Edit : realised I didn't finish first update last time (it was so long), so this apply mainly to second part of first update. Overall 2nd update is better than what is described in this wall of text.
This new update, I tried to read stuff and be interested in the writing, but rapidly I was bored out of my mind. Too many characters, too many real life boring subjects like lawer stuff, accounting, event planning (I liked cooking tho), that could easily be skipped or dealt with in 10% of the time they took to tell it.
From the 10% I've read, I really have the impression that, probably in a well intended way, they wanted to be generous and give us a lot of CGs, but they forgot the rythm along the way. You don't need to give each scene the same amount of text and CGs if it can be well understood in 3 lines of text.
Sure there can't be a giant orgy in update 2 of a game, but it's still a porn game, we're not here for Accountant Simulator 2 Turbo Prime+. They didn't do each meth cooking scenes in real time in Breaking Bad, either they used a quick montage or skipped them completely if they weren't anything special to the plot. Please give it some rythm.
Adding to that MC didn't manage to get my attention. It's probably his personnality, but also I'm not sure it was a good idea to show his face. I'm pretty sure MC's face wasn't visible (or very rarely) in DmD and Melody, and that allowed the player to identify with him much more easily, imho.
So yeah, I only enjoyed the Donut hunting so far. Even with its pretty art, which is the main selling point of the game, some characters, among the (too) many, feel a bit bland, no point to say which ones, we all have different tastes, but it feels like with less characters, they would have been more different and maybe more thought would have been put into their design, both visually and personnality-wise.
You can feel a lot of work went into it, but as of now, it feels like a director's cut extended edition of a movie that already was 30mn too long in its initial release. For the moment it's a pretty slideshow with fun donut-clicking gameplay, but it might as well be pictures of cars, because something in it is missing to make me as excited as I was for DmD and even Melody. And that's quite the problem for a porn game.
All being said, I still believe in MrDots team, simply for the fact that all these things are not because they're lazy. It's more like they wanted to make something very big and very good, got a bit lost and made too much of the wrong parts. It's probably fixable in in the long run, just by concentrating on a few characters each update, and cut short whatever can be.
Anyways, it can only get better and it has pretty art. Also hope MrD didn't loose his passion for DmD and won't rush it just because this update was a bit late.