RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.551c] [Fujino]

[4-kun]

My only worry in regards to a statement like this is the necessity to have a "big event to finish off Part 2". I agree with an earlier statement that ending Part 2 with IRL sex seems probably too rushed with how Asuna reacts towards Inoda at the moment. Like I'm sure Fujino can write up some bullshittery reason to progress the IRL sex, I just don't know if I'd end up agreeing with it I guess. It just feels like Inoda will have to resort to some lame ass tactic to accomplish it. But who knows I guess.

I mean, it doesn't have to be a big sexual event like necessarily, but a meaningful cliffhanger is needed to conclude the part. Maybe a big fight or misunderstanding between the couple, or Kirito making a significant step forward into his corruption, which again would result in cracking the couple's relationship more, or Inoda taking full control of Kyoko.

This is a fair reason. I just think the IRL big event is probably not the way it should go. I think we were initially theorizing that the end of Part 2 would just be Asuna consenting in FOG instead of just being strung along to Inoda's whims. Or if not that, we all kind of assumed something would have to happen to make Asuna agree in an act of passion to willingly submit (even if temporarily) to Inoda. The act of passion was probably just like finding out semi concrete clues that Kirito could potentially be cheating on her (or at least that's what Asuna deduces) and then proceeds to just Inoda do whatever he wants. Her moment of vulnerability would just make everything spiral out of control. The issue behind that initial theory was that FOG seemed like the place where it would more than likely happen.

The issue with IRL is that even if a big event has to happen there, it seems like the least likely place for things to make sense.

Like honestly I'm going to assume the end of Part 2 is going to be very similar to the end of Part 1. It's just going to be something like Asuna is going to somehow be unncessarily horny (for whatever reason) and then be unable to resist. If not that, then Inoda somehow using the Asuna killing him in FOG as an excuse to guilt trip her just seems like it wouldn't make sense. But it's the only card I can see Inoda probably throwing out there to bag Asuna IRL.

But nonetheless I agree with Part 2 having some kind of "climax" so to speak for the reason you stated.

But, yeah, irl sex is still just as possible as a conclusion as anything else. Basically, the same thing happened on the stormy night and in the treehouse; just a made-up situation that leads to it. Even if some of us don't like the pacing of it, there's nothing we can do about it, and we'll have to accept it anyway

 

[Aniky Light]

I hope in part 3 they take away Kirito's stupidity

 

[gaka200]

I mean, it doesn't have to be a big sexual event like necessarily, but a meaningful cliffhanger is needed to conclude the part. Maybe a big fight or misunderstanding between the couple, or Kirito making a significant step forward into his corruption, which again would result in cracking the couple's relationship more, or Inoda taking full control of Kyoko.

But, yeah, irl sex is still just as possible as a conclusion as anything else. Basically, the same thing happened on the stormy night and in the treehouse; just a made-up situation that leads to it. Even if some of us don't like the pacing of it, there's nothing we can do about it, and we'll have to accept it anyway

I at least kind of liked the way that Part 1 went, and even though the treehouse was weird, I still liked it enough. The treehouse one did cause some whiplash because it felt too soon, so it was extremely unexpected. But at least I was somewhat able to accept it with FOG being the area where Asuna's morals can be much looser without her realizing it (even though a normal sane person would realize it). Since the treehouse one was a combination of Asuna getting debuffed and Kirito being more out-of-character (the ooc part is what most people were annoyed with), it was something you can sort of see happening.

But yeah, I know we're just going to have to accept whatever happens. I'll probably end up being somewhat ok with it. Somewhat being the key word. Cause I'll just end up enjoying how seemingly hot it is.

Which on a side note, even though I enjoyed the most recent update, I'm bummed that Inoda didn't penetrate in-game, and ended up just doing date rape drugs and raping Asuna in her sleep. The "doing it in her sleep" part just threw me off cause I thought we were overall passed that point. Like how in Part 1, the only times Inoda had any sex with Asuna was when her character got bugged out in FOG, so she was basically asleep and unaware. So I just didn't really vibe with that part, since it felt more like that.

 

[4-kun]

I hope in part 3 they take away Kirito's stupidity

No way

 

[Versace217]

I think Part 2 could be wrapped up by In-game Wednesday. We have 3 days to go that the gang will be spending IRL, meaning no FOG. Inoda will have three days to convince Asuna somehow to have IRL sex and that could be on Wednesday where the Part 2 could possibly end. Then Fujino could start Part 3 from Thursday with no restrictions like we had in Part 1 and 2 and instead could focus more on the corruption aspects of Asuna/Inoda relationship and can also move forward with the rest of the side characters.

 

[Aniky Light]

if the second part ends with Asuna's complete betrayal, then what's the point of the third part? do I have to go around being a voyeur and that's it? The second part could end with Asuna entering Inoda's house or vice versa and you see the door closing with the words to be continued, like when someone publishes a video but never shows the best part

p.s. don't make Kirito even more stupid than he already is, otherwise he won't be able to see or hear, he won't even be able to walk

 

[Versace217]

Allowing IRL sex is a big milestone but there are still more restrictions afterwards. There are IRL BJs and anal has off the table in all worlds. She allowed sex in real world for Kirito but these are the things she won't allow for anyone yet.

No restrictions in the sense that you won't see all the slow burn that we saw at the start of Part 2. Part 3 could start from something like 1 per week IRL sex that we saw recently in FOG. Then it could escalate to regular handjobs, blowjobs, etc until you get regular sex.

