- Oct 26, 2017
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Really enjoyed the game! Are there any similar ones with the wife being corrupted and the husband getting jealous?
Because I love her but it's still early ....Really enjoyed the game! Are there any similar ones with the wife being corrupted and the husband getting jealous?
Well my friend i think that 90% if it is not 100% of the NTR,Cheating,steal,blackmail....etc stories are based on the lack of communication and a weak relationship between the couple.So i had some time to think about this game now and i noticed some things that bother me.
And since you guys are rewriting some of the previous chapters i thought it might be a good idea
to share my thoughts, either for this game or maybe some of your future projects.
I think the biggest problem this game has, is the lack of relationship between Husband and Wife.
Apart from the very beginning we dont know anything about how those two treat each other
and why they "love" each other.
Because even if you take away the whole swinging and cheating, this marriage feels shallow(i dont know if this is the right word). So even in a not swinging marriage, i think a divorce and/or a separation would be suitable and realistic outcome.
Due to their "empty" marriage and lack of personality of both characters, i, as a player, cant build any connection to either party. Thats why i am at a point where i dont really care if Fiona ends up with Davis. I dont know anything about Fiona or why i should feel bad about losing her. That gets even more obvious when you play the game from the MC perspective only.
And since this game seems to focus on cuckolding and wifestealing, this bad feeling of losing your wife should be an important factor of the game (i think).
And i dont mean this to get more sex scences between husband and wife. Im talking about actual conversation and actions(non sexual) between the couple.
I think thats enough criticism for now...
Appreciate your work so far though ;-)
Just because something is "normal" in these type of games, doesnt mean it has to be.Well my friend i think that 90% if it is not 100% of the NTR,Cheating,steal,blackmail....etc stories are based on the lack of communication and a weak relationship between the couple.
EX:
1.-The husband do not say that he have a debt then they say it to his wife therefore she "sacrifices" herself and then you know how it goes...
2.-The husband has a chastity belt he do not say it to his wife(thing that should have said if they really have a good relationship) then she see him kissing the shoe of his mistress and then you know how it goes...
3.-He is drunk and someone "rape" his wife but she decide to say nothing and then well you know how it goes...
4.-Let's not talk about the fucking tan and piercing...
So, as you can see everything start with a "poor communication and an unsatisfied woman" XD
Yes, in fact it would be best if you could rename all of the main characters. (MC, Fiona, Davis, Kayleigh). If more of these games had the simple option to rename characters, they would be a lot more appealing to a larger audience.This game would be much better if we can change the name of both the dudes. That way you can cater to both the Netori and Netorare crowds and let people choose if they want to be the Alpha or the beta shitty MC
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Compared to version 0.40.2 this version adds:
- 2 new chapters
- A splash screen and intro
- Some minor fixes
- 1 new CG event scene with 16 variations
- 3 new sprite variations
- 2K more words
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Compared to version 0.40.2 this version adds:
- 2 new chapters
- A splash screen and intro
- Some minor fixes
- 1 new CG event scene with 16 variations
- 3 new sprite variations
- 2K more words
You must be registered to see the links