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Good story, interesting characters. A game with a good storyline is a rarity, the work of a developer deserves the highest praise.
- Apr 2, 2018
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In my country, while I was attending the University, physical education was unisex (and I guess it still is) and we always played basketball, handball, volleyball etc. in teams with both guys and girls. In the year above mine there was a dwarf btw and I'm pretty sure he could play with the rest if he wanted to. I never played for any tournament though, they were just normal activities during the lessons.
Ayua's great, she's my #2 currently, but mostly because we can't spend with her any quality time yet. Maybe soon though she'll beat Bella for me as MC will start learning kung fu from her.
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Hmm.. now that you say it, in my country we were kinda mixed in PE class in highschool, but it was by no mean competitive. And no more PE class after high school (college or university)
- Apr 2, 2018
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We weren't mixed in highschool, only at uni and it wasn't competitive either. We had PE after school though if someone was trying for competitive tourneys, I had after school chess lessons and games while at grammar school for example. So for me the basketball game in SG wasn't weird at all.
- Aug 28, 2018
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Ummmm .... I hate to bring this up as I am enjoying the game so much, but it's "martial arts studio", not "martarial arts studio". May I respectfully suggest either spell check or a proofreader, as it detracts from the otherwise incredible visuals of the game? I would definitely suggest either a proofreader or professional writer before you go "big time" as the amazing visuals, which surpass 95% of what I have seen would definitely suggest that you are going in that direction, if not doing demos for a professional career in the animation field.
- May 4, 2020
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That's kinda true man, as much as I love this VN it definitely needs proof readers.
I understand english isn't ocean's first language but the dialogue suffers from being stiff and robotic sometimes because of its weird structure
The protagonist sometimes says shit no human being says and complicates it so much so that it feels like a waste of breath to say things that way lmao
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- Jul 1, 2019
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Right or wrong she is my favorite character, can't detour from the story and make her a step or adopted to soften the punch unfortunately. But! In a do or die scenario (or any other) this is the person you want at your side.
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"So that's it huh anon? We're some kind of Summer's Gone (2019)?"
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While I may have not been so brutal because I am a fellow game developer, your criticism is not without merit. A proofreader, or someone that has a decent grasp of colloquial English, is definitely needed here. The author's visual skills are definitely without question, but the deficits in the actual storytelling are distracting from what is arguably one of the best VNs out there.
- May 4, 2020
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I'll actually take back bits of what I have said, it has gotten better, specially in the bits of the newly remade scenes in chapter 1.
And it's not as if the whole dialogue in-game is bad and incomprehensible, it's not, it's just that conversations sometimes don't flow naturally because the way the words are structured seem - how do I say this right - inefficient to native speakers; which is why it comes off as something living, breathing and speaking people don't say.
Like the protagonist's hair, I've actually gotten used to it, but some people who are keen on dialogue might not take it well, ocean definitely needs a proofreader and a grammar checker guy.