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Help name the new home. Choose one. (Check out discord for more info and free renders)

  • The Junkyard

    Votes: 5 15.2%
  • The Terminal

    Votes: 2 6.1%
  • The Depot

    Votes: 1 3.0%
  • The Oasis

    Votes: 20 60.6%
  • The Dire Hearth

    Votes: 5 15.2%

  • Total voters
    33
  • Poll closed .

HiHaHo

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Jan 2, 2023
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hey just tried the game.

looks like a decent start ill check out the next update in hopes it stays consistent.

having the stance to make your game the way you want is the way to go IMO
take any opinion on how to write your game with a grain off salt and let the consumer decide if its good or not

ps: don't let the "Game developer" or "dev/head writer for mediocre abandoned game" tags add more weight then it should.
 

Hatchet80

Newbie
Mar 22, 2023
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Opinions can be ignored, whether they be good or bad. Criticisms are posted to help the dev make the best game they can! The problem I see is trying to separate the wheat from the chaff. That separation process can let opinions get under your skin. This is why I commend the dev for responding to posts that I would personally classify as opinions. Just reading the aforementioned posts made me irritated. A LOT of them came off as whiny or overbearing.

Moving on! Opinions incoming! I like where it seems the game is going. I like the models/renders. I'm looking forward to playing more! I think providing special renders is a GREAT way to let your community know you are still active and working!

*Criticism* I think some of the personalities are great and provide flavor but will probably overshadow others, while some seem pretty mild and may get lost in the background. Hopefully, they don't. A way to prevent that from happening is to have them provide info to MC that can be useful so there's interactions and the MC has to mull over possible choices. I don't think the MC can stay as mild mannered as he is. He has to corral some pretty strong personalities to go in the direction he wants. If there's a disagreement, then he has to be strong enough to be the "glue" to keep everyone together. Just a thought though, and hopefully presented in a way that isn't irritating.

I only bring this up because I'm greedy and want all of them! Selfish reasons I know, but considering it's a harem game....warranted I think.

Keep up the great work!
 
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johnmnf692

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Jun 20, 2022
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There's no point in putting choices that lead to game overs in a visual novel because they're not real choices. You are just making more work for yourself while still forcing the player to reload and make a different choice anyway. This is especially true if you aren't even going to lean into the consequences.

By far, the AVN which best implements game overs is Projekt: Passion, which has a lot of comedic death scenes for the MC which serve as quick game overs. The reason that works is because they're just optional jokes (and because the writing is top notch), and they serve an actual purpose (comedy), rather than just forcing you to reload.
 
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Carmine Note Games

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Oct 2, 2022
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Carmine Note Games progress for next update? 75%???
i know you work on this as a passion project ,im just curious
This is where I'm at. Currently swamped with work. I appreciate the patience. In game teasers along with progress reports available on my discord and/or subscribestar free tier. Updates are made public on subscribe star so no need to sign in or follow.
 
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Carmine Note Games

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Game Developer
Oct 2, 2022
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I cannot wait for the next update! I love post-apocalyptic settings and I love hot ladies.
I appreciate the patience, y'all. I wish I could crank these out faster, but for now it is a passion project that I can only give my spare time to. Don't forget to join the or if you haven't already for updates and more free renders. Including random freebies of past months' higher-tier renders like this one. (from October 2024's Lewd&Nude Renders) SMFLewdRender4.1_4K.jpg
 
4.00 star(s) 6 Votes