The best solution for this problem is to use a grammar program that will fix every issue in the sentence. I'm writing my own fiction too and I always use this when I finish the script. I can make terrible mistakes in the sentences too.
Thats my hope to, i supporting him on Subscribe Star, But i am really worried because of this. It looks like he has -
That could be. I - as a fellow german - has absolutly no problems in understand the dialogs in the game despite the translate afterwards. I asume the reason is that i am familiar with the german sentence structure und know the meaning how is was written as it is, i am sure that a native speaker slaps his forhead about this. But until Ocan has one, or more, capable proofreader(s) we have to deal with it.
Those are just normal drops that every dev goes through. By the end of the month, he will get them back.
When the final version comes, it may go even further beyond that(1k). I noticed that most of the patrons left the last few days before the update. One day before, if graphtreon was accurate. Seeing that there's no tabletop session for the next few updates(in other words, no major roadblocks when it comes to development), the development period should decrease significantly. Meaning we may get chapter 4.5 sometime this year. I honestly see Oceanlab's Patreon increasing substantially throughout the next few updates. When it's time for him to develop the next tabletop session, he may be better equipped to handle that workload and still release that update promptly. It's only up from here.
I love porn games as much as I love games with no porn at all. Some are good only for the story. I don't know why some people think that every adult VN has to have sex or a lot of sex. If this game deliver only 1 sex scene with the girl we choose at the end, I am ok with it. As long as the developer keeps the story interesting. Diversity of creation is the best thing we can have, so I don't know why some people think everything has to be the same.Call me weird, but i just finished the Bella + Nami (as much as you can get from both) play through, still need to do the Nami one and some other ones, but i don't miss the sex scenes not one bit. The story and dialogues are so well put together, it should be clear to everyone that it's not a porn game. There a lot of ones like that in my sig where you can bet with yourself if there's a pointless sex scene coming up in 3 renders time or in 5 renders time
And yeah, the Vanessa character is very interesting
No, he doesn't have to finish it. Many games are on steam and still being worked on such as BAD and CK. But I don't think people from steam will be so happy with some features of this game.
Yeah, people in there will demand some at least lewd scenes even if they're not going to get sex scenes. But they will be crazy for the girls that this game has.
No, not after it is finished. Ocean said, that the steam release is planed after chapter five.
And they should dislike what? BAD is on steam and has as much issues as this one, even a tabletop event that serves - contraire to this one here - no purpose. With steam, Ocean has a much wider reach for a crowd and in our little avn bubble, i think there are amny ppl that would like this one...
I bet there will be some crazy fanbase of Summer's Gone on Steam that will battle with each other.
What kind of grammar program do you use, if you're talking about phrasing mistakes and not things like typos/ spelling errors?
Another scene or two will be added, Chapter 1 and 2 will be remastered with better graphics (I believe he called it a rework, so they might be rewritten entirely), and the new scene gallery will also be added.
I didn't know that we were going to get remastered Chapter 2. I thought we were only going to get Reworked Chapter 1 and that's it.
