RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[oozaru2023]

I also think that Nishida's Asuna story looks stupider than Fujino's version, here she thinks more with her vagina than her head, anyway, that's what NTR is about, although Suguha's ending is what I was always looking for, finally someone will tell me He listened xd, I had written a summarized fanfic of an alternative ending where Asuna is the loser in the end, I will leave it here

Spoiler: unfogiven xd

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[AlterInfernalAllius]

Oh yea never notice that. Guess Fujino just give Asuna's avatar model a new hair color but kept her real world eye color.

I actually wrote about it back in Pixiv after the ending of Part 1 before the China issues started, seems his model had 'issues' actually when using the blue color for the eyes or something? Didn't quite understood the answer, but it was basically that he wasn't changing it because of that.

I also think that Nishida's Asuna story looks stupider than Fujino's version, here she thinks more with her vagina than her head, anyway, that's what NTR is about, although Suguha's ending is what I was always looking for, finally someone will tell me He listened xd, I had written a summarized fanfic of an alternative ending where Asuna is the loser in the end, I will leave it here

Spoiler: unfogiven xd

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Yeah, Asuna was written extra-retarded in this one, even if we tried to blame the Hypno App messing with her brain at first, afterwards she either went full retard or the app just plain out fried her common sense, having basically no reaction to Nishida confessing all the reasons she left Kirito were completely made up is dumb XP

I remember reading your end, really liked it, is a lot more 'karmic' compared to the 'kinda happy' one it the actual story went for even if it was still kinda satisfying for me (I prefer yours being more of a 'Suguha wins by being herself' over the 'Suguha won because it was her plan all along', but that's more for me being a fan of her actual character, I don't mind it being a Reverse NTR scheme of hers much)...but yeah, Asuna calling her daughter with Nishida Yui felt like the ultimate disrespect, honestly if the actual AI Yui had any shred of dignity left she should have immediately stolen all the money Nishida got from his ex-wife with the hypno app as revenge for it XD

 

[oozaru2023]

I actually wrote about it back in Pixiv after the ending of Part 1 before the China issues started, seems his model had 'issues' actually when using the blue color for the eyes or something? Didn't quite understood the answer, but it was basically that he wasn't changing it because of that.



Yeah, Asuna was written extra-retarded in this one, even if we tried to blame the Hypno App messing with her brain at first, afterwards she either went full retard or the app just plain out fried her common sense, having basically no reaction to Nishida confessing all the reasons she left Kirito were completely made up is dumb XP

I remember reading your end, really liked it, is a lot more 'karmic' compared to the 'kinda happy' one it the actual story went for even if it was still kinda satisfying for me (I prefer yours being more of a 'Suguha wins by being herself' over the 'Suguha won because it was her plan all along', but that's more for me being a fan of her actual character, I don't mind it being a Reverse NTR scheme of hers much)...but yeah, Asuna calling her daughter with Nishida Yui felt like the ultimate disrespect, honestly if the actual AI Yui had any shred of dignity left she should have immediately stolen all the money Nishida got from his ex-wife with the hypno app as revenge for it XD

Thanks, I had actually added some dialogues and situations where her classmates find out that she cheated on Kirito with an old man and her friends Liz, Lisbeth, and Klein turned their backs on her, even Kirito arrived at her house. Suguha consoles him by saying that she will be with him. She always does, even Yui asks Kirito now who my mom will be, I even thought about adding an argument between Suguha and Asuna with a slap included at the end, it seemed redundant to me so I left it there

 

[Castoria13]

Btw, Does anyone here keep the videos of this game's scene?

If you have it, please send it (link or the video itself)

 

[SinonNTR]

Does anyone know which KK models he used? A link would be greatly appreciated.

