VN Ren'Py Completed Sun Breed [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

[Bailz]

do you know how refreshing it is to have 2 sisters and not be the cliché 1 is a bitch and 1 is naive and in love with the MC, and in this we kinda have 4 sister because Valentine and Camilla are as close as sister to the MC and all of them are great, i was reluctant to try it at 1st but glad i did now because i thought it was a great start

 

[Salami Pasta]

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To all of you complaining about me doing multiple games,

-- I have released 10 updates of Picture Perfect

-- 5 updates of Secret Summer

-- 1 here of Sun Breed

16 updates in less than a year and a half I've been developing. Hunger for Chaos is on hold because I'm having trouble deciding which direction to go with it. But it is in no way abandoned.

There are many developers who take months to update one game and there are about 50% of games that get abandoned on this site. and you complain about a developer giving you multiple games and a lot of updates?

Picture Perfect was updated a month ago, Secret Summer 2 weeks ago. And now Sun Breed.

I understand if you don't like the games, but you're complaining when I'm working so hard to give you games? It's so deflating when I am busting my ass and it seems like a bunch of you don't appreciate it, but I know that there are people do enjoy my hard work.

If I'm guilty of anything, it is the reworking and rebooting, absolutely. But you have to understand I am a total newbie at this and just started being a developer with absolutely no background, so I have learned a lot and have fucked up a lot, but I am trying my absolute best to make games people like. That's all.

So I'm going to continue working hard and release an update every two weeks. I'm sorry if that's not good enough for you, but that's what I'm going to do. And I appreciate everyone giving me a chance and supporting me.

Ha, don't take it too hard man. Internet is a cruel place. Does not mean your work is not appreciated.

 

[Look-see]

yeah sure... but maybe if he'd pass more time polishing his renders instead of doing countless games ? Also in the preview pic #4, is she removing her invisible top ?

i couldnt tell you the reason for that. i started skippping after like 2 minutes in since it was kinetic and just wanted to see the good bits. kinetic games for me is just porn nothing to really immerse yourself in so it cant really hold my interest but nice to look at. maybe i'll find a render that just really surprises me.

 

[hpshi]

I've really liked it so far as it does looks interesting and the vampire genre is pretty intriguing (as it has many possibilities depending on your worldbuilding heck even twilight could have been good with a better dialogue and some improvements to the plot) as for the characters I an really curious to find out how they interact with each other ( I did pick up on some tension between the two pairs)
as for the comments please don't complain before you check your facts because many of the comment are untrue and keep in mind that everyone has different capabilities, some really awesome devs get one update every month some get one every two weeks some every six mounts, some can handle two games some can only one and some can do five if they have inspersion to do it so don't ruin it to the dev and to the players who do enjoy
on that note thank you for the game SuperWriter and good luck with it

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

do you know how refreshing it is to have 2 sisters and not be the cliché 1 is a bitch and 1 is naive and in love with the MC, and in this we kinda have 4 sister because Valentine and Camilla are as close as sister to the MC and all of them are great, i was reluctant to try it at 1st but glad i did now because i thought it was a great start

Ha, glad you decided to give it a chance after all. Got plenty of stuff coming =]

Ha, don't take it too hard man. Internet is a cruel place. Does not mean your work is not appreciated.

Easy to notice the negative among the positive, so you're right lol. I will continue to work hard for the people that do appreciate it though

 

[Salami Pasta]

<...> I will continue to work hard for the people that do appreciate it though

There are more of them than you may expect.

For example, I'm one of the douchebags that said you have a case of the shiny new object syndrome.

But I'm also someone who has paid for ... 26 (just counted) of your novellas and short stories.
Could say I'm a fan.

Negative feedback means someone cared enough to spend the time and effort of type some stuff out for you. Even if they're being an ass.
It's when there's only thumbleweeds and dust in your thread that you really have to worry.
Apathy packs a punch.
Don't think you'll hit that tombstone anytime soon, though.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

There are more of them than you may expect.

For example, I'm one of the douchebags that said you have a case of the shiny new object syndrome.

But I'm also someone who has paid for ... 26 (just counted) of your novellas and short stories.
Could say I'm a fan.

Negative feedback means someone cared enough to spend the time and effort of type some stuff out for you. Even if they're being an ass.
It's when there's only thumbleweeds and dust in your thread that you really have to worry.
Apathy packs a punch.
Don't think you'll hit that tombstone anytime soon, though.

