RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.45] [Fujino]

[LordFrz]

How come language is not a problem anymore? Are we playing a different game?

Spoiler: I'm pretty sure this isn't in English.

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Yea, the game is made in Chinese, then he uses MTL to make the English version. MTL is not perfect and misses stuff, especially if the original text is in the picture and not the engine. You have to wait for an actual translation for everything else.

 

[AjaySol]

Can someone make a mod of all the scenes not in the gallery

 

[saitamaTM]

It's totally fine to criticize the author and provide feedback, as everyone has the right to do so. This particular storyline has indeed exposed several issues, and I would like to briefly discuss my original intentions behind its design.

Feel free to discuss the work itself and the creator, but let's avoid creating conflicts in the comment section.

1. The text volume in this update was substantial.

I mentioned this issue briefly towards the end, as the lack of time on finishing Thursday contents, which is crucial, led to my own shortcomings. If there had been content for Thursday, there might not have been as much controversy. Additionally, I took reference from some elements of the original work, aiming to provide a better textual narrative experience. However, it seems that this didn't resonate well, and I will make adjustments moving forward.

2. There was an excessive focus on Inoda's inner struggles, resulting in a weak sense of betrayal.

This is also my own doing, as I intended to shape Inoda as a somewhat perverted and comical character. Moreover, considering that many friends identified with Inoda through self-insertion, I didn't want to portray him as a complete scumbag. However, it appears that the outcome didn't satisfy everyone, and I will reassess this moving forward.

The issue with the sense of betrayal lies in the current progress. I currently don't have any remarkable developments for Inoda and Asuna's dynamic. This ties into another problem.

3. The progress is too slow, almost repeating the beginning stages of the part 1.

This storyline was influenced by the results of previous polls, where the majority voted for Kirito and Asuna to have a romantic relationship and preferred a slow-paced development. However, due to production constraints, there have been discrepancies and misdirection:

It seems that many players expected a more intense event to occur during the first massage event. But I considered that this shouldn't be a short-lived encounter like Nero's scenes. I had to consider the potential for reusing Liz and Kirito in this context.

Regarding the previous preview CG (to clarify, it was indeed Inoda's fantasy), it created unfavorable expectations. However, I couldn't deliver it on Thursday, and that's my fault. Starting from the next update, I will consider increasing the progression speed between Inoda and Asuna and introducing more engaging gameplay for Kirito himself.

Lastly, a plea:

Publicly sharing content invites criticism and suggestions, and I was not closing the comment section because people were hurling insults at me. It's impossible for me to cater to every fan's taste, and there will always be controversy surrounding the storyline. Feel free to discuss it among yourselves, but please refrain from attacking each other

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that why i hate some moron on internet i hope fujino not care for a lot toxic comment

 

[fisty123]

bro the fucking game still need story if you want CG go to nhentai and porn of some shit you don't need to play the game disapointed because the update not for you it fucking happen for all game when it have new update that why never hype for anything it will disapointed you if you want only CG for next update just don't play the game just ask people for CG

I agree it needs story but come on,

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, there were so many better ideas that could have taken place for this instead,

Then you got Asuna's mother,

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. Storyline would have been much better to let them fall together, she is getting in the way and it's just another road block that is added.

Then there is Kirito he is getting dumber in each update, yes yes I know everyone hates him so who cares, but turning him into the horny boy who then ignores and treats everyone else like crap is again not the best the storyline.

There are other things I could keep going on here and this is not an attack, this is a forum where people can have their own thoughts and mine are the story is a mess, there were much better options that could be used for almost every girl in the game then what is currently being used.
I like a storyllne in any game even NTR but this storyline is all over the place, perhaps that due to trying to keep everyone happy.

 

[Kazuto123]

I liked that there was a little more showing of the scenes of Kirito and Asuna having sex, where you can see that Asuna is not happy with him. Even Asuna didn't like it when Kirito fucked her pussy hard even though she likes being fucked hard by Inoda. This is nicely shown, because then Asuna's relationship with Kirito will decrease, and her relationship with Inoda will increase. I didn't like the scene of Suguha jerking Kirito's cock while Kirito was sleeping on the bed. Of course, I also liked the Inod and Asuna scenes, when Asuna was jerking Inod's cock or doing kinky things to her in FOG.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Yeah, I only watched the first season and liked only the first half of it. To be clear, I think there is nothing wrong with side characters; they are needed to progress the story in a more fluid way. Otherwise, we would just jump from one scene to another like many NTR games do, which is boring.