 

[Jeycii_]

I actually enjoyed this one...sure, still quite nonsensical NTR plot, but it wasn't stupidly evil to the extreme towards Kirito and it ACTUALLY fully focused on the NTR guy stealing the girl rather than humiliating the MC at every corner and ruining their life completely. Plus, the plot-twist at the end that Suguha had been the one behind the Hypno App from the beginning to get her out of her way was VERY fun XP



Nishida is a minor character in SAO, a fisherman old man in his 50s Kirito and Asuna meet briefly during their honeymoon. Like Agil, for some reason lately he has emerged as a niche-target-as-NTR-guy towards Asuna in SAO works, mainly in Pixiv, despite, you know, being so old he probably would realistically struggle to even get hard, let alone to fuck a girl a third of his age better than a teenager This particular work is from a guy called Airuru that has been making an animation story using Koikatsu models (Same program Fujino uses for this game's models) to make a NTR story centered around Nishida first brainwashing and then fully 'stealing' Asuna from Kirito using a mix of the cliche Hypno App from Hentai and just plain out plot-convenience, it's been of surprisingly high quality and length. What Ooazaru linked there were the last bits, but here is the author's Pixiv Fanbox page if you wanna scroll back to find the whole thing:

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holy shit that was a long and detailed reply. thanks for the info, but next time its ok if you just reply with: an old guy who once helped them and is now going full netori mode

and tyvm also for the link, it looks great to have lengthy sao hentai content

 

[Jeycii_]

users/215160 from pixiv is making a "comic" of Fujino's story, it's in japanese, but it's interesting nonetheless

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is this his acc? i cant find anything else except for 3 pics

 

[kinglionheart]

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is this his acc? i cant find anything else except for 3 pics

It is the account. With Pixiv you need to log into a user account that set settings to view explicit content to see R-18 content.

 

[Jeycii_]

Btw, Does anyone here keep the videos of this game's scene?

If you have it, please send it (link or the video itself)

2 Links from Londin. May be the same vids, i didnt check
https://f95zone.to/threads/sword-ar...agic-part-2-v0-32-fujino.154352/post-13210274
https://f95zone.to/threads/sword-ar...agic-part-2-v0-32-fujino.154352/post-13113988

1 made from oozaru2023

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[Jeycii_]

It is the account. With Pixiv you need to log into a user account that set settings to view explicit content to see R-18 content.

ah yea i always forget about that part, tyvm

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

holy shit that was a long and detailed reply. thanks for the info, but next time its ok if you just reply with: an old guy who once helped them and is now going full netori mode

and tyvm also for the link, it looks great to have lengthy sao hentai content

Sorry, I have a tendency to be overly detailed sometimes. Also, the boredom in the thread is starting to settle in with how long it's been since Fujino said anything, can't wait for his April Fools' post saying he quits making games and everyone who forgets the date taking it seriously and panicking or something like that XD

 

[Jeycii_]

Sorry, I have a tendency to be overly detailed sometimes. Also, the boredom in the thread is starting to settle in with how long it's been since Fujino said anything, can't wait for his April Fools' post saying he quits making games and everyone who forgets the date taking it seriously and panicking or something like that XD

Its all good. I just dont want to you overexert yourself for things like that.. at least not for me xd
Lmao, poor fujino fans... i also tend to get confused by april fools pranks cuz i always forget about that day

and holy shit those SAO comic stuff looks freaking amazing.
Is there a way to massdownload all or do i have to save each page by my hand? Not that im not used to this kind of monkey method xd

+ asuna sideboobs and high fish net stockings are top tier outfits *nosebleed*

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Its all good. I just dont want to you overexert yourself for things like that.. at least not for me xd
Lmao, poor fujino fans... i also tend to get confused by april fools pranks cuz i always forget about that day

and holy shit those SAO comic stuff looks freaking amazing.
Is there a way to massdownload all or do i have to save each page by my hand? Not that im not used to this kind of monkey method xd

+ asuna sideboobs and high fish net stockings are top tier outfits *nosebleed*

I have a Pixiv add-on for Chrome called Pixiv Downloader myself that I use for some stuff I like that's too long to download by hand, not sure if it works for other browser but there should be similar tools even if you're not using Chrome.

 

[Jeycii_]

I have a Pixiv add-on for Chrome called Pixiv Downloader myself that I use for some stuff I like that's too long to download by hand, not sure if it works for other browser but there should be similar tools even if you're not using Chrome.

i will def try this, i went through all his posts and left likes and comments, i hope thiswill help him somehow xd

 

[AnzaiNTR]

Damn, it's always boring waiting, but I hope he's rested and worked on the game a bit, I'm looking forward to a preview... damn, April hasn't even started, another long month of waiting, may we have good progress in the next update

 

[anonsuit]

first part was ok. but there was a lot of missed opportunity for virtual sex. instead of going for virtual rape it would have been better if the characters had virtual sex. during the time were the girl was wiling to play girlfriend to the sly guy but not have sex. I mean virtual sex is not real sex "right????". and it would have played more nicely into a corruption angle (her wondering about real dick after tasting the virtual one). besides that, the side stories where slightly annoying and lacking in scenes.

