something says one of the MC soon to be unlocked powers is to heal or transform other after consuming what ever was in the box. but they end up like Alpha and Beta, similar to dogs. Where the MC is the Alpha and the other acts like submissive wishing to be bred.
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Superhuman-0.61-pc\game\saves and it's the "persistent" file I think
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Honestly, this game was nothing like I expected...
The story is truly perfect, have you written anything else before, or this is your first writing work?
Anyway, if I can, I have one story related question for you.
Given the fact that the protagonist's abilities can now change other objects (and perhaps even people), does that mean he could hypothetically (now or in future) be capable to "repair/rebuild" Bailey? I'm not trying to get any spoilers out of you, this is just a hypothetical question. So purely on a hypothetical level, would such a thing be possible?
Honestly, this game was nothing like I expected...
The story is truly perfect, have you written anything else before, or this is your first writing work?
Anyway, if I can, I have one story related question for you.
Given the fact that the protagonist's abilities can now change other objects (and perhaps even people), does that mean he could hypothetically (now or in future) be capable to "repair/rebuild" Bailey? I'm not trying to get any spoilers out of you, this is just a hypothetical question. So purely on a hypothetical level, would such a thing be possible?
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I wonder if the superweapon/alien container Alice was carrying broke. I hope it did and it turns out to be what the MC thought it was. We already know what Alice wants most and since Ella has confirmed how powers get assigned ...
Can't wait.
Can't wait.
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cliffhanger mostly, atleast thats probably to expect for Alice, but Michael? who knows, wold be sat too.
Would be interesting to meet some Parents of the killed Guys from the Party. And if MC could do something good for them wouldnt be bad either.
In the end i could see a alliance including MC's friends and lead from MC, Alice and Tiffany. would be cool.
I would love if there futa form became the main form of MC but idk how that would fit the story. Only thing I can think of is that his male form is a liability (declared criminal by government or somethin) so he switches to the female/futa form.
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extremely constructive comment, thank you for your participation...
I doubt it, but I think how we handle the imediate ambush right after will probably result in one or both of them dying and a likely bad end. I honestly wonder if Skill will be relevant next update.
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Thats stupid MC pretty much can do anything he want. So what if the goverment declares him crimininal, have you read batman or any other superhero stories? none of them were good guys in the first place.
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This is the second thing I've written with any real substance. Honestly, it was initially going to be a test run before I developed my main story that I'd been writing/planning last year. Mainly to help me pick up renpy and learn to draw and all that since I kind of just learnt all that stuff on the spot. But it's turned out fairly well so I'm sticking to it til I get to the endings I've written for this story.
They unlock some h-scenes for the girls. To get them just respond to the girls in a way you think they'll like. I wouldn't worry too much about it, I don't plan to make the threshold for unlocking those scenes particularly harsh. Unless you're pissing them off at every opportunity you'll mostly be fine.
I hope Jake is not gonna become ntr problem. Even the current scenes with him & girls pissing me off. Please don't tell me u are gonna add such a scene with jake & mia too
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I think he said earlier Jake won't be an ntr antagonist, and based on the scenes I've noticed he's going to fuck a couple unnamed whores we'll never see.
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It'd be cool to see our boy take another trip to the zoo for some power-ups. The untapped potential of nature is just absolutely ridiculous. Some animals in particular would be formidable
1) Octopus--> a) Best adaptive camouflage in the animal world b) ability to fit through incredibly tiny spaces c) sucker cups d) underwater breathing(already have gills but I think this is a different mechanism in octopi) e) siphon organ could be used to jet water or enhance swimming
2) Water bear (Tardigrade) --> a) ability to put itself into stasis surviving incredibly harsh conditions for decades of time in extreme climates (even outer-space) and with no sustenance. b) can almost completely dehydrate; like 3% content water and recover (cryptobiosis)
3)Ants ---> a) Social stomach b) ability to shoot formic acid b) venomous sting c) antibacterial properties (leaf-cutter ants) d) ability to produce strong adhesives (weaver ant) e) super strength f) pheromones
Just a couple examples I could think of off the top of my head - there are a whole suite of other possibilities. The power is pretty OP.
as a tangential aside- patiently waiting for the MC to use his Mantis shrimp powers- their eyes in particular are crazy.
