RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.80] [Fujino]

[mos555]

actually i have questions mostly about asuna and liz(she is even worse than asuna in my opinion), the rest of the characters are not bad for ntr's story. suguha - she was blackmailed, drugged, she enjoyed sex, but she knew hebeshima was a bad guy, and when she was able to get rid of the evidence, she left him, +- the same thing happened with sinon, she loved him in the beginning, she tolerated his betrayals for a while, didn't want to follow his example regarding suguha's issues, and in the end she left him and took revenge on him, alice - i don't like mind control as a tag, but here it was not bad, kyoko - pretty weak storyline, but okay

It's funny how initially Liz and Suguha had similar reasons. Both wanted Kirito for themselves, but Liz doesn't care about Kirito's feelings, and Suguha, on the contrary, worries that Kirito will take it hard to break up with Asuna. But at the moment, I don't understand what Liz is doing at all. She kind of still wants Kirito for herself, but she's disillusioned with him. He kind of hates Inoda, but at the same time he plays BDSM mistress with him. And it all looks pretty weird - BDSM mistress Liz and Kirito, who suddenly wanted to be humiliated. If you throw out the information that was in the perks, it seems that Suguha and Liz will take Kirito for themselves and humiliate him. Although the most likely thing is that Liz's character will change again and she will suddenly become Inoda's obedient bitch.

I wonder how the game would be if Asuna was the protagonist instead of Kirito like in the game Naughtyville Town Revelation

It would have been a completely different game, especially if Asuna had fucked multiple men instead of just Inoda. It would be very pathetic - you're playing an NTR game as a female character, but all the events are about finding Inoda, chatting with Inoda, and having sex with Inoda.

 

[4-kun]

Why can't we see stars during the day? Because the sun is too bright.
As long as Kirito remains Asuna's boyfriend, I doubt Sugou would waste energy on some ugly, obese pig around her.
Besides—according to Fujino's setup—Sugou is only out on medical parole, relying on Shadow Fox for intel. Why would Shadow Fox even bother reporting Inoda's antics to him?

Go on—I’m happy to dissect every ‘plot hole’ you think is glaring.

Nah, my active phase is long gone. I just drop by occasionally to throw in some sarcastic bs and move on. I don't even care for the story

 

[mos555]

Nah, my active phase is long gone. I just drop by occasionally to throw in some sarcastic bs and move on. I don't even care for the story

Envy. Although, thanks to Asuna, I'm cooled to this game . I'm just wondering how this whole maelstrom of genius and absurdity will end.

 

[ASDZXCQWER1321]

Nah, my active phase is long gone. I just drop by occasionally to throw in some sarcastic bs and move on. I don't even care for the story

in fact, when I first joined the forum 2-3 months ago, I wanted Fujino to release the game endlessly and have a 3rd part, so that there would be more sex scenes and so on, but time has passed and I just want the game to end and I don't care about the ending anymore, I just want to see if it will be the obvious NTR ending or Fujino will come up with something

 

[Aniky Light]

Envy. Although, thanks to Asuna, I've also lost interest in this game. I'm just wondering how this whole maelstrom of genius and absurdity will end.

it will end in a mess, that in the end you will say: I have never seen a worse ending than this xD

 

[mos555]

in fact, when I first joined the forum 2-3 months ago, I wanted Fujino to release the game endlessly and have a 3rd part, so that there would be more sex scenes and so on, but time has passed and I just want the game to end and I don't care about the ending anymore, I just want to see if it will be the obvious NTR ending or Fujino will come up with something

Fujino took the concepts of "discomfort and suffering from NTR gaming" to a new level. People suffer from the fact that this game just exists. A genius! He deserves to be on a par with Hideo Kojima.

it will end in a mess, that in the end you will say: I have never seen a worse ending than this xD

Or vice versa: "Is this the end? Is it over? Thank god! I've never felt better!"

 

[Aniky Light]

O viceversa: "È la fine? È finita? Grazie a Dio! Non mi sono mai sentito meglio!"

then Fujino arrives: did you think it was over?, here is the third part ehehe

 

[mos555]

then Fujino arrives: did you think it was over?, here is the third part ehehe View attachment 4746805

I even wonder what it would be about. Sinon helped Kirito make a penis bigger than Inoda's, and Asuna begins to cheat on Inoda with Kirito. Karmic Circle. I'd like to see it.

 

[4-kun]

Envy. Although, thanks to Asuna, I'm cooled to this game . I'm just wondering how this whole maelstrom of genius and absurdity will end.

I mean, for one, I want to see how the stories of Suguha, Sinon, and the Admin end. And generally, just out of principle—I've been following the game and the thread for almost all of Part 2, so I'll just stick around until the end.

 

[seifukulover]

Fujino: Everyone hates my NTR story now, so for part 3 I'm going to kill off Inoda and turn this into a Kirito harem game like it should have been all along

 

[Aniky Light]

Fujino: Everyone hates my NTR story now, so for part 3 I'm going to kill off Inoda and turn this into a Kirito harem game like it should have been all along

the third part where Asuna finds out that Kirito hid the true size of his dick and then jumps on him and begs to be fucked by him xD

 

[Queen_Nothing]

then Fujino arrives: did you think it was over?, here is the third part ehehe View attachment 4746805

I for one would legitimately love it. No more endless, drawn out build up, just non-stop stealth-sex/cheating-sex all over the place. With Kirito either still kept in the dark about it, or fully into enjoying watching it.