I read the novels before the anime was even a thing so I didn't have even remotely the same issues most people have with it (Mainly as a lot of them are problems with the anime adaptation being terrible in many of the novels' aspects sadly or cutting content, or people plain misunderstanding scenes even the anime made clear XP), but I can get you. If it helps, most of the issues people had with the 2nd half of S1 are gone in the next ones so I would recommend it if you were particularly into Kirito's adventure, or better yet reading the novels for the less cringe experience lol

And yeah, I agree with that. Though I may also be biased for being one of the few SAO fans that's just sick of Asuna after how much Canon gives us so much of her and completely sidelines the rest of the female cast constantly in her favor, so I prefer most of the other girls over her, especially with Kirito, which is why this Suguha development that I did NOT expect to see in a NTR game pleased me so much XD

I really like how Suguha want to fuck Kirito. Hope there will be more scenes with it

Preach it dude! While I'm not 100% sure Fujino will not just drop this particular development and devolve back to cliche NTR tropes with her, I wanna believe otherwise, especially with how positive her reactions seemed to be towards basically sleep-raping him twice XD (Really wanna see that added to the recollection room next update)

 

[Aniky Light]

next time less talk and more action. However we know the fate of the game, we were cuckolded and we will remain cuckolded

 

[Kazuto123]

I read the novels before the anime was even a thing so I didn't have even remotely the same issues most people have with it (Mainly as a lot of them are problems with the anime adaptation being terrible in many of the novels' aspects sadly or cutting content, or people plain misunderstanding scenes even the anime made clear XP), but I can get you. If it helps, most of the issues people had with the 2nd half of S1 are gone in the next ones so I would recommend it if you were particularly into Kirito's adventure, or better yet reading the novels for the less cringe experience lol

And yeah, I agree with that. Though I may also be biased for being one of the few SAO fans that's just sick of Asuna after how much Canon gives us so much of her and completely sidelines the rest of the female cast constantly in her favor, so I prefer most of the other girls over her, especially with Kirito, which is why this Suguha development that I did NOT expect to see in a NTR game pleased me so much XD



Preach it dude! While I'm not 100% sure Fujino will not just drop this particular development and devolve back to cliche NTR tropes with her, I wanna believe otherwise, especially with how positive her reactions seemed to be towards basically sleep-raping him twice XD (Really wanna see that added to the recollection room next update)

The SAO series is about the boundary between VR and reality and the relationship of Kazuto and Asuna. That's why Asuna and Kazuto have more scenes in the LN and anime, and the rest of the characters are secondary. But from the Unital Ring arc, Lisbeth, Silica, Yui have more scene. Suguha had her scenes in the Fairy Dance arc, the same Sinon in the GGO arc. I like it when Asuna and Kazuto (Kirito) love scenes are shown more in the LN, of course I like the rest of the girls' characters too.

 

[kinglionheart]

2. There was an excessive focus on Inoda's inner struggles, resulting in a weak sense of betrayal.

This is also my own doing, as I intended to shape Inoda as a somewhat perverted and comical character. Moreover, considering that many friends identified with Inoda through self-insertion, I didn't want to portray him as a complete scumbag. However, it appears that the outcome didn't satisfy everyone, and I will reassess this moving forward.

The issue with the sense of betrayal lies in the current progress. I currently don't have any remarkable developments for Inoda and Asuna's dynamic. This ties into another problem.

So from what I read from the dev is that we are not suppose to see Inoda as a complete scumbag by seeing his inner struggles. What inner struggle was there? In Part 1 I could see him less scumbag because he only went after Asuna and used pretty tame tactics. But in Part 2, he uses fake aphrodisiac, blackmailed Kyouko into accomplice, and teams up with Liz to break the couple up. Even when I hear his thoughts, I see him as a uncontrollable sex addict. If anything he was less a scumbag before and now has no redeeming qualities. Did I miss something?

Was it all times he said he was unloved by his parents and he is so ugly no like him? He said those things when we trying to get Asuna to feel sympathy for him so am I suppose to think he is right or deserves it?

 

[icyair]

I agree it needs story but come on,

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, there were so many better ideas that could have taken place for this instead,

Then you got Asuna's mother,

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. Storyline would have been much better to let them fall together, she is getting in the way and it's just another road block that is added.

Then there is Kirito he is getting dumber in each update, yes yes I know everyone hates him so who cares, but turning him into the horny boy who then ignores and treats everyone else like crap is again not the best the storyline.

