RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.80] [Fujino]

[mos555]

i don’t really see the point in wanting kirito to end up alone. dude’s always been a loner (even in canon). he used to dive into games just to escape reality until he met asuna. she gave him a reason to care, to fight, and to actually live. now that he has her, he just wants to live better with the person he loves. even though it’s a parody, fujino sensei still paid homage to his character. in the early updates, he made their dates feel wholesome, real, and almost like he was honoring what kirito and asuna had. even when we picked cheat options, kirito used to hesitate. he didn’t want to betray asuna. he’s always been that guy who works hard to be better for the people he loves. so yeah, he deserves someone who actually values/loves him in this game. it should only be suguha or maybe sinon too (not alice tho xD). and if you really think he deserves to be alone after everything, then maybe you just hate seeing someone find happiness after all the shit they went through
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Come on! Kirito has a small penis, he only deserves to die alone!

This is a joke.

In fact, I agree, Asuna, despite the fact that she has a fiance, shows her tits and jerks off to some fat schoolboy a few days after they meet. Such behavior is difficult to explain even with maternal instinct and pity. If Asuna's behavior now can be explained by the fact that lust has driven her crazy, then why did she suddenly want to undress and please a stranger?.. It's not clear. Kirito really held on for a long time, but I think it's just because Kirito doesn't notice much in this game. So he didn't notice that Asuna's attitude had cooled towards him.

For some reason, I doubt that Kirito will get any happiness in this game, because he has the standard type of weak-willed cuckold in this game, and Asuna has a stupid whore. So far, in all the scenes, Kirito has either been raped (time stopped, unconscious), or the girls have taken the initiative themselves, and Kirito has only agreed. If Kirito doesn't take the initiative to have sex with another girl besides Asuna during these last 4 updates, then I think he will remain a weak-willed cuckold and there will be no more or less adequate ending for him.

 

[critic specialized in NTR]

regardless of how this ends, Kirito alone or with Suguha, the only thing I'm sure of is that the writing is going to be shit, just finish this game.

 

[elbro]

The funny thing is that Inoda's status says that "he protects me and is always ready to help." Can anyone remember at least once when Inoda protected Asuna and from whom? For some reason, when I try to remember something about the brave Inoda, I only remember how he hid in a brothel behind Asuna's back, lol. I think there's definitely something wrong with Asuna's head. It's as if Sugo and Inoda are former participants in the MK-Ultra project (search and study of mind manipulation tools), and Asuna is their main test subject and her brain seems to be almost dead.
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I like Inoda's personality, he thinks he's a jerk but he's as cowardly as a nerd, when he's having sex he talks as if he were the dominant one but when he confronts Liz he is her bitch, he's a scatterbrained guy with good luck when manipulating and an aggressive mood, as well as a spoiled child and in general he's a self-centered character who doesn't want anything good for any woman he meets but plays the victim card.

He is an interesting character, a loser who finds things work out for his personal good even though he is a bad guy.

 

[mos555]

I like Inoda's personality, he thinks he's a jerk but he's as cowardly as a nerd, when he's having sex he talks as if he were the dominant one but when he confronts Liz he is her bitch, he's a scatterbrained guy with good luck when manipulating and an aggressive mood, as well as a spoiled child and in general he's a self-centered character who doesn't want anything good for any woman he meets but plays the victim card.

He is an interesting character, a loser who finds things work out for his personal good even though he is a bad guy.

He's also a rapist, multiple times, who revels in his power over helpless people, which means he's also a sadist. And he is probably also a psychopath, as he has a lack of empathy towards others, a reduced capacity for compassion, an inability to sincerely repent of harming other people, deceitfulness, egocentricity and superficiality of emotional reactions. Rapist, manipulator, sadist, psychopath. I do not know how the personality of such a character can be liked by anyone at all, but I can't impose my opinion on others. To me, this is a disgusting person, created precisely to cause disgust.

 

[karlA29]

The funny thing is that Inoda's status says that "he protects me and is always ready to help." Can anyone remember at least once when Inoda protected Asuna and from whom? For some reason, when I try to remember something about the brave Inoda, I only remember how he hid in a brothel behind Asuna's back, lol. I think there's definitely something wrong with Asuna's head. It's as if Sugo and Inoda are former participants in the MK-Ultra project (search and study of mind manipulation tools), and Asuna is their main test subject and her brain seems to be almost dead.
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I think that here she means exactly that Inoda-set-up moment at the karaoke. Again - who carried Asuna unconscious during the boss fight. It's just that players see the whole picture, and Asuna sees only part of it. She doesn't know that Inoda carried her out to fuck her quietly in the hotel. So it turns out that the one who took care of her (from Asuna's point of view) was Inoda.
in my opinion, there are no particular contradictions with the plot in this text

 

[karlA29]

Come on! Kirito has a small penis, he only deserves to die alone!