 

[Jeycii_]

first part was ok. but there was a lot of missed opportunity for virtual sex. instead of going for virtual rape it would have been better if the characters had virtual sex. during the time were the girl was wiling to play girlfriend to the sly guy but not have sex. I mean virtual sex is not real sex "right????". and it would have played more nicely into a corruption angle (her wondering about real dick after tasting the virtual one). besides that, the side stories where slightly annoying and lacking in scenes.

you clearly dont seem to know or understand the process of corruption. no way a sheltered, "pure" and "high society raised" girl like asuna would have sex with inoda that quickly and without any believable reasons. i think this isnt the game for you if you are here just for a quick: meet n f*ck game.
the side stories are there so the players get some action during the corruption process. and if he had made the scenes any longer, it would had certainly prolonged the progress of the main story

i believe p1 was especially good and well done. i like slow burn corruption. it makes the results just more juicy when they finally fall...

 

[anonsuit]

you clearly dont seem to know or understand the process of corruption. no way a sheltered, "pure" and "high society raised" girl like asuna would have sex with inoda that quickly and without any believable reasons. i think this isnt the game for you if you are here just for a quick: meet n f*ck game.
the side stories are there so the players get some action during the corruption process. and if he had made the scenes any longer, it would had certainly prolonged the progress of the main story

i believe p1 was especially good and well done. i like slow burn corruption. it makes the results just more juicy when they finally fall...

if she is already toying with the guys "real" cock (as shown in the infirmary scene) I do not see why she would not have virtual sex. there are like 5 scenes where she constantly says no sex while playing with his dick. and that is also considering that mutual masturbation does happen as a peeping event in the virtual world. you can clearly add the scenes I mentioned during that time period where a logical argument of (virtual sex is not real sex) would lead to actual sex instead of the contrived notion of thunder storm+ kirito's uncharged phone+ him sleeping.

hell you can have things like secondary accounts. One that the MC knows about and another one where the girl just stands there and he does not recognize her. all I am saying is that the virtual world was not used to it's full potential considering that the MC is established as a hardcore gamer.

Please do not engage in a straw-man by saying I do not understand the process of corruption. the truth is that you do not even know the things I know or not know about.

 

[kinglionheart]

if she is already toying with the guys "real" cock (as shown in the infirmary scene) I do not see why she would not have virtual sex. there are like 5 scenes where she constantly says no sex while playing with his dick. and that is also considering that mutual masturbation does happen as a peeping event in the virtual world. you can clearly add the scenes I mentioned during that time period where a logical argument of (virtual sex is not real sex) would lead to actual sex instead of the contrived notion of thunder storm+ kirito's uncharged phone+ him sleeping.

Please do not engage in a straw-man by saying I do not understand the process of corruption. the truth is that you do not even know the things I know or not know about.

It is part of SAO lore that the characters treat the VR world same as the real world. She would not want to do stuff in VR that she would not do in real life. Like blowjobs and sex, if not in real world then not in VR either.

It is part of the corruption that eventually she will change to see virtual sex is okay because it is not the same as real sex. Then finally she will be okay with real sex since virtual sex is good.

 

[anonsuit]

It is part of SAO lore that the characters treat the VR world same as the real world. She would not want to do stuff in VR that she would not do in real life. Like blowjobs and sex, if not in real world then not in VR either.

It is part of the corruption that eventually she will change to see virtual sex is okay because it is not the same as real sex. Then finally she will be okay with real sex since virtual sex is good.

Right that is what I mean. even if the characters think the virtual is "real" there is an argument to be made against it. But what ends up happening in part one is that real sex happens before the virtual one. witch I think is a shame. all instances os sex in the virtual world are rape, and only one mutual masturbation one. there may have been a hint of virtual sex happening when the MC Disconnects before the other 2 but it is not shown.