There are other things I could keep going on here and this is not an attack, this is a forum where people can have their own thoughts and mine are the story is a mess, there were much better options that could be used for almost every girl in the game then what is currently being used.
I like a storyllne in any game even NTR but this storyline is all over the place, perhaps that due to trying to keep everyone happy.

I agree with you, the game is starting to present a mess. All the mystery and suspense is gone.
In my opinion the game is not progressing, I too think Inoda has everything to convince Asuna to have sex in FOG with the excuse that it's not a real thing. But it doesn't happen. Instead, Asuna starts doing lewd things in the real world. I thought that in part 2 Inoda would first get Asuna to do lewd things in FOG and we'd see a lot of lewd fight scenes and scenes like in the sewer and bandit camp where Asuna and Inoda are left alone while Kirito fights monsters. And then the lewd stuff would transfer to the real world.
Instead it feels like the game wants to explain everyone's thoughts and all their actions, there's no sense of mystery or excitement. Inoda and Asuna's mother had more development. I would like to see more scenes like in the sewers or the bandit camp. For example Liz made a mistake with the teleporter and would have sent Kirito separately from Inoda and Asuna. And we would only see pop-ups of what's going on between Inoda and Asuna. I understand about development and creating the right atmosphere for Asuna to give in to Inoda's persuasion, but that's what the first part was all about.

 

[kinglionheart]

Regarding the previous preview CG (to clarify, it was indeed Inoda's fantasy),

Straight from the dev's month, the preview picture is not real but a dream. No real world sex for Asuna and Inoda next update.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

The SAO series is about the boundary between VR and reality and the relationship of Kazuto and Asuna. That's why Asuna and Kazuto have more scenes in the LN and anime, and the rest of the characters are secondary. But from the Unital Ring arc, Lisbeth, Silica, Yui have more scene. Suguha had her scenes in the Fairy Dance arc, the same Sinon in the GGO arc. I like it when Asuna and Kazuto (Kirito) love scenes are shown more in the LN, of course I like the rest of the girls' characters too.

Dude, in the first place I wasn't even talking about what you're rambling on about, and in the second you're a KiriSuna fan playing a hardcore SAO NTR game that has Asuna being stolen away from Kirito just because it has some Kirito x Asuna sex scenes every now and then, and in your previous comment you said the hilarious contradiction of liking Asuna sucking off Inoda but disliking Suguha giving him a handjob (And probably more), you're kinda biased in a very weird way when you give answers XD

 

[Aniky Light]

Regarding the previous preview CG (to clarify, it was indeed Inoda's fantasy),

Straight from the dev's month, the preview picture is not real but a dream. No real world sex for Asuna and Inoda next update.

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Is this an animation of the game? I ask because I haven't seen this animation

 

[satoraiden]

Hi. I want to preface this by saying I'm a long time lurker in this thread and this is my first post in f95. Seeing as Fujino just posted a notice addressing some criticisms and other parts of his work, I'd like to share the comment I posted in ci-en regarding my opinion on the game.

Honestly, the update was good. The scenes were really well done (in my opinion) and the facial expressions were top notch.

I think a lot of people are forgetting that we're still in ver 0.25 of a game that's intended to be a slow build up for a really good payoff. I love the pacing of the story as it is, and speeding it up would limit creativity I think. The potential for multiple massage scenes, multiple risky phone call moments and risky FOG scenarios (such as the one in this update) is really really high. The sky's the limit with these scenes. Making Inoda and Asuna speed up would give people short term satisfaction, but would overall hurt the final product I think. Especially with the way the story is currently set up, having Asuna jump straight into Inoda's arms (or just speeding it up in general) instead of letting Liz and Inoda's plot play out would remove some of the excitement of waiting to see what's next in the new update.

Personally, I think just doing what you do best and not letting people dictate everything you do too much would be ideal. At the end of the day, I'm here for a game made by the hard work and effort of Fujino, not a game that's dictated by an audience that can't handle letting a narrative properly develop with a good payoff, and is just obsessed with short term pleasure instead of a long term great game and narrative.

TLDR; Let Fujino cook. They clearly have an idea that will take some time to execute but will pay off big time. For people complaining about how we're only getting handjobs and too much Kirito development, remember that this is VERSION 0.25 of a game. Give it time. Trust me a short term payoff would absolutely SUCK in the long term.

We don't mind slow development, too fast isn't fun either, but not that slow! This is a literal repeat of the Henteria Chronicles mistake. In the ntr game about asuna we get ntr after 17 hours!!! and that ntr that is out of place, I get it, but what are people supposed to do all those hours? In the game there is a constant repetition of the same dialogues 2 or even 3 times and as a result we for 17h only at the beginning of the game, when the last part had time to retell more events and much more colorful for 7h. Knowing the speed of updates, plum plans, we have to wait for the final 2 years and 70 hours minimum.