This is a joke.

In fact, I agree, Asuna, despite the fact that she has a fiance, shows her tits and jerks off to some fat schoolboy a few days after they meet. Such behavior is difficult to explain even with maternal instinct and pity. If Asuna's behavior now can be explained by the fact that lust has driven her crazy, then why did she suddenly want to undress and please a stranger?.. It's not clear. Kirito really held on for a long time, but I think it's just because Kirito doesn't notice much in this game. So he didn't notice that Asuna's attitude had cooled towards him.

For some reason, I doubt that Kirito will get any happiness in this game, because he has the standard type of weak-willed cuckold in this game, and Asuna has a stupid whore. So far, in all the scenes, Kirito has either been raped (time stopped, unconscious), or the girls have taken the initiative themselves, and Kirito has only agreed. If Kirito doesn't take the initiative to have sex with another girl besides Asuna during these last 4 updates, then I think he will remain a weak-willed cuckold and there will be no more or less adequate ending for him.
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There is no point in looking for meaning in the plot of this game. This game has a plot like the NTR manga on 12-24 pages. The main character is a worthless person, the woman is a whore, the villain enslaved the world with his big dick. That's all)
If we're lucky, the author will make a normal ending for Kirito. But, remembering his previous works, I doubt it.

 

[mos555]

I think that here she means exactly that Inoda-set-up moment at the karaoke. Again - who carried Asuna unconscious during the boss fight. It's just that players see the whole picture, and Asuna sees only part of it. She doesn't know that Inoda carried her out to fuck her quietly in the hotel. So it turns out that the one who took care of her (from Asuna's point of view) was Inoda.
in my opinion, there are no particular contradictions with the plot in this text

Well, maybe, but somehow it looks too biased. Asuna refuses to notice what Kirito is doing for her, but at the same time makes Inoda's petty actions heroic. Considering that she knows that Inoda was holed up on the ground floor in Aincrad, and Kirito saved the lives of several thousand unwitting players. Asuna should have told Inoda to fuck off right away, since he cowardly hid while they were fighting for their lives. It remains only to accept that there is NO logic at ALL. It doesn't contradict the plot, but it does contradict common sense.

There is no point in looking for meaning in the plot of this game. This game has a plot like the NTR manga on 12-24 pages. The main character is a worthless person, the woman is a whore, the villain enslaved the world with his big dick. That's all)
If we're lucky, the author will make a normal ending for Kirito. But, remembering his previous works, I doubt it.

WELL, in previous Fujino games, you could say there were no endings at all. There, the actions simply reached the complete collapse of some characters and the game ended. So there is hope that Fujino will decide to do something radically new for himself.

 

[karlA29]

Well, maybe, but somehow it looks too biased. Asuna refuses to notice what Kirito is doing for her, but at the same time makes Inoda's petty actions heroic. Considering that she knows that Inoda was holed up on the ground floor in Aincrad, and Kirito saved the lives of several thousand unwitting players. Asuna should have told Inoda to fuck off right away, since he cowardly hid while they were fighting for their lives. It remains only to accept that there is NO logic at ALL. It doesn't contradict the plot, but it does contradict common sense.

well, let's put it this way. Here the perception of reality is in the moment. The salvation of all the players was a long time ago, and for the last half a year (or however long the period from meeting Inoda lasts) it is mainly Inoda who has been protecting her (we know that he is protecting - not at all what he is doing))) ).

 

[ASDZXCQWER1321]

well, let's put it this way. Here the perception of reality is in the moment. The salvation of all the players was a long time ago, and for the last half a year (or however long the period from meeting Inoda lasts) it is mainly Inoda who has been protecting her (we know that he is protecting - not at all what he is doing))) ).

It seems like 2-3 months, which makes the whole situation even more absurd.

 

[mos555]

well, let's put it this way. Here the perception of reality is in the moment. The salvation of all the players was a long time ago, and for the last half a year (or however long the period from meeting Inoda lasts) it is mainly Inoda who has been protecting her (we know that he is protecting - not at all what he is doing))) ).

They spent 2 years in Aincrad, but they know Inoda... 2-3 months, I think? Well, yes, this is explained by the fact that between Aincrad and Inoda, Asuna visited Sugo and had her brains turned out there. So I had to block the memory. Was the real Asuna still there?