"Humans can process three channels of color (red, green and blue), while mantis shrimps perceive the world through 12 channels of color, and can detect UV (ultra violet) and polarized light, aspects of light humans can't access with the naked eye"
1) Octopus--> a) Best adaptive camouflage in the animal world b) ability to fit through incredibly tiny spaces c) sucker cups d) underwater breathing(already have gills but I think this is a different mechanism in octopi) e) siphon organ could be used to jet water or enhance swimming
2) Water bear (Tardigrade) --> a) ability to put itself into stasis surviving incredibly harsh conditions for decades of time in extreme climates (even outer-space) and with no sustenance. b) can almost completely dehydrate; like 3% content water and recover (cryptobiosis)
3)Ants ---> a) Social stomach b) ability to shoot formic acid b) venomous sting c) antibacterial properties (leaf-cutter ants) d) ability to produce strong adhesives (weaver ant) e) super strength f) pheromones
Just a couple examples I could think of off the top of my head - there are a whole suite of other possibilities. The power is pretty OP.
as a tangential aside- patiently waiting for the MC to use his Mantis shrimp powers- their eyes in particular are crazy.
"Humans can process three channels of color (red, green and blue), while mantis shrimps perceive the world through 12 channels of color, and can detect UV (ultra violet) and polarized light, aspects of light humans can't access with the naked eye"
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What the hell? She explains that she got manipulated, used, and thrown away by Jared at a point in her life she had low self esteem and was vulnerable to being taken in by false promises. What the hell about that makes her a "slut" as you put it? She hasn't even been with a guy since then, but even if she had so fucking what? She has a right to a sex life.
You totally missed the point, which was to make you hate Jared even more for having preyed on an innocent young woman claiming he loved her when he was actually using her as a throwaway side piece. She deserved better, she's been nothing but sweet and cool from the time she's first introduced and never deserved to be hurt that way. You should be feeling empathy for what she went through and outrage over how she was done wrong, not blaming her for being a victim of a player.
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It's damned impressive then for you not being an experienced writer. I'm very much enjoying it and would almost certainly watch something like a premium streaming series based on it. It's that good.
My favorite character so far has been Emily, and I was so very glad to get to hook up with her at the second party. In particular I like how she implied there is a solid chance for a future relationship because she's 100% keeper material. I've been interested in a route with her since she was first introduced, and worked to get closer to her whenever I could, and it was very nice to have that pay off! I just don't want it to be a one and done thing, she's worth real love and not just a fuck.
Behind her is Mia, who is just made of adorable but I'm kinda rooting for her to end up with Jake so the poor bastard has a happy ending after all the hell he's been through in life. I'd also like to see Tess and Deryl actually date, he's open-minded enough to be cool with a very sexually active open relationship and maybe having a steady partner might settle her down just enough to have a sane life, being as she is now is fun for a while but not sustainable long term.
Ella... the very definition of hot as hell but dangerously crazy, so incredibly tempting but also like playing with nitroglycerine. About as perfect a plot engine character as it gets, you never know what complications she'll bring to the table but she is too important to ignore.
Alexis and Clark, as hot as she is Clark's actually a more likeable character and I hope his strength of positive character traits rubs off on her one of these days and she grows a conscience, compassion, code of ethics, etc.
I'm finding Alice and Tiffany sympathetic and genuinely want to help them resolve their troubles. Jess, on the other hand, I kinda feel sorry for her but she is enough of a bitch I can't help but feel she brings it on herself. If she can change for the better I'll root for her to get a happy ending with someone other than fucking Jared, who I so very much want to die and / or be completely humiliated and destroyed. She's burned her bridge with me though so she can have her happy ending somewhere else with someone I don't know because I'd be happy never seeing her again.
Christie is fun, hot, but beyond that I'm not quite sure how to feel about her.
Demi is cute and quirky, but better off being friendzoned especially until her actual gender can be confirmed.
Strangely, though I'm pretty sure they're meant to be main characters I feel very little for Liz and Amber either way. I don't dislike them or anything, but I'm just not terribly interested in them. They feel like those sort of "we drifted apart" friends where you wish them well but beyond that are just on separate paths.
A story like this lives and dies on its characters, and you've put together some really memorable and engaging ones. I'm along for the ride the whole way.
Oh, on a different note, I'd like to make a fetish request. I was sad not to see a tag for anal sex and would very much like seeing some of the male-on-female variety. In fact I was rather surprised, as I've always thought of goths and buttsex as being often linked. I mean, if it's not TMI I've been with three goth women in my time and all three enjoyed backdoor play. Goth porn also often features that kind of sex, I don't know if it's the taboo factor that makes it attractive to that personality type or what but it's definitely a thing. And while I know "big titty goth girlfriend" is a fetish all its own, I hope you won't neglect giving our MC some fine goth ass to play with.
Anyhow, keep up the good work!