Lol I understand. Still really new to this developing thing like I said, so it does help and make things clearer with you saying all this. Appreciate you taking the time to explain and I really am glad you're enjoying my stuff. Thank you

 

[Negate]

Do you know why I want to do three games in the first place? Because it's FUN. There's no other reason lol.

And I have put ONE game on hold -- Hunger for Chaos, which was rebooted. NOZ is a concept that I will eventually get to, but never saw the light of day. You're acting like I have multiple abandoned games when I literally have one that is not even abandoned. It is on hold.

But let me ask you a question; did you like this first update of Sun Breed?

That's not really accurate

Originally, you did abandon HfC which you rebooted as JAB...before abandoning JAB to re-reboot HfC. Just because you eventually decided to go back to HfC does not change the fact that you decided to abandon it. Just because you are re-using some assets from JAB does not mean that game isn't gone either.

As for N1Z...this is the first time in our discussion you've even acknowledged it at all.

And yeah, I did like this update.

I also liked HfC and JAB.

Again, it's not about the quality of the games. It's about your tendency to just drop them.

And again, I'm not saying "don't work on three games"...I'm saying you don't have to rush out releases that aren't ready. Which is what you did with JAB and HfC. You pulled N1Z before an initial release...but you were hyping it as your next project before pulling it with no communication. That's the reason I'm concerned about how long SB will last before you decide that you need to put that concept on hold as well.

 

[Wicked Garden]

After seeing the ass on the redhead in the 3rd screenshot I feel it's my civic duty to try this out.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

That's not really accurate

Originally, you did abandon HfC which you rebooted as JAB...before abandoning JAB to re-reboot HfC. Just because you eventually decided to go back to HfC does not change the fact that you decided to abandon it. Just because you are re-using some assets from JAB does not mean that game isn't gone either.

As for N1Z...this is the first time in our discussion you've even acknowledged it at all.

And yeah, I did like this update.

I also liked HfC and JAB.

Again, it's not about the quality of the games. It's about your tendency to just drop them.

I don't think we're getting anywhere arguments semantics, so I'm just going to leave that alone. Like I said, I am a newbie at this and all of the changing was just me trying to figure things out. I definitely have made mistakes, but I understand what I want to do as a developer now. What stories I want to tell.

All I can do is continue to make the games, and I'm telling you that these three are what I'm focused on now. Nothing really I can do if you want to doubt me, but PP out in 2 weeks lol. Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed the update.

 

[Ayhsel]

Ohhh I like this one very much!! it is nice to read a novel portraying my own kind!

This is going to sound a bit racist, coming from a (cocoa) vamp as myself.. but why do I care about my human friends? Are they my human sisters or simply my friends? Cause I seriously prefer my vamp babes....

Nice job SuperWriter, this is no doubt becoming my favorite out of your works. Not just because of the obvious vamp setting that I like, but the underlying plot seems really intriguing. What is going on, who kill dad, why am I sick...

Great work indeed!

 

[Bailz]

Ohhh I like this one very much!! it is nice to read a novel portraying my own kind!

This is going to sound a bit racist, coming from a (cacao) vamp as myself.. but why do I care about my human friends? Are they my human sisters or simply my friends? Cause I seriously prefer my vamp babes....

Nice job SuperWriter, this is no doubt becoming my favorite out of your works. Not just because of the obvious vamp setting that I like, but the underlying plot seems really intriguing. What is going on, who kill dad, why am I sick...

Great work indeed!

hey racist, human lives matter too, you vamps always thinking your superior just because you got power but us humies cant be killed by a bit of garlic or sunlight

 

[Avaron1974]

coming from a (cacao)

Pretty sure that's a tree.

Also pretty sure tree's couldn't type but I learn something new every day.

 

[Ayhsel]

hey racist, human lives matter too, you vamps always thinking your superior just because you got power but us humies cant be killed by a bit of garlic or sunlight

I am sorry, I did not meant to disrespect you, human. Continue your own petty human activities, like solid foods and sunbathing...

Pretty sure that's a tree.

Also pretty sure tree's couldn't type but I learn something new every day.

With all the kind of nonsense you can find in this forum, that really surprises you?

EDIT: ohh sorry my bad. Cocoa is what I wanted, not Cacao.. thanks for the correction.

 

[L3z1l3]

SuperWriter: Dear Dev, I understand you want to save as much of the work you've already done as possible and therefore you've taken the wake up scene and the shower scene from JAB and used it in this game, but it simply doesn't add up.
It was already a stretch for a male sibling to sleep and take shower with his sisters in JAB, but it simply doesn't make sense for childhood friends to do that without sexual thoughts.
And MC being surprised about him thinking about his "childhood friends" in a sexual way is also stupid after him already having experienced his real sisters turning into his lovers before.
As for his vampire sisters, they are really hot and all, and starting the game with him already being in an incestous relationship with them is also interesting, but somehow that double BJ scene was maybe the visually most boring sex scene in any adult game I've ever played.

 

[Negate]

I don't think we're getting anywhere arguments semantics, so I'm just going to leave that alone. Like I said, I am a newbie at this and all of the changing was just me trying to figure things out. I definitely have made mistakes, but I understand what I want to do as a developer now. What stories I want to tell.

All I can do is continue to make the games, and I'm telling you that these three are what I'm focused on now. Nothing really I can do if you want to doubt me, but PP out in 2 weeks lol. Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed the update.

I think you are taking the wrong message from what Im saying.

Maybe that's my fault. Maybe I'm not expressing myself well.

But I'll leave it here. I hope that you really do have it figured out this time....but if not I hope you will at least remember this one thing:

You don't have to release a third game before its ready. I think you jumped the gun when you released HfC and JAB.

 

[Tragic Princess]

I am sorry, I did not meant to disrespect you, human. Continue your own petty human activities, like solid foods and sunbathing...



With all the kind of nonsense you can find in this forum, that really surprises you?

EDIT: ohh sorry my bad. Cocoa is what I wanted, not Cacao.. thanks for the correction.

Well said lol

 

[DrakoGhoul]

I was busy earlier so I'll start by saying this introduction was great. I didn't play JAB when it was released so this is all new to me. My first impression was this is good. The story already has me fully into it which is the one thing KNs have to get right, in my opinion.

As for the women. I like all 4 of them so far. If i had to say who i liked the most currently? It'd be Najah and/or Camilla. One thing i did have a question about was if Najah and Aditi were full vampires? Seeing as they're vastly stronger than the MC.

That BJ scene from Najah and Aditi was both hot and scary af. You'd need to have complete trust in a Vampire to let them give you a bj with those fangs.

Like I've said, I'm biased when it comes to good Sci-fi and Supernatural elements in stories. So for me, Just from this opening alone, I'm already loving it. I'm definitely looking forward to more updates in the future.

 

[Everest Harrison]

Is this "Just another bubble remake" ? I like that now it has the vampire theme, but on a side note, I think Camilla's hair looked better before.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

I was busy earlier so I'll start by saying this introduction was great. I didn't play JAB when it was released so this is all new to me. My first impression was this is good. The story already has me fully into it which is the one thing KNs have to get right, in my opinion.

As for the women. I like all 4 of them so far. If i had to say who i liked the most currently? It'd be Najah and/or Camilla. One thing i did have a question about was if Najah and Aditi were full vampires? Seeing as they're vastly stronger than the MC.

That BJ scene from Najah and Aditi was both hot and scary af. You'd need to have complete trust in a Vampire to let them give you a bj with those fangs.

Like I've said, I'm biased when it comes to good Sci-fi and Supernatural elements in stories. So for me, Just from this opening alone, I'm already loving it. I'm definitely looking forward to more updates in the future.

I'm happy that you're liking the game so much so far! Though Najah and Aditi are definitely not stronger than the MC. Najah comments how weird it is that she was able to tackle him in the woods when he was distracted after trying for years. And she isn't able to land a hit on him when they are sparring and he slugs her one time. And Rex comments how he was able to beat up a couple of his friends and that the MC is kind of known in the vampire community.

"Word round town is that you're as strong as any vampire."

There is definitely a reason for that though =D A lot more story to tell, trust me.

Is this "Just another bubble remake" ? I like that now it has the vampire theme, but on a side note, I think Camilla's hair looked better before.

Not a remake at all. I only used the opening scenes and the two models, but that's it. I just thought it would be a waste to abandon them when they were such a great characters, and it seems that people are loving them. So I think I made the right choice =]