 

[mos555]

I mean, for one, I want to see how the stories of Suguha, Sinon, and the Admin end. And generally, just out of principle—I've been following the game and the thread for almost all of Part 2, so I'll just stick around until the end.

The same thing. I'll just sit here and wait for it to end.

Fujino: Everyone hates my NTR story now, so for part 3 I'm going to kill off Inoda and turn this into a Kirito harem game like it should have been all along

As long as it's a harem where all the girls cheat on Kirito. Fujino can't do it any other way. I don't think anyone hates his game. Rather, it's just that certain moments cause confusion. But it's all a matter of taste.

 

[Aniky Light]

It's weird because Asuna doesn't care what Kirito is doing, she goes straight to Inoda as if his only priority

 

[Aniky Light]

As long as it's a harem where all the girls cheat on Kirito. Fujino can't do it any other way. I don't think anyone hates his game. Rather, it's just that certain moments cause confusion. But it's all a matter of taste

luckily not all girls cheat on Kirito, although I wouldn't use the plural, also because I don't see a certain relationship with Kirito and therefore they can fuck whoever they want

 

[Aniky Light]

Ewhat if at the end of the game Fujino decided to make a poll asking if he should make a third part?
I would vote NO

 

[mos555]

It's weird because Asuna doesn't care what Kirito is doing, she goes straight to Inoda as if his only priority

For some reason, Fujino doesn't want Asuna to fuck with anyone other than Inoda. Therefore, in any situation, either Inoda is nearby, or Asuna goes to him. Even Sugo hadn't fucked her, which was weird. If you remove Kirito, then this is a romantic novel about the nascent relationship between Asuna and Inoda.

P\s At some point, it really seems that Kirito is superfluous in this story. As if he only hinders the development of true love.

 

[darkbatVX]

I'm not writing about ALO in general. I'm writing all this based on what you wrote earlier.

It's just that the discussion has shifted to the fact that Asuna allegedly has a reason for cheating in the form of how you said that Kirito did not fully consolidate Asuna's love. But Fujino's game begins with the fact that Asuna's status says "my dearest man, my future husband, we are going to America" and how inconsistent and stupid her actions look from this.
Asuna looks like a silly 14-year-old girl in this game:
"Asuna, show me your boobs!"
"What are you? I have a boyfriend!"
"I'm such a poor wretch, I've never seen boobs."
"Oh well, okay then. Look at this!"

"Asuna, help me massage my thighs."
"OK"
Kirito comes in, displeased. Asuna:
"How dare you not trust me? I'm the most loyal girl in the world!"
In a second:
"Asuna jerk me off. I'm suffering so much, we're friends."
"Ahhh, a friendly jerk off! Of course!"

"Oh, you raped me!"
"But I like you so much, I couldn't resist. Was it friendly?"
"Friendly rape? Well good. I forgive you, we're friends again, but don't bother me like that anymore."

"What if you give me a sexual favor every week for no reason? Just as a friend, because I'm so unhappy."
"Well, since we're friends, then fine"
A whisper in Asuna's head:
"You have a fiance, what are you doing?"
"Me? Nothing! It's all friendly, it's a special social help for people who don't have sex."

And this kind of crap goes on the whole game. I wrote that Fujino chose the stupidest NTR persona pattern possible. Asuna is cheating for no reason. Usually in games, the authors come up with something - the seal of lust, illness, blackmail (even Inoda and Kyoko's sex is better thought out than Asuna's betrayal), money debts. And the only reason Asuna has is that she is a stupid little bimbo in terms of her level of development.

Where is the "real person with principles and boundaries" in all of this? All of Asuna's principles and boundaries end where Inoda's desires are. And this has been going on since the beginning of the game in the first part, and continues to this day. However, this is no longer relevant, because Inoda has finally crushed Asuna's brain.

Your partial quote is misleading. To clarify: what does 'that' refer to in my original phrase 'compare to that'?
Is this a dialogue to you, or just performance art of *selective hearing* and *self-coronation*?

 

[seifukulover]

the third part where Asuna finds out that Kirito hid the true size of his dick and then jumps on him and begs to be fucked by him xD
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Speaking of dick sizes, I've been wondering this about SAO canon. Can't the male players just give themselves big dicks at character creation? I'm sure this feature would be very popular, along with the durability potion.

 

[Aniky Light]

For some reason, Fujino doesn't want Asuna to fuck with anyone other than Inoda. Therefore, in any situation, either Inoda is nearby, or Asuna goes to him. Even Sugo hadn't fucked her, which was weird. If you remove Kirito, then this is a romantic novel about the nascent relationship between Asuna and Inoda.

P\s At some point, it really seems that Kirito is superfluous in this story. As if he only hinders the development of true love.

in fact Inoda complains when he sees Kirito fucking his "wife"
Inoda: How dare that micro penis fuck my wife
it's like if in this game Kirito was the bad one who tries to steal the girl