VN Ren'Py Superhuman [v0.996 Public] [WeirdWorld]

[RareFishSticks]

Can we gender bender Daryl?

 

[Hiroto Tokyo]

Can we gender bender Daryl?

NAH

 

[Dysphorika]

AFAIK, no, but would be interesting.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

What the hell? She explains that she got manipulated, used, and thrown away by Jared at a point in her life she had low self esteem and was vulnerable to being taken in by false promises. What the hell about that makes her a "slut" as you put it? She hasn't even been with a guy since then, but even if she had so fucking what? She has a right to a sex life.

You totally missed the point, which was to make you hate Jake even more for having preyed on an innocent young woman claiming he loved her when he was actually using her as a throwaway side piece. She deserved better, she's been nothing but sweet and cool from the time she's first introduced and never deserved to be hurt that way. You should be feeling empathy for what she went through and outrage over how she was done wrong, not blaming her for being a victim of a player.

Women can have agency and be responsible for their own actions just like men are expected.

 

[KingWeWuz]

Women can have agency and be responsible for their own actions just like men are expected.

I agree. I'm not saying all girls need to be pure. I'm just wondering why I'm supposed to sympathize with girls who've been taken advantage of.

Men who do stupid things when pretty girls flutter eyelashes at them get no sympathy.

I did respect that much about her at least, she didn't seem to ask for sympathy and blamed herself.

 

[Hiroto Tokyo]

Waiting for the first event related with the public & government support points, since its introduction

 

[WeirdWorld]

I hope Jake is not gonna become ntr problem. Even the current scenes with him & girls pissing me off. Please don't tell me u are gonna add such a scene with jake & mia too

What KingWeWuz said. However, if the current scenes piss you off, chances are you'll be pissed off in the future. I don't have anything of that nature planned for Mia, or anyone really... at the moment, but also don't expect me to think twice about adding it in if an idea that interests me comes my way.

I was hoping you'd focus more on the second half of what I wrote

Ha, that's spoiler territory. Short answer is, maybe.

It's damned impressive then for you not being an experienced writer. I'm very much enjoying it and would almost certainly watch something like a premium streaming series based on it. It's that good.

My favorite character so far has been Emily, and I was so very glad to get to hook up with her at the second party. In particular I like how she implied there is a solid chance for a future relationship because she's 100% keeper material. I've been interested in a route with her since she was first introduced, and worked to get closer to her whenever I could, and it was very nice to have that pay off! I just don't want it to be a one and done thing, she's worth real love and not just a fuck.

Behind her is Mia, who is just made of adorable but I'm kinda rooting for her to end up with Jake so the poor bastard has a happy ending after all the hell he's been through in life. I'd also like to see Tess and Deryl actually date, he's open-minded enough to be cool with a very sexually active open relationship and maybe having a steady partner might settle her down just enough to have a sane life, being as she is now is fun for a while but not sustainable long term.

Ella... the very definition of hot as hell but dangerously crazy, so incredibly tempting but also like playing with nitroglycerine. About as perfect a plot engine character as it gets, you never know what complications she'll bring to the table but she is too important to ignore.

Alexis and Clark, as hot as she is Clark's actually a more likeable character and I hope his strength of positive character traits rubs off on her one of these days and she grows a conscience, compassion, code of ethics, etc.

I'm finding Alice and Tiffany sympathetic and genuinely want to help them resolve their troubles. Jess, on the other hand, I kinda feel sorry for her but she is enough of a bitch I can't help but feel she brings it on herself. If she can change for the better I'll root for her to get a happy ending with someone other than fucking Jared, who I so very much want to die and / or be completely humiliated and destroyed. She's burned her bridge with me though so she can have her happy ending somewhere else with someone I don't know because I'd be happy never seeing her again.

Christie is fun, hot, but beyond that I'm not quite sure how to feel about her.

Demi is cute and quirky, but better off being friendzoned especially until her actual gender can be confirmed.

Strangely, though I'm pretty sure they're meant to be main characters I feel very little for Liz and Amber either way. I don't dislike them or anything, but I'm just not terribly interested in them. They feel like those sort of "we drifted apart" friends where you wish them well but beyond that are just on separate paths.

A story like this lives and dies on its characters, and you've put together some really memorable and engaging ones. I'm along for the ride the whole way.

