Looks like another good game, however there is some dialog that should be reviewed. Mostly the interaction between the office and NPO's or enlisted personnel. Some of it violates military code of conduct. Please do some reading on the naval code of conduct and correct some of the interactions. Also there are a few places where the wrong pronoun or verb is being used. I did get the meaning but it took a few scroll back and forth to see were things were going.
The ladies are spectacular as always, however a little more back story would help round them out, but maybe that is to come. I like the possibilities and open routs to the story line so many possibilities. And if I may make a suggestion, maybe you already have this planned, but with the mc's background in law maybe here is a loop whole or away to revitalize the light house and bring it back to operational. A historical society would be for that as long as the restoration was done in away to maintain the original look and crafting materials. Besides it would also give on a great spot to sneak up into and watch the volleyball games and so one.
Ok enough from me. I realy like it and look forward to see what you have planned.
It's a Fake Naval fleet from the country fictional country of Doughnutistan, they don't have to follow the UCMJ of the United States. Granted the Sailor's should have stood up and stood at attention when the Lieutenant walked into the room, They were called Junior Officer's so they might have been in their birth (Bunks) which would be one of the few exceptions to that rule, Chow, Battle Stations (while under fire) and Injured (or medical personel attending injured) in the Medbay being a few other valid exceptions
Typo's happen and most developers do their best to fix them when they can.
I agree I hope they add more back story to the characters to flesh them out some more, and it looks like Mr Dots has been including more each time you talk to one of the characters, so far, as you get to know them better.
As for the MC's back ground in law I Imagine (and hope) it's going to come to a show down between his old boss' firm and his family, in which the MC kicks the ass of the firm that fired him spectacularly
The repairs to the light are expensive but they do say they plan to do that when they have more clients. Also you used away when it should be a way, Mr. Dot's made the same mistake in the game as well, one of the typo's I caught.
