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Ok, I'm going to DM you, since I don't feel like derailing this thread. All I wanted to say about this game I've said already.
Short demo but the art style is decent (people are being unnecessarily harsh) and the writing was good. Dialog felt natural. What I'm really excited about though was that Hanna-Barbera stsyle scrolling background when they went hiking. I don't think I've seen that in a Ren'Py game before. That was fantastic. 
- Oct 2, 2017
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Thanks man! It was annoying trying to get a perfect loop but the end result was totally worth it. I might apply that technique again on the car scene to move the background in the windows. And thanks for trying out our gameShort demo but the art style is decent (people are being unnecessarily harsh) and the writing was good. Dialog felt natural. What I'm really excited about though was that Hanna-Barbera stsyle scrolling background when they went hiking. I don't think I've seen that in a Ren'Py game before. That was fantastic.
Total AV still quarantines the SunshineValley.exe file, gives the threat name as "TR/Crypt.ZPACK.Gen".
- Oct 2, 2017
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The game hasn't been updated yet so it will continue to be listed as a virus (falsely) with your anti virus until the next update. If you don't trust this renpy game, then please wait until the next Sunshine Valley update which will likely have a fix for it by then.
- Aug 7, 2017
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Far too many games seem to know nothing about these things. (In general, I'm not saying anything about this game specifically.)
Not talking about this game!!!! I already stated that the writings in this game is pretty decent, though there could be improvement making Hannah more believable as a teenager.
Yeah, I have a feeling that porn games are made by amateurs and their focus is often spent on art and coding. The writing is actually the hardest part that seems to get the least amount of attention.
Example: 40 year old virgin women: "I know I just met you but lets go upstairs and pop my 40 year old cherry!" This will never happen for 2 reasons. One, because people who make it to 40 who are virgins have something mentally prevents it. It may be religion, or their self worth says they don't deserve it, because anyone can get sex. There is tinder, or hookers or being at the bar at 3am, so everyone has access even if the quality is horrible. Reason two is that I don't see a 40 year old women using the wording of poping her cherry either, that sounds like something a teenager would say, not an older women.
Good writing is important because dictates the speed of reading. Good writing allows the reader to quickly read something and understand it. It's like being on the freeways, vs an unpaved gravel road. Poor writing slows you down and annoys when you have to take time to figure what shit means. The poor grammar and such are speed bumps which really makes reading not enjoyable. If people only care about images then they have pornhub... but they are here for more. Sadly writing well is hard.
- May 11, 2017
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This game is really good, looking forward to when choices and more content show up.
FSecure thinks the .exe file from the Mega download has a trojan in it. Probably false alarm, but check it anyway.
- Jun 8, 2017
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If you read the posts before yours you would probably find it most informative...
I've read the first and last few posts, didn't have time to read 11 pages. Sorry.
- Oct 21, 2019
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Hi again everyone, I've gone through all the characters now, and would love some feedback before they become finalized, and we get started on the next chapter for Sunshine Valley. I've made a long post on
Sincerely,
Willy
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, feel free to check it out! Thank you!Sincerely,
Willy
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I was just struck by you bringing that up, and I wanted to point it out because, like I said, not enough attention is given to it in general, I think.
- Feb 26, 2018
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It reminds me a bit of Summertime Saga, looks promising, waiting for more. BTW the mom looks delicious
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The redesigns look significantly better. Sadly I'm no artist so there's not much in the way of pointers that I could give to help you improve. Although their appearances are fappable now, there's definitely still room for improvement.
Don't understand why people didn't like the original faces. New ones look nice too.