 

[4-kun]

if the second part ends with Asuna's complete betrayal, then what's the point of the third part? do I have to go around being a voyeur and that's it? The second part could end with Asuna entering Inoda's house or vice versa and you see the door closing with the words to be continued, like when someone publishes a video but never shows the best part

p.s. don't make Kirito even more stupid than he already is, otherwise he won't be able to see or hear, he won't even be able to walk

Well, there is still a long way to go after IRL sex. We can expect her to do it willingly and still convince herself that she loves Kirito. It will take quite some time until she really gives up on her relationship with him.

 

[Aniky Light]

Well, there is still a long way to go after IRL sex. We can expect her to do it willingly and still convince herself that she loves Kirito. It will take quite some time until she really gives up on her relationship with him.

I can't see Asuna turning into a slut. Even if Asuna leaves him, she won't tell him why and at this point Kirito will start to have doubts and if he's still stupid then damn Fujino for giving me a handicapped character

 

[4-kun]

I can't see Asuna turning into a slut. Even if Asuna leaves him, she won't tell him why and at this point Kirito will start to have doubts and if he's still stupid then damn Fujino for giving me a handicapped character

She will turn into a mindless doll at some point in the story, fully succumbing to Inoda. However, on his behalf, she will never break up with Kirito, even after realizing she no longer has any feelings for him. That's her NTR path in this game. That's why I'm saying that IRL sex isn't such a big deal

 

[kinglionheart]

I can't see Asuna turning into a slut. Even if Asuna leaves him, she won't tell him why and at this point Kirito will start to have doubts and if he's still stupid then damn Fujino for giving me a handicapped character

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[4-kun]

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Who knows, maybe Asuna will actually turn Inoda into a decent guy. Maybe he will even stop raping

 

[Aniky Light]

his expression says it all

 

[Cuongmt]

i bet this guy's game is as good as scars and SAO NTR! but he hasn't updated the game in a long time.
https://f95zone.to/threads/kish-fanbox-game-v0-3-kishi.54792/

 

[Aniky Light]

i bet this guy's game is as good as scars and SAO NTR! but he hasn't updated the game in a long time.
https://f95zone.to/threads/kish-fanbox-game-v0-3-kishi.54792/

I believe you he doesn't update it, he completely abandoned the game

 

[oozaru2023]

it seems my assumptions were correct, plus it was pretty obvious that it was going to end in a second arc since there was too much material to continue in just one, for another reason Fujino might be working on the debug. now there is not much to speculate about how this arc will close, most likely it will be with a complete corruption of her in FOG in the real world it would be funny if both Inoda, Liz, Kirito and Asuna were in the night offices while Liz was savoring Cuckito on the other side inoda was destroying asuna and even kyoko her mother comes and joins her it would be the first threesome, or maybe inoda and kyoko are fucking and asuna finds them but he makes them two reconcile or become closer and they end up fucking anyway.

 

[4-kun]

it seems my assumptions were correct, plus it was pretty obvious that it was going to end in a second arc since there was too much material to continue in just one, for another reason Fujino might be working on the debug. now there is not much to speculate about how this arc will close, most likely it will be with a complete corruption of her in FOG in the real world it would be funny if both Inoda, Liz, Kirito and Asuna were in the night offices while Liz was savoring Cuckito on the other side inoda was destroying asuna and even kyoko her mother comes and joins her it would be the first threesome, or maybe inoda and kyoko are fucking and asuna finds them but he makes them two reconcile or become closer and they end up fucking anyway.
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Why should Liz be at the office? She works at the clothing shop.
Your ideas are a bit over the top for that stage of the story, don't you think?

 

[dfgrhsdvyzicx]

it seems my assumptions were correct, plus it was pretty obvious that it was going to end in a second arc since there was too much material to continue in just one, for another reason Fujino might be working on the debug. now there is not much to speculate about how this arc will close, most likely it will be with a complete corruption of her in FOG in the real world it would be funny if both Inoda, Liz, Kirito and Asuna were in the night offices while Liz was savoring Cuckito on the other side inoda was destroying asuna and even kyoko her mother comes and joins her it would be the first threesome, or maybe inoda and kyoko are fucking and asuna finds them but he makes them two reconcile or become closer and they end up fucking anyway.
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i really hope this happens in the next update. liz x kirito is da best

 

[NTR Apologist]

I mean, it doesn't have to be a big sexual event like necessarily, but a meaningful cliffhanger is needed to conclude the part. Maybe a big fight or misunderstanding between the couple, or Kirito making a significant step forward into his corruption, which again would result in cracking the couple's relationship more, or Inoda taking full control of Kyoko.

But, yeah, irl sex is still just as possible as a conclusion as anything else. Basically, the same thing happened on the stormy night and in the treehouse; just a made-up situation that leads to it. Even if some of us don't like the pacing of it, there's nothing we can do about it, and we'll have to accept it anyway

Yea, I think people are tunnel visioning on the ending of Part 1, thinking Fujino has to or will end Part 2 the same way; with sex between Asuna and Inoda that changes the status quo of their relationship in a major way. But Part 2 could end differently from what most seem to think will happen. But as long as it has an engaging and not shoehorned cliffhanger, no one should reasonably be upset if it doesn't end with a sex scene.

I personally am in the camp of having it end with IRL sex, but I wouldn't feel distraught if it ended differently. To me, it seems like that's what we've been building up to—ending Part 2 with Asuna and Inoda having consensual IRL sex. Throughout Part 2, Inoda has been breaking down Asuna's morals and making her more debauched to eventually have IRL sex that isn't mostly forced (like at the end of Part 1) by making her justify cheating using FOG cause "it's not real", realizing Kirito isn't sexually satisfying her as he has, using the people closest to her to further separate her from Kirito, and manipulating her into thinking that Kirito is willingly cheating on her.

 

[pirohiro]

Good spot on the Saikey page. Looks like it will be a trilogy. Not a bad decision.

My prediction is that it will end with FOG corruption with the lead into part 3 being taking feelings into real life.