It will be interesting and funny if in the end it turns out that her love for Kirito was also planted in her head by Asuna's father while she was in the hospital. And it turns out that Inoda, on the contrary, freed Asuna from someone else's identity. That's the kind of ending that calls the brain.

 

[ASDZXCQWER1321]

I sort of want Kirito to be completely alone and bitchless by the end. Am I the only one?

I'm not sure, but in your gif, is Kirito fucking Inoda?

 

[mos555]

I'm not sure, but in your gif, is Kirito fucking Inoda?

This is Sinon and Hebeshima in the real world.

Such an ending would also have shocked everyone. Sinon will turn Kirito into a girl and then Inoda will fuck Kirito.

 

[kinglionheart]

The funny thing is that Inoda's status says that "he protects me and is always ready to help." Can anyone remember at least once when Inoda protected Asuna and from whom? For some reason, when I try to remember something about the brave Inoda, I only remember how he hid in a brothel behind Asuna's back, lol. I think there's definitely something wrong with Asuna's head. It's as if Sugo and Inoda are former participants in the MK-Ultra project (search and study of mind manipulation tools), and Asuna is their main test subject and her brain seems to be almost dead.
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She was talking about when Inoda got hurt protecting Asuna from thugs in Part 1. She explained during the final ritual sex. Funny thing was we found out the thugs were lured by Inoda so the entire situation was setup by him. This was back when he didn't have any backup. Just him planing and do all work made me actually root for him. But now with Administrator everything he did could of had her involved.

I'm not sure, but in your gif, is Kirito fucking Inoda?

This is Sinon and Hebeshima in the real world.

Such an ending would also have shocked everyone. Sinon will turn Kirito into a girl and then Inoda will fuck Kirito.

This is from outside the game.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Full-time jobs may be needed but suck when they don't let you time for hobbies XP FINALLY got time to play the new scene and...yep, to nobody's surprise, Asuna completely fell, became Inoda's willing sex friend "just for the quarantine"...and is now gonna be fucked silly every day so she agrees to it being forever, of course

She was talking about when Inoda got hurt protecting Asuna from thugs in Part 1. She explained during the final ritual sex. Funny thing was we found out the thugs were lured by Inoda so the entire situation was setup by him. This was back when he didn't have any backup. Just him planing and do all work made me actually root for him. But now with Administrator everything he did could of had her involved.



This is from outside the game.

Clearly, the thugs were all Administrator-worshippers in secret too ;P!

 

[drag0nf6y]

regardless of how this ends, Kirito alone or with Suguha, the only thing I'm sure of is that the writing is going to be shit, just finish this game.

it's all cause of those ci-en fans that fujino sensei rushed the game. they literally forced him to give them irl scenes asap. if fujino sensei just went the way he originally planned, building everything bit by bit with proper character development, the writing would've been so much better. the last update was easily the worst, the writing felt straight up trash. asuna kept repeating the same thing the whole time, and it didn’t hit at all compared to the rainy night or treehouse scene. i just hope he takes his time now (like at least 4 months) and brings the story back to what it was in part 1 and the first half of part 2

 

[por12]

There will be no third party, Fujino says

we got no work or gym clothes sex scenes,unlikely the game will stop at 1.0 if there is not a 3rd part

 

[No-Nonon]

we got no work or gym clothes sex scenes,unlikely the game will stop at 1.0 if there is not a 3rd part

Yeah, he'll at least polish some of the recent super rushed scenes and CGs.

 

[Aniky Light]

we got no work or gym clothes sex scenes,unlikely the game will stop at 1.0 if there is not a 3rd part

In my opinion that title screen where Inoda fucks Asuna in her work clothes simply indicates that we have moved on to real-life sex.

 

[ASDZXCQWER1321]

In my opinion that title screen where Inoda fucks Asuna in her work clothes simply indicates that we have moved on to real-life sex.

so this title screen has been around for a very long time

 

[ASDZXCQWER1321]

it's all cause of those ci-en fans that fujino sensei rushed the game. they literally forced him to give them irl scenes asap. if fujino sensei just went the way he originally planned, building everything bit by bit with proper character development, the writing would've been so much better. the last update was easily the worst, the writing felt straight up trash. asuna kept repeating the same thing the whole time, and it didn’t hit at all compared to the rainy night or treehouse scene. i just hope he takes his time now (like at least 4 months) and brings the story back to what it was in part 1 and the first half of part 2

it is no longer possible to return the story to a normal course, namely the relationship between Asuna and Inoda, since the most important events in their relationship have already passed