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bigjack910

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One of the most poorly-written overviews I've seen on this site. Can't say that bodes well for the quality of the project itself...
 

Ozygator

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devs need to find better english translations with an emphasis on the differences between him and her. it's really appalling how bad some of these games are and they never seem to improve at all. it's like the dialogues are written by US university students that only study gender studies and those other useless programs that fuck up their minds completely. bring back proper fucking english to those places and perhaps the quality of dialogues will improve finally..but i doubt it.. :devilish:
You realize other cultures use "her" and "her" for common objects, and actions right?

I would assume 99% of these mis-matched are because that's what the dev's native language uses, not some poor attempt at 'gender identity'
 

JabyShrek988

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You realize other cultures use "her" and "her" for common objects, and actions right?

I would assume 99% of these mis-matched are because that's what the dev's native language uses, not some poor attempt at 'gender identity'
100%
While learning english as a non-native english speaker, verb is difficult to understand.
Why?
In my mother tongue, the verbs are gender specific. So it takes time.
 

popoe22

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Honestly, the main character looks like a person who is always crying, seriously, this is some kind of nonsense, the main character is so tender that he cries for a whole month after the death of his father, complete nonsense, in real life people bury their loved ones and do not sit for a month in tears, the main crybaby's girlfriend is right that the main crybaby's decisions will lead to a break in relations and the main character is the culprit
 
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odbpm

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so i take it theres no sexual interaction with the step family, otherwise the game would have been banned on patreon.
also should remove the incest tag since its stepcast and not blood related, unless theres an intent for a ipatch.
 

GustavoGanz

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Since I don't feel like writing a 1-2 star review, here are my two cents on this game.
DEV, take this thing and completely rework it, but ideally you should find a story writer and a proofreader first. It's not completely unplayable, but some parts of it are just terrible.
 

Gerold1957

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I love this game ... regarding whether the language is right or not. I come from Germany and we speak as we are used to with "you" or "she" or whatever. The crux of the matter is that we love the in -house gameplay and that's it. The MC reacts correctly the women around it doesn't make it easy for him.
So now we are waiting for the latest update and I hope it will come soon
 

kazeiheikaya

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EVERY SENTENCE has a misspelling and is very frustating to read so many errors
honestly i feel lmao. I wish I had the insight to know how it happens cause I feel like if I was a creator I would play through every single update of my own story just to scrutinize the grammar and spelling. Feel like its only a couple hours of work at best right before you release it to the public, if that, depending how fast you read, especially since you are just proof reading. but ye idk I speak from ignorance so I cant say how they do it. Sometimes I feel like people just throw everything into a word pad and spellcheck it and have 1000 wrong usages of words like dual/duel, douse/dowse, discreet/discrete, while/wile etc.

Homophones can be a bit tricky for ESL but I've even seen native english people do this in these games :KEK:
 
2.00 star(s) 8 Votes