True, it can also be noted that most of the update was the long dialogues...i didn't really feel much progress
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You talk weird then
I agree that a lot of the dialogue is overly wordy (especially the internal monologues).
Eg1. Use of "Got changed" means there is no need to explain what was changed.
ie. Vicki was still asleep, so I carefully snuck out of bed, got changed and left her place. = same info but spoken like a normal person.
ie2. Alternatively: Vicki was still asleep, so I carefully snuck out of bed, put my dress and heels on and left her place.
My biggest problem with Mr Dots games is that they need to use more of the visual element of a visual novel to convey character and less internal thought explanations.
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In the third picture, Yuki was teaching Sis how to fix it, so yes, going through all of the steps is exactly what I would have done. And the first picture, again, yes, she is describing what she did after he asked her about her night. Some people take shortcuts in dialogue, some people don't. Maybe it is because I'm older and was raised in a different time but I see no issue with that dialogue. You would probably complain if the characters used "Hello Father" instead of "Hi Dad" simply because it is more common to use the latter.So people you talk to tell you ever little step of what they've done?
It would have been even more awkward had they not put their clothes back on.Damn! Gonna be an awkward discussion come morning
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So when someone asks you if you went to the store for groceries, you answer like that?
"Yes, I stood up, went to the bathroom, then put on clothes, then my shoes and I went to shop for groceries."
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It feels more like the dad who's doing that. He's just going along for the ride (if you excuse the pun). If he's manipulating her (which I think is unlikely as he seems to be an idiot) then he would still take advantage of the situation. You can lead someone on for ulterior motives and still try for some action
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Okay so her telling him she got up and left while Vicky was asleep would be a shortcut if she didn't tell him how she put back on every article of clothing? It's useless information, anyone with a brain would already know she got dressed.
No, but that is a false equivalence. In your example, you already know they went for groceries. In the picture of Sis, he wants to know what happened to her. She told him what happened. If you asked what did you do this morning, and someone answered "I went to the bathroom, then put on my clothes and shoes then went shopping for groceries", that is not a million miles away from how that question is answered.
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I haven't got there yet but the same dialogue plays twice in the scene before the honeymoon suite. The one about cleaning up.
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We'll have to agree to disagree because even that example is so wrong to me. no body I know would state such an obvious thing like getting dressed in the morning and she goes through every piece that she put back on. It's common scence.
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Silly question but are you sure you downloaded the PC version and are running a 64bit version of windows?