I personally don't like this.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Is this an animation of the game? I ask because I haven't seen this animation

It's in the Ci-En page of the creator (Where he usually posts updates and news), this particular one he posted in a progress report like one week before the current update's release:

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[4ung-4ang]

I read the novels before the anime was even a thing so I didn't have even remotely the same issues most people have with it (Mainly as a lot of them are problems with the anime adaptation being terrible in many of the novels' aspects sadly or cutting content, or people plain misunderstanding scenes even the anime made clear XP), but I can get you. If it helps, most of the issues people had with the 2nd half of S1 are gone in the next ones so I would recommend it if you were particularly into Kirito's adventure, or better yet reading the novels for the less cringe experience lol

And yeah, I agree with that. Though I may also be biased for being one of the few SAO fans that's just sick of Asuna after how much Canon gives us so much of her and completely sidelines the rest of the female cast constantly in her favor, so I prefer most of the other girls over her, especially with Kirito, which is why this Suguha development that I did NOT expect to see in a NTR game pleased me so much XD



Preach it dude! While I'm not 100% sure Fujino will not just drop this particular development and devolve back to cliche NTR tropes with her, I wanna believe otherwise, especially with how positive her reactions seemed to be towards basically sleep-raping him twice XD (Really wanna see that added to the recollection room next update)

To be honest, I admit I'm too old for 99% of the anime content; I'm more into seinen now. However, I watched a lot of anime back in the '90s and early '00s. In 2012, isekai wasn't mainstream, so it was something 'new' (I know there have been others before, like .HACK). I can still enjoy shonen if it's original or stands out by other means. It's just a personal preference.

As for Suguha. There's no evidence of her being in sexual contact with Asuna/Inoda (I've read spoilers about future Perk developments). While this isn't a 100% proof and can still change, I hope she gets her own storyline. In my understanding, Suguha is an important secondary female character to Fujino, so he likely has something different in mind for her. With little to no demands on her character from the audience, he can explore various possibilities, giving him the freedom to unfold his vision.

 

[SaiyaTop]

update 0.25 only have 2 scene ?

 

[BlurredIce]

Calm your tits everyone. Next update things would probably heat up as fujino sensei had said

Regarding the previous preview CG (to clarify, it was indeed Inoda's fantasy),

Straight from the dev's month, the preview picture is not real but a dream. No real world sex for Asuna and Inoda next update.

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Maybe liz? Isn't there a scene in this update where inoda imagined liz as asuna.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

To be honest, I admit I'm too old for 99% of the anime content; I'm more into seinen now. However, I watched a lot of anime back in the '90s and early '00s. In 2012, isekai wasn't mainstream, so it was something 'new' (I know there have been others before, like .HACK). I can still enjoy shonen if it's original or stands out by other means. It's just a personal preference.

As for Suguha. There's no evidence of her being in sexual contact with Asuna/Inoda (I've read spoilers about future Perk developments). While this isn't a 100% proof and can still change, I hope she gets her own storyline. In my understanding, Suguha is an important secondary female character to Fujino, so he likely has something different in mind for her. With little to no demands on her character from the audience, he can explore various possibilities, giving him the freedom to unfold his vision.

That's completely fair, yeah, I read it back when I was a teenager myself so watching the anime later wasn't as much of an issue for me, I probably wouldn't read it nowadays now that I'm an old man and my tastes have changed LOL.

I've avoided Spoilers, but as I said before, the 'perks' have been there from the very first update of the game and A LOT have changed since Fujino made them so a lot of them may either be not reliable or even outright just not matter much for the plot of other characters given all the changes Fujino made regarding the game when he first posted it.

I will admit, I had my own selfish reasons for wanting Suguha to end up being 'stolen' by Inoda, mainly that it was unironically the "best ending" I could imagine for her in this game (Especially since Fujino said getting rid of Hebishima was actually a possibility) and may as well get a Suguha x Asuna threesome out of it, but after this update I have changed my mind, now I want Suguha going Yandere for Kirito (Much to his horror) despite the power of Hebishima's Chad NTR Dick, maybe herself ending up being the cause Hebishima ends up removed from the game XD (Granted, it may be because it reminded me a bit of my favorite SAO H-doujin )

 

[Rubyrosesilver22]

This is from fujino