Oh, on a different note, I'd like to make a fetish request. I was sad not to see a tag for anal sex and would very much like seeing some of the male-on-female variety. In fact I was rather surprised, as I've always thought of goths and buttsex as being often linked. I mean, if it's not TMI I've been with three goth women in my time and all three enjoyed backdoor play. Goth porn also often features that kind of sex, I don't know if it's the taboo factor that makes it attractive to that personality type or what but it's definitely a thing. And while I know "big titty goth girlfriend" is a fetish all its own, I hope you won't neglect giving our MC some fine goth ass to play with.

Anyhow, keep up the good work!

I put it on the poll every time, but no one seems to vote for it. Generally they go for the gender bender stuff or tentalces. Anal will show up one day though

 

[bigguy_foryou]

I put it on the poll every time, but no one seems to vote for it. Generally they go for the gender bender stuff or tentalces. Anal will show up one day though

Shame, I guess the even weirder stuff is just too good for people to pass up on. Hopefully by the final build there'll be plenty of it, definitely a personal favorite.

 

[herpdederp2019]

anyway to cheat money and gallery?

Unren, to add developer/console, shift + d to find variables, in this case it's money, go to console (shit +o), money = xxxxx

 

[hakkkkaishin]

what is the mind control content

 

[Silverfan936]

kinda wish there was a Mia route xc, she is so damn cute!!!!!!, good job so far dev x)

 

[Taureum]

kinda wish there was a Mia route xc, she is so damn cute!!!!!!, good job so far dev x)

Just a question of time probably

 

[collin11]

kinda wish there was a Mia route xc, she is so damn cute!!!!!!, good job so far dev x)

I agree, Mia is Best girl

 

[Dopplyn]

Speaking of Mia, is there any chance she will end up becoming one more super human? Since Jake can't keep a secret.

 

[Trarrrr]

Ha, those Alex Mercer comments, and the Darkness ones too. My inspirations were a bit blatant weren't they? That said, having an MC with the power to shapeshift has it's advantages. If the majority feel the design is a poor choice, the MC may suddenly decide he don't wanna look like that no more.

Speaking of looks, do you intend to make his "armor" change to look more insane like the ones in Prototype and the comic of The darkness? like, as he gets stronger his armor gains more spikes and the like, you could even take some inspirations from the monster forms in the game The suffering.

 

[Dysphorika]

Speaking of looks, do you intend to make his "armor" change to look more insane like the ones in Prototype and the comic of The darkness? like, as he gets stronger his armor gains more spikes and the like, you could even take some inspirations from the monster forms in the game The suffering. View attachment 1397043

I think is the intend (or at least is what I would want).

 

[FrapFappers]

Speaking of looks, do you intend to make his "armor" change to look more insane like the ones in Prototype and the comic of The darkness? like, as he gets stronger his armor gains more spikes and the like, you could even take some inspirations from the monster forms in the game The suffering. View attachment 1397043

I'd like to see some more Spawn thrown in there if it isn't already. Tentacles already replace the chains.....

 

[Trarrrr]

I'd like to see some more Spawn thrown in there if it isn't already. Tentacles already replace the chains.....

Wouldn't that kinda go against the core biological style?
Like, the darkness could spawn guns through his power if he wanted but his guns looked all fleshy and their bullets were bones.
The protagonist in this care here has a power more biological in nature, not like Spawn's power which is more magical.

For what is told in the story, he definitely could create chains using his power but it would be way less efficient and take way more training to mold something like chains when he could get the same results by simply creating a huge spike.

 

[Vitklim]

Loving the work so far, big ups to the dev, writing has been great so far.
You fucking go man.

On a different note, when Jake asks you about how you lost your virginity and your reply prompts him to use his powers, this does not take into account any events that have happened prior. It always defaults to Bailey. Even though by that point in the game you could have fucked Christie, Tess and Emily at least. Something to take into account. Especially since that is the sort of thing that would change his perspective going forward, since he isn't a complete shit and would change his course of action had the MC replied differently.

 

[FrapFappers]

Wouldn't that kinda go against the core biological style?
Like, the darkness could spawn guns through his power if he wanted but his guns looked all fleshy and their bullets were bones.
The protagonist in this care here has a power more biological in nature, not like Spawn's power which is more magical.

For what is told in the story, he definitely could create chains using his power but it would be way less efficient and take way more training to mold something like chains when he could get the same results by simply creating a huge spike.

I meant more aesthetically, rather than powers wise but if we can get more options then I'm not against that.