I appreciate the feedback on this and to be honest with you guys I'm a terrible writer and while I thought I had a good idea of what I wanted for a story, that quickly got shot to shit and for a minute there I lost my grip on it almost altogether. I do image sets and words are hard, lol. I'm doing what I can to fix plot holes but the feedback I get from you guys and my patrons is very helpful. it may take me a few tries but I should be able to get a believable script together. Thank you again for the feedback.
Don't let anyone discourage you. The fact that you're putting stuff out there is way more important than some asshat that just tells you that you suck. XD Since I can really only speak for myself, I will say right now, it will never be my intent to discourage someone. Sometimes i may word things badly thought; I am only human. My goal is to try and give you more to work with rather than less while still pointing out areas that improvement could be had. The only way you'll get better with the words part is to write more words and get feedback on those words.
So take as many tries as you need.
The freaking out thing is not a bad idea in and of itself. Its implementation should probably be refined a bit more otherwise you get the anime trope of the impotent MC with a harem that hides behind obliviousness. (Let's be honest. In most cases he isn't unaware that his harem wants to bone him. He's intentionally avoiding the confrontation that would happen because he's a chicken shit.)
Lust Demon choosing to change behavior is not "in the closet". In the closet is about denying a part of yourself (at least publicly). The mother has never denied her actions.
most of the smokers that i know that have quit don't hate smoking. they're really pretty upfront about really enjoying it. but they also acknowledge that it is a bad life choice and have a reason they stopped (kids, health, money, whatever).
the person your dating bringing up some crazy shit they did also isn't in the closet. they have their reasons for not wanting to do what they used to (found out they didn't actually like said thing, bad memories, destructive choices, or even just grew out of it and/or realized they got stupid lucky that nothing bad happened) Rarely in well adjusted mature people will they bring something up w/o a reason, so you're three lines of imaginary conversation lack all sorts of context. In high school, early college or even (to a slightly lesser extent) just out of college? People may do that shit all the time because they are under the false impression that it makes them more desirable, even if they won't ever do X thing again.
again. that isn't being in the closet about something.
a closet slut is someone that is a slut, but tries to hide that fact (perhaps poorly) and denies that it is a part of them. they still behave like a slut though. the mother has actually (as far as we can tell) stopped slutting around.