RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.65] [Fujino]

[cloudconnected]

It was ok. Asuna did say she found a way to relieve the stress, I hope in the few coming updates this method of stress relief will come to real life.
Alice's scenes were ok, but didn't really care for her.
Shame there was no Suguha POV of what she did to Kirito at his apartment, as well as shame there was no x-ray of the climax at the end there... would have went well with those Asuna's eyes.

Update felt lacking, sure, but there was lots of plot so to say, if you don't just skip everything, that is.

 

[gaka200]

I really think he needs to get someone to help write dialogue, especially Asuna's. Her dirty talk was all over the place, even accounting for her being nervous and ashamed doing it in the first place. I guess he's using MTL for the english? Lots of errors when it comes to names and stilted writing all over.

You'll just have to wait for whenever Part 2 is done and it goes to Saikey I guess. Since that seems to be the way you'll get a better translation and maybe writing on how it's done. But the MTL is pretty good for what it's worth.

 

[gaka200]

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ngl it cracked me up rofl.

 

[kinglionheart]

Yeah the Alice and Leafa ones were kind of disappointing. I sure hope the Leafa one doesn't mean the old middle manager is going to gun for Suguha. Cause Suguha still doing crazy shit to Kirito is still probably one of the more interesting parts.

I imagine Alice will just have sex scenes every now and then, but not as much major story progression. By the way, the mind inprint thing has a bunch of things on it now. They don't seem to do anything, and might just be flavor text as to what she's currently being hypnotized under.

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I guess another we were wrong about is this is the end of Alice's story.

ngl it cracked me up rofl.

She came in like horror movie villain!

 

[albakr0ss]

I really think he needs to get someone to help write dialogue, especially Asuna's. Her dirty talk was all over the place, even accounting for her being nervous and ashamed doing it in the first place. I guess he's using MTL for the english? Lots of errors when it comes to names and stilted writing all over.

Oh agree for this one. Going by the perk this is the first level of dirty talk but she seems to have quite literally gone all in basically on the dirty talk. Doesn't seem like there was any inhibition anymore she went from a slight freudian slip to actual just whore play which was kind of weird. Definitely must be a translation that Saikey will clean up later on.

 

[Desgarraador]

need more IRL scenes , asuna anal training and more corrupted asuna .. buuuut eh mister fujino doing well . slow cooking vs player desires thats why some of us are not happy enought

I'm not interested in anal, I just want it to slowly get corrupted in real life. (In my opinion anal is either end of the line or never)

 

[Desgarraador]

They write that the update is bad and dissatisfied, so here it is
1. Don't forget that in August the author left on business, so we don't take August into account
2. He made a bonus game, although it didn't come out. But it is more likely not a cancellation, but will be later, maybe in the new year
3. He also probably thought over the plot, development, now from the update it is clear that progress has been made, maybe in the fall this will be the last update before the third part, or maybe not
4. The animation of sex has become better, in fact, they have become more interesting.

In the end, I liked the update, although short, but there is progress.

Oh yeah, I forgot, you play for free, I also play for free, but I don't scold, right?

Everyone who asks for content quickly must be premature ejaculators.

Learn to take it easy, as I know the author is someone who has another job, so if any of you work you should know that time is shorter for these things.

The important thing is that it is clear that he is working on the game and is not neglecting it. I like slow but well-done work rather than rushed work.

 

[lev123456]

̶G̶O̶D̶ GATSU?

 

[gaka200]

Oh agree for this one. Going by the perk this is the first level of dirty talk but she seems to have quite literally gone all in basically on the dirty talk. Doesn't seem like there was any inhibition anymore she went from a slight freudian slip to actual just whore play which was kind of weird. Definitely must be a translation that Saikey will clean up later on.

Maybe lvl 3 is pet names and calling Inoda master or something. Like she went into whore play, but there's probably still more excessive form of this kind of talk.

OH definitely me. I'm pretty sure I made a whole post about monday was going to be Asuna making it up to Inoda so genuinely color me surprised that had absolutely nothing to do with anything. Hey King, i've a question though the at some point during the testing with Liz and Kirito there's a status that pops up and say something like Spearhead acquisition or something like that text? It's not in the perks but it's definitely there you have any idea what that could be?

My guess would be that spearhead is just a bad MTL translation for "being on top". Or spearhead just referring to Inoda pounding her harder and her accepting it. But yeah I don't recall Asuna actively doing a cowgirl position herself yet.

 

[MMJunko12345]

In fact, if the game is purchased, just because it is downloaded pirated does not mean that it is officially free.

 

[Lazym3]

I was quite disappointed by the irl scenes, here I thought it would be Indo, but it's Kirito!

Anyway, this is probably the last time Kirito will have a sex scene with Asuna because frankly Asuna is now deeply corrupted it won't be long till Indo could fuck her irl.

Either way while the main heroine sex scenes are very disappointing this update, the MVP right now is definitely Alice.

I really like the scene, especially when you could make choices and actually has a different scenario first time for this game.

Overall, it's a decent update.

I only play this for free, so I wouldn't really complain beggars can't be choosers after all.

 

[Animefan_09]

Just finished downloading, now the real question is if i should just play it today or wait 1 or 2 days for the inevitable bugfix update xD

 

[Aniky Light]

is the mod ready?

 

[kinglionheart]

Just finished downloading, now the real question is if i should just play it today or wait 1 or 2 days for the inevitable bugfix update xD

Considering there isn't any major bugs, the real question is can you wait and avoid the spoilers here?

 

[w123t4]

The first sex of alice in reality just like that? What a wasted!

 

[danadana]

It was a disappointing update. It is even shorter than the previous one. And how many theories were built around this week, and it was just missed. Somehow there is a feeling of deception, I have not been waiting for this for 2 months.

but that disappointment is basically your fault for paying attention to the 300 theory comments from people who have no idea since no one has any idea apart from fujino so anything that doesn't come from the game or fujino is simply an opinion and as this developer has already shown, the more he pays attention to people, the worse his games or updates are, so I prefer that he continue doing what he wants and don't give a shit about randoms theories ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

 

[jackstinson826]

I hope next update has some irl

 

[Doner077]

That was it? I have expected more

 

[Wisp13]

well well i guess it fell into that generic plot line that we players actually wanted to prevent, our slutsuna becoming a hypocrite is the last thing that wont make sense but it happened oh wellll gotta wait for that next update kinda lose interest on asuna now please sensei give my liz x inoda or liz x kirito event

 

[kopiluwak]

the scene on that's on display in the menu when you boot the game isn't " in " the game yet ? it appears to be Inoda and Azuna at work (or at least in their work clothes) anyone can shed me some light about that ?