The art is unique and kinda interesting (though I don't really like the red shiny plastic look of the skin, tone down those highlights) but gotta say this is one of the games that doesn't seem to understand pacing at all. Dream sequences that spoil sex scenes with various characters right away are such a buzzkill... They're just spoilers that kill pacing, it's like stapling the last chapter of a book into the first chapter. 5 minutes in you're seeing various characters naked and even have sex with them in dream sequences. Just why? Instantly took away my desire to keep playing.
There's just no build up anymore, no anticipation when you spoil it right away seeing them nude and even fucking them in dream sequences on day 1-2. For many people the point of playing a game instead of just watching porn is we want the incremental, steady build up, that build up of anticipation, that investment of getting to know the characters and feel like you earn their affections so the sex scenes (pay off) are all that much better. I don't understand why devs make these dream sequence, I rarely see someone happy with them.
Pacing is hard to get right I grant that but yea this game is wasted potential by getting it so wrong, imo. Anyways goodluck though, if you ever feel like reworking the first days I think it would